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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: laks_vish
oh bubble not again another cliffy...awesome update ..hope you are preparing for Eid!

I am just kinda preparing u all for the next scene ,,

thats why I stopped there !!

Thanks 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

yup Eid is on tuesday I am soo excited 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: kank_dah
poor asad feel bad for him nd terrible for zoya,as everyone around her just played with her existence.continue soon

yeah thats the point no one was sincere with her ever !!

Thanks for commenting 😊

Will deffo try to update it sooon !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Amulya9
awesome update...
I knew it... after this kiss ...Zoe vl ruin d moment
Zoe said Its a mistake 🥺 😭 my poor asad 😒
bubble u made him break all furniture 😡
I love it though bt still hurts seeing asad like that

He never knew her reaction would be the worst and unbearable for him. Only if he knew then he would have waited for some more time. He was damn curious now to know what was haunting her so badly !

aww asad. .I love him bass.

saxena 😡 is so so bad 🤢
wat Zoe vl do now.. 😕 😭 ohh bubble save her
update soon 😛

Thanks Amulya 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

yeah she said soo but u know about her feelings na so its not a mistake for sure

he will be fine don't worry 😊

I am trying to save her only by letting go the past

Will try my best !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: imcooldude
hay Bubble what&why do u do it yar?

here I was hopeing for "AsYa"to confess but got annoying Chapter. Really Dissapointed Buddy

Heyy ,,

I am sorry to disappoint u but seriously its a dark story ,,

and a very sad one !!

I did mention it quite a few times I am sorry still if I have hurt u

they will confess for sure but not now ,,

and its a happy ending aswell ,,

but I suppose that u all have to show some patience 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: asyafreva
Ya allah!!
What all has Zoya/Zohura gone through...

I can't even think...

How could Mrs. Saxena be so cruel...?

Or is it just a trick by you to fool us...?

Never mind...

It was a very well written update...

Agla update soon and longer...!

Well its gonna be worse Aashka

no its not a trick ,,

I just stopped to prepare u all for what's coming next ,,

Thanks 😊

I am glad that you liked it !!

will deffo update a longer one soon 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Linsie
congrats on new thread...

Thanks Linsie 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Amulya9
congratulations fr d new thread 🥳

Thanks Amulya 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Thanks Amulya😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
yeah she said soo but u know about her feelings na so its not a mistake for sure
he will be fine don't worry😊
I am trying to save her only by letting go the past
Will try my best !!