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Posted: 11 years ago
Aish u can also sing some songs 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Bablu sorry i disappointed u but buddy it was not about being virgin did i said that. I accept its not possible u get a virgin partner & hell its not even my point even. The thing was Zoya was helpless 1st time but if i remember that scene she was already feeling disgusted & felt she lost her soul & frankly i think when a person realizes that they give there full strength 2 fight against injustice. Don't know what u planned in future but i know Zoya never wanted 2 b actress so why d hell she was sleeping wid directors 4 1 whole yr 2 get films. That was really disgusting 4 me 2 read i m sorry again if u feel bad or think i have a sick mind. Myb i m 2 old school. After that rape if she would have fought & walked out of there i wouldn't have complained but her sleeping wid different men was truly cheap i must say. & in d latest updt when that person whoever his name was came & give her money & asked 2 undress herself it felt like she was a prostitute so didn't she felt disgusted serving herself as a pleasure giving body. This might have been happening from 1 yr & she was meekly doing it that's gross. Whatever u say i still say she doesn't deserve Asad cuz if she would have loved him she would have told d whole truth b4 giving him false hopes didn't she thought after knowing her this dark side will Asad accept her. She would have 1st told d truth than started d relationship.


Things like such happens 2 ppl who r locked up otherwise nobody is that dumb 2 let them 2 rule over them.


Having said that baby don't get this 2 heart & ever forget i love u regardless of d fact that we have difference of opinion about this story. I still love u & will always & it doesn't change d fact that i love ur writing style. Hope it won't affect our frndship.😭

I think i m very old school

& Trust me Sasir just liked d post i was not bharoing anybody's kaan here.😳😆


I agree wid jas here!!
i wanted to say same things 😔
but couldn't say thinking u will feel bad!!
but couldn't control yaar!!
Zoya she disappointed !! okay i knw she was alone but she could hav talked nisha ! kuch to karti!!! instead of doing dat 😭
Edited by AsyaManeet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--



Thanks😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
she will get to know now for sure ,,
no she didn't do it with her own will she was stuck there !!
FB is gonna end in next one😊
I am feeling better now !!


it was wrong na bubble 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it bubble
Asya skype chat was awesome.
Asad's stammering
Beautifully written loved it

Omg zoya's past
I dont know how she lived those moments
But she is strong inside
She didnt take any wrong decision
Thats gr8. Hope she will forget the past and live a happy life

Its great u tried a really really different story where u are trying to say ghat the world is not always abt fairytale. These kind s of life is also there
its definitely need appreciation.
U are doing a great job dear.
Negative comments always there when try something different
I think thats when u succeed.

I dont know what I wrote. Using phone. Its so difficult to type with one hand
Lets stop ranting😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--



ohh I forgot to mention it openly but he did notice her in his room ,,
when he was trying to ignore the torture they were fighting in his room ,,
soo u can say he must have noticed her (:
haha and no raaz in here LoL !!


phir theek hai ... i thought u r planning another dangerous wala update... lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww cute Asad 😳
Loved the update... ❤️

Sorry for late 😔

But I loved it.. ❤️

Continue sooon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ab i wany happy updates jo hogaya so hogaya!! Eid ke din se depressed phir rahi hoon!! Reading it !! I m so sad!! When i thought abt the girls who would hav gone through it!! I shivered at that thought!! Ab itna aur zulm mat karo!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bubba i love this story!! its dark but a cruel reality of life..
You've once again written a fantastic FF!!
I have full faith in you as writer!
there r many girls like Zohura today whose life gets ruined..but they deserve to live and move on..
Its sad the world still terms them as prostitutes..
but in Zohura's case she had nowhere to escape..
her beauty, innocence and young age became a punishment for her..
there was noone to help her..
A story for mature readers to deal with yet with a strong message👏
Although some will never understand the true essence n meaning..
carry on the amazing work!
love you❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
It was amazing!!! Loved it a lot!!! Plz continue soon...


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