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Posted: 11 years ago
hmmm guessing.. asad break the rule...
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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant update...loved it
rules were super cute...
waiting eagerly for next update
do continue soon
take care and thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Zoya will break the rule and probably Asad will marry her...!!!
I sooo want that to happen...!!!

So finally they are a couple...!!!

Yayyy!!!

Brilliant Update Bubb!!

Loved it!! Going back up to read it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
what a rules by asad...
too good...
may be zoya will break rules at first...
superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb .. their rules are too good .. so excited to know who will break their rules first
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Posted: 11 years ago
comment updated page 53 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Maliha-



Frstly a Yo from Sid fah the awesom awesome update,.. 😎

this update had every every thing in it,..
insecurities from past,..
fear of betrayed and being used,..
a feeling of posession and owing on the fellow partner,..
trust on each other,..
emotional attachment,..
and much much more,..
i just loved it,..❤️

the most sesy moment: when he reserved a claim on her lips,..☺️
the most scary moment: when she thought punishment of his deed,..🥺
though his punishment is more sweet,..❤️
i just hope she breaks some rule of him,,.😆
the most funniest moment: when Mr. Khan had to wear th watch of competitor just cox Zoe gifted him that,..

So a drawback of being in relationship witha businessman is to keep your bf happy by giving him his fav brands i.e. buying his products,..😆
i dooon know why,.. but reading this ZOe,.. bebo came to mae mind,.. cox she is also a bimbo like this Zoe,..😆

and how much boring was fah ASYA to watch that movie with each other,..
cox Zoe already knew whats gonna happen next,.. and Asad bichara's suspense was broken again n again by his GF,..🤪

now question: who is gonna break th trust frst,..🤔
i wish no-one,.. but as i already know yah,.. then smthing is already on th way,.🥱

List:

From AAK

  1. kiss @ anytime,..
    i dont feel AAk would ever kiss her in public or th time when Zoe dont feel doing it,..he would do in private,..and i think zoe would hav no prob,.
  2. Welcome @ anytime,..
    he would be welcomed,.. unless something v.serious arise from th past,.. and Zoe dont feel easy sharing about
  3. Thirdly, Spoiling thing
    she is a star thing,..so this cant be ever a reason of conflict between them
  4. No backing off,..
    it shouldnt be a prob,.. cox Zoe already said no hurting so she would also refrain from doing this,.. but who knows Jaali D',.. who may kidnap a good writer and write a sad thing to read,..🥱
from Zoe
  1. nothing more than kissing is allowed
    Asad may easily follow this one,..but who knows,..😆
  2. No more dirty jokes
    this one,.. Asad cant hold himself from doing so,.. 😎
  3. No questions related to personal life/ past
    i just wonder if asad comes across smthing worst from Zoe's past,.. then can still he hold himself??
  4. that he will never hurt her
    hurting thing only depends if Asad thinks to back off,..if he would break any rule then would hurt her,.
  5. A return Gift
    i dooont think so,.cox he is always ready fah smthing tangible,..🤗
so in short you have many ways to go ON,..any small thing may just divert them from their path,..
and no-one may guess the exact thing playing in your mind,..😆😆

i just wanna you to update asap,.. 😳
and just saw mine comment,.. i kinda wrote a mini-OS on your update,..


Aww thanks Sid 😎
but did he tell u to say yo or u r misusing his name ?? 🤓

Now coming to ur comment ,,
Man I wasn't expecting such a response from everyone for just a simple question of mine 😲😆 but seriously I am soo happy ,, feeling like dancing but at the same time nervous too with soo much expectations 😳
Aww thanks Maliha !!
I am glad that you liked it 😳
Yup it has everything because its one of the special updates ❤️
haha lips r claimed lets see how much time he will take for whole Zoya ☺️
she was quite serious about the punishment 😉
haha yeah poor Zoe isn't aware of much about Zosad ,, personally and professionally both 😆
Aww sometimes I imagine her too and even some other actresses I don't know its just because I am watching too many movies these days 😕😆
well rules r made to be broken and Don loves breaking rules and laws 😎
yes he would never kiss her in public and private --- ermm --- oh err --- well lets wait for the update to know that 😳😆
haha yeah she won't back off but did u notice she is having lack of trust on him too which may lead to anything 😲😉
I don't know I guess I am not gonna comment on Zoya's side 😈
hahaha Don rocks no one can read my mind 😎
I will try my best to update sooon ,,
yeah u did 😲😆 take out some time to write a full OS on friendship 😡
but u know what I just love your mini OS 🤗
soo much that it made me write a tiny miny OS on your comment tooo 🤣
Edited by --Bubble007-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
The rules were mind blowing ...
Loved the way they gifted each other...
I hope Zoya gets out from her past through Asad love...
Continue soon...
~JAZ~
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was such a sweet chapter :) Loved the rules part.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks 😳

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