Aahil - UP and Dirty on Page 12 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

AGAIN! 😲

I really didn't expect you guys to like it so much. But I am so happy you did. Best feeling for a writer.

But please don't cry..🤗 Phantom is in his happy place now, Sanam called him her black sky.

A dribble of sunshine, Some rays of rain

One twisted concoction, magnificently vain.

To Sanam, Aahil is not predictable, Generically dribbling raindrops and rays of sun is portrayed. But he is not the usual, he is twisted but he is magnificent and so self absorbed at times, he is vain.

Unbroken but shattered, beautifully fragile

Grasping that tug, entwined till exile.

She discovers he doesn't break easily but he is shattered from within and his heart is fragile and beautiful. That heart she tugged and he grasped to it/her. Promising He would hold on to that feeling of love and remain entwined only to Sanam till death, hence the exile

Pained unshed tears, Ached defeated laugh

One dusting sand dunes, other sighing aftermath.

One day Sanam finds him in his breakeven state, when he is as usual telling her all in twisted lines, that he is to let her go, he struggles with sentences and he gives her random words " You, I ... that US... "but then takes a deep breathe and says "You deserve happiness and I am over, so I am setting you free."

He fumbles struggling to speak, " He is a good man, he will keep you happy... and why not after all You love Rehan."

Something snaps inside her, Sanam sees his unshed tears, he laughs defeated and stifles a broken cry.."I can never be the one you wish for!"

Sanam understands he is hurting but she is responsible, So she clears things. Screams at him that he is wrong. He knows nothing, and he never said so how was she know. Hence the lines - One dusting sand dunes - Sanam is dusting the huge misunderstanding he has created for himself. And he is sighing in relieved aftermath.

That dark canvas, black sky I just kissed.

Welcoming outbreak, glittering eclipse!

Finally coming to terms with what he just gave away, seeing him crumble in front of her, she cups his face and brushes her lips with his. She calls him her black sky.

Meaning, Not just star or moon or sun, the entire sky. Even though it's a dark canvas she will draw color on it.

Welcoming outbreak -

The kiss deepens and he is kissing back till they stop for some air.

Glittering eclipse! -

The eclipse is over, Their true feelings for one another is out in the open.

I love you! I voice between wet hiccupped daze,

Love you too! He chokes and a sob escapes

These are the most clear lines, they break down in each other's arms. He has told her everything till now but not worded the magic words but she does not wait, she says them first. And he confesses too.

Caressing his shadows, shielding his heart

Realizing "Fragile," was mine from the start!

She knows how fragile he is, how shattered, delicate and vulnerable he actually is and she is shielding him for life. She will caress his past. She welcomes him with all his baggage.

And she has now realized every thing she had purposely been ignorant of.

I was never over, even when I said so...

He tells her that in the end...

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I know you figured this, but I wanted to still explain. This was actually an unfinished OS that I had started on SaHil, all credit to sexy Tamara and her high funda pics and episode reviews, I was writing this for her only...

You praised this so much, I had to put things out in open for everyone.😃

Did I bore you,😳 don't praise me any more or I will bore you more..😛

Promise no more torture, I am done..😆

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Oh at this point I'll take anything.


Mad.


Yes.


That feely OS.



You gotta.


Don't make say it wrongly.

Fine wth.


You gots to.



There.


And. Aahil is an enigma. That black sky?



Please paint something.

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Wow! Lovely poem Julz! ❤️

Originally posted by: pinks2911

Beautiful poem

Originally posted by: scarletmalik

it was really a very beautiful poem👍🏼

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

OH MYY!!! This. You can't just write like THIS. The explanation sounded so much beautiful <3

I love you! I voice between wet hiccupped daze,

Love you too! He chokes and a sob escapes

This one will be my favorite part forever! <3

You were gonna write all this in an OS?? No. I guess its more beautiful this way!

I can't just begin to explain how gorgeously this has been written. I just can't get over it. And you say you can't connect with them? Wonder if you did connect with the, what would I be reading?!

And BORE!! Huh?! Yeah, its a bore because you said "Did i bore you?"😆

I am in for this torture, please have your way with it..😆

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Yes Enigma and Encore!

if he behaves I will complete.

I made Aahil, Asad's " Don't Like Her" prodigy...

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Not sure if he is in character... He is what I make of him.. Raisin MALT!

Hear Tamara - new dirty talk for "WallBanger" if Aahil... Faru is fasting she said she can't have...

"Sanam can I borrow your raisins."

"Why"

" I want to soak your raisins in my whiskey... This website says the combo is delicious. You in."

" Definitely baby!"

" What about my sauce."

Dips his finger in her sauce**, " I love your sauce."

" I think it is burning, Bring your ladle and stir my sauce."

"YUMMM!"

"Hummm"

"Now go faster!"

"Sanam you go to enjoy, you can't rush, it damages the viscosity!"

OK THEY ARE IN TEH KITCHKEN TOGETHER COOKING!

GET OVER YOUR DIRTY MINDS!😆