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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Main bahut emotional hogay 1st half mein...
Pata nai kyon !!!! I felt sumthng...
Wonderful updtd thy were
I loved both d updtd
2nd half was lvly.. Asad *sob*
Woh akhela ttha... Liked Maya alot... She is vry Nc..


Continue soon


Thank u Gowtu

I think the whole SS is quite heavy and emotional...hopefully last part will make is ok 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinks2911

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Unress

Saima Di!🤗

Happy Friendship Day!🤗

The update was AWESOME..👏

Two long parts to read and I still want to read more..😳

Zoya is staying at Asad's home..😳 Asad's home sounds beautiful.. But poor him.. Has to live alone and lead a lonely life..

Maya is really nice..😳 Introducing to everybody so that Zoya doesn't scared..😊

He wants Zoya to be formal but when she really is he gets disturbed..😔 Uff he is so complicated..😆

Poor Zoya!! What she must have gone through during testifying..😕 Asad was by her side as always..😳

Maya talked to Zoya about Asad.. 😃Nice that she told what a bewakoof Asad is..😆😆

Zoya is going to stay for some more time..😊 She has realised and will fight for her love I hope..😳

Asad taking a leave is quite shocking.. 😃He is so sincere.. Wish I was like him..😆

Great update Di..😳

Waiting for the next..😊

Love you! ❤️


Hey sweetheart

Happy friendship day to you too. May Allah bless u with everything beautiful.

😆 He really is complicated...may be needs some therapy too lol

Thank u so so much Pinks

Love u too 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

happy friendship day


🤗

You too Sasir, lots of love to u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice updates

Asad and zoya the feelings he is fighting it wouldn't indulge it and she doesn't know what it is
She asked for asad to be by the side and he can't give her and answer she doesn't want Dr.Khan
When he walked away she felt as if a part of her is lost
Aman asked him what is going on he say not phong more than doctor patient relation and that is all it would be
Zoya is hurt by his indifference when she came to visit in Bhopal and he couldn't help being sad when they drove off he couldn't work anymore
So zoya have healed and progress well she is a totally different person now
She have convince herself there is nothing between her and asad he is just her doctor and as she was going through a phase she was dependant on him
Really is that true ...asad and haider comes to take her to testify and asad is bowled over seeing her
So zoya pays asad no attention and he is feeling a pain inside and wonder y is she ignoring me
Zoya blown away with where she will be staying when she learn it is asad house she is shocked
Asad just 24 hr to hold it together she is tht close
Oh she thanks him for having her intoeducemto,everyone so she is not scared
They have a silent lunch and now she wants to walk in the garden with him 😉
Oh the walk in the garden is going good zoya compliment him thank him is grateful to him
And he is stuck he questioned her y is she so formal units she behaving like they r doctor patient
Isn't that what u r asad oh he walked away saying he have overlook the boundaries
Oh maya is sad when she learn zoya will be leaving she wished she wasn't his patient
Omg maya tells her about asad reactions abt her when he talks to aman every spare time he has
And how he looks at her and how she believes he has fallen for zoya but wouldn't step over his protocol
Oh zoya is scared he comforts her and calm her they speak through their eyes what the lips can't say
No one can sleep that nite she tossed and he prayed for strength of her to get through the court and a little for him to watch her walk away
So zoya was able to identify her attackers from a line up,with asad full support
The lawyer wants her to stay in town in case she has to testify so a week or more at asad house😊
Maya asked asad to tell zoya what he feels he reprimand her
Zoya remembers his support and reassurance he give her at the police station and know what she feels of him is more but he would never step ove his duty but she is determined once she is not his patient anymore she is not leaving without a fight for what this May be
Wow he took a leave of absence for her a whole 2 wks
She slept on sofa waiting for him like a wife maya is pushing him
He is not taking the bait oh zoya wakes up refreshed and looking for. Asad
He is in gym emmm shirtless hopefully
Continue


Thank you so so much Anopama

Am glad u liked it

Lol let's see if we can get Asad topless 😳

Always appreciate your feedbacks, make me smile 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

aww

nice
loved it
zoya is determined to give it a try
yayyy
plz update soon


Thank u so much Sasir 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Sis, I loved the update. I like the fact that Zoya will be fighting for whatever is between them at the moment and I hope she wacks his head for the delay, after he admits his feelings.

Glad that she tried her level best to act formally with him and it did hurt her.


I loved the 2 times he's trying to rebuild his confidence telling himself that she is there for less than 24 hours and then asking Allah to give him strength too to see her walk off.


I love him here for his desperation to stay away from her which he is not able to keep.


Loved it so much sis 🤗


Thank u so much ChocoBerry


Lol just for u I will make her whack him 😉


Mwah 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_

Its Amaazing...i cant even express what i feel :)


Thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SUCHARITA2014

AWESOME UPDT SAIMA DI PLZ UPDT NEXT PART VERRY SOON


Thank u so much

Will update by Tuesday 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Saima I read the story when i woke up but I dont remember if I wrote comments..wonderful update with wonderful people like humeira,haider,Maya,Asad...Well it feels good to atleast read in stories to be surrounded by good people...
Happy Friendship day!!

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