Th#5 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 14 to 17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1011

Awesome update

Loving how the story is progressing👏

Zoya found out the real meaning of what Asad said to her in German 😆

At least Zoya is happy that she is giving life to her new feelings

Hate that Mrs Saxena for doing this to Zoya who trusted her... Feel bad for Zoya that she was being used for such bad deeds...😭

I hope Zoya will be able to stand up for herself if Mrs Saxena is going to do something against her...

Continue soon!

Thanks for the pm😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1012

Originally posted by: aniha20
Wah wah bubba..This update makes me crazy about present...

He is eyeing his mark and she knows that meaning too. He is so embrassed man and nisha annoys me too she's there at wrong time.
Mrs.saxena family is absolutely 🤬
cant wait about present
update soon

Thanks Aniha 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

haha no more Nisha now 😆

Will be updating sooon !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1013

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

it was wrong na bubble 😭

yeah !

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1014

Originally posted by: TaiLung
Loved it bubble
Asya skype chat was awesome.
Asad's stammering
Beautifully written loved it

Omg zoya's past
I dont know how she lived those moments
But she is strong inside
She didnt take any wrong decision
Thats gr8. Hope she will forget the past and live a happy life

Its great u tried a really really different story where u are trying to say ghat the world is not always abt fairytale. These kind s of life is also there
its definitely need appreciation.
U are doing a great job dear.
Negative comments always there when try something different
I think thats when u succeed.

I dont know what I wrote. Using phone. Its so difficult to type with one hand
Lets stop ranting😆

Thank You soo much for ur kind words buddy 😊

it really means alot to me !!

yup she will forget everything one day ,,

yeah thats all I want to put in people's mind but I guess people still believe in fairytales !!

thanks again ,,

I have no words to describe how happy I am to read ur comment 😳

haha its ok 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1015

Ussii din tohhh thrd banayii thi bubbbaa 🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1016

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

phir theek hai ... i thought u r planning another dangerous wala update... lol

haha no nothing dangerous for some time ,,

and also Nisha knows Asad as he is from Germany ,,

she mentioned in in chapter 2 or 3 I guess !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1017

Originally posted by: -KitKit-
Awww cute Asad 😳
Loved the update... ❤️

Sorry for late 😔

But I loved it.. ❤️

Continue sooon..

Thanks Maahi 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

aww don't be sorry ,,

Will be updating sooon 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1018

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Ab i wany happy updates jo hogaya so hogaya!! Eid ke din se depressed phir rahi hoon!! Reading it !! I m so sad!! When i thought abt the girls who would hav gone through it!! I shivered at that thought!! Ab itna aur zulm mat karo!!

Story is gonna stay normal for some time for sure ,,

I understand that (:

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1019

Originally posted by: maha2012
Bubba i love this story!! its dark but a cruel reality of life..
You've once again written a fantastic FF!!
I have full faith in you as writer!
there r many girls like Zohura today whose life gets ruined..but they deserve to live and move on..
Its sad the world still terms them as prostitutes..
but in Zohura's case she had nowhere to escape..
her beauty, innocence and young age became a punishment for her..
there was noone to help her..
A story for mature readers to deal with yet with a strong message👏
Although some will never understand the true essence n meaning..
carry on the amazing work!
love you❤️