SaHil TS: A Honeymoon, Compelled Pt 3, Pg 15 (01.08.14)

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Is this it or is there going to be a continuation? I want to read abut when they go back to Bhopal and Rehan and Tanveer's reaction to their intimacy.

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flora212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Where is the next update? 😭

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Tina Malhotra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Its like Hotness personified!! Awesome!!!

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nnnnnnn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Tamara 😃

I've been reading this over and over since you last updated, hoping to get the next part soon.

BUt it's been sooo long 😭😭😭

please continue it 😳

pleaseee

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Tamara27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: pattiala
WOW ⭐️
It was amazing dear.
The whole scene was very romantic especially the way Sanam got jealous of Nida. Nd Aahil was just awesum. What is he planning to do with Sanam in their honeymoon suite?
Plzzz do write more.
Thnx 4 d pm.

Haha, hopefully you read to the end and figured out exactly what he did with her 😆

Thanks so much for the wonderful comment!

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Tamara27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: kals82
that is nice... and now impatiently waiting for the next part...
update soon

Thanks Kals - If you read to the end, I hope your patience won out ;-)

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Tamara27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan
Superb and fabulous! Please write more of this story. I know it's a TS, but please make it into an SS! I just loved it to bits!

Haha!

Y'know Mandy, I was actually thinking of adding another part to this... where the truth of the marriage is revealed... but I am not sure if it would ruin the essence of the TS. I shall see how it goes.

Thanks so much, love!

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Tamara27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh
Oh my!! That was one kiss and I feel so hot. Well, safe to say you and SaHil are Lethal.. ;)
Oh godd this was superb!!

"Oh baby, of course you're going to scream..." he said wickedly as he smacked her butt
OH MY GOD!! That line made me all gooeyy and crazy!! Godd!!!

I think that is about one of my favourite lines I've ever written!

Hahahaha!!!

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Tamara27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: nikki.171
You so need to continue this where they clear out their feelings. At least I am hoping you will.
PM please?

So many want a continuation. I will think about it, I promise.

I am just not sure if it will ruin the story.

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#140

Please continue this! They desperately need to have a talk and I so want to read about Tanveer's reaction to this development (it's gonna be hilarious)!

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