New Asya FF: the runaway bride * update chap26 page 129, 2/1/15* - Page 43

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Heyy sorry for late comment. ..was busy with navratri celebrations..

Anyway nice update.. .. M LOVING NISHA.. ...nice character..
Mature, sensible, understanding. ..

Asad too needs a friend like her.. .

Beautiful as always.. .

Looking forward to next.. .

Nice one:D


Yeah, dear, it's ok, don't worry, I just miss you comment 😳
I'm glad that you like Nisha, she is actually the same as my childhood friends, she is my favorite characters
soon they will be a convo between Nisha and Asad, hope u will like it

thank you 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Nisha as a good friend, did reality check. Zoya didn't want to accept it. Nisha proved her wrong in so many ways. Finally she admitted that she has some feelings. Asad intentionally introduced Amir to zoya.
Waiting for jealousy track. Is it both side jealousy or one sided. Plz continue soon. Thanks for pm


thank you buddy 😃
the jealousy track will be from one side, Zoya and it will help her to see clearly her feling for him.
Amir was Asad's good friend and the perfect partner for her, so Asad ans his promes
i will try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rajsmi

Nice update...finally Zoya sees the whole pic!! Yay!! She is fallen hook ,line and sinker for him :-)


exactly and soon she will fall , her teeth first 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida


First I have to return this to you 🤗 the hug buddy 😆
thank you for the 10/10, at school, I've get this so much, I was a bad , bad student 😆, thank you Jas, you are sweet sweet sweetheart ❤️

In your first part, what I want to mention, is that sometimes, you are surprise by the behaviour of your close friend (it happen very often to me), that when I expect something from someone that I love, I barely get it, but I always receive from the one that I never thought he or she may be able to do for me.
In this part, I try to convince herself that afterall, why running after someone who don't want her, she have other friend who care for her.

but, what happen after, is that the same Amir who helped her, pushed her to see again Asad, like a sign to remind her that she was wrong about him, that Asad care a lot and if he reacted like this with her, it just because he was hurt. That's why she cried , she felt herself miserable, thinking bad about Asad.

Asad was friendly with her and as you descrive perfectly, he try to seduce her slowly until Ayan and humeira fight, and it change his option and broke him from inside.😭
And again, your predictions are well, asad will be neutral, as much as he can, and Zoya slowly will let this feeling get out from her heart.
jealousy track will help and I planned a convo between Nisha and Asad, but I won't say more,
keep reading 😉



I don't know how was u as student but u r awesome writer😉😃
thanx 4 explaining her point of view i get it but Zoya ke dialogue se laga jaise usse Amir ke liye kuch kuch hone laga just 3 days b4 she was ready 2 fight wid Asad 2 make him her frnd again & cuz he scolded her now she's thinking all wrong about him.
But achi baat yeh hai ki tumne updt wahin khatam nahi kiya😆 cuz after that story took new turn i m glad Amir is not selfish unlike Zoya at d moment😡 he was angry on Asad but know him well from yrs so shared his observation wid her 2 let her know how gem of a person he is, i thought she cried cuz of guilt only but now i know she felt miserable cuz even after seeing his selflessness herself she thought wrong about him cuz of just one silly fight.
So u mean jab tak jello track nahi hai she will not realize Asad's worth & I have 2 jhello her wid Amir awe this will b bad 4 Amir in future both 4 himself & knowing that he was eyeing his BF's GF.

ofcorse future track should b secret but just tell me this new girl is not Tanveer i just can't piccture her +ve bring someone wid new name Sara, Ayesha, Mehreen or any1.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91


I don't know how was u as student but u r awesome writer😉😃
thanx 4 explaining her point of view i get it but Zoya ke dialogue se laga jaise usse Amir ke liye kuch kuch hone laga just 3 days b4 she was ready 2 fight wid Asad 2 make him her frnd again & cuz he scolded her now she's thinking all wrong about him.
But achi baat yeh hai ki tumne updt wahin khatam nahi kiya😆 cuz after that story took new turn i m glad Amir is not selfish unlike Zoya at d moment😡 he was angry on Asad but know him well from yrs so shared his observation wid her 2 let her know how gem of a person he is, i thought she cried cuz of guilt only but now i know she felt miserable cuz even after seeing his selflessness herself she thought wrong about him cuz of just one silly fight.
So u mean jab tak jello track nahi hai she will not realize Asad's worth & I have 2 jhello her wid Amir awe this will b bad 4 Amir in future both 4 himself & knowing that he was eyeing his BF's GF.

ofcorse future track should b secret but just tell me this new girl is not Tanveer i just can't piccture her +ve bring someone wid new name Sara, Ayesha, Mehreen or any1.😉



i thought she cried cuz of guilt only but now i know she felt miserable cuz even after seeing his selflessness herself she thought wrong about him cuz of just one silly fight.

Exactly, you get my point in this case, I agree the Zoya of my story was really selfish and childhish , and many of you don't like this side of her, but sometimes before becoming a women we have to cross some step, and specially removed some wrong idea that we have, some bad feeling or complex that we have, so I will try to show another side of her, hopefully, because I went far in this selflessness part of her.

For Amir, i agree, he will know who is Zoya for asad, but I still don't know how he will react, for the moment I'm not at this step , but anyway, i will see how the story goes for the moment.

Don't worry for the new character, her nam won't be tanveer, but I don't know if she will be bad or just grey, I hesitate for the moment, I like those name, but it won't be
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG what an update
Awesome mind blowing amazing
It was not an asya update but it was all about asya
It made zoya realizes a lot of things
She learn from Amir abt asad
So Amit tells abt when asad was happy abt the girl he was to marry
She cried
Love nisha she was an eye opener fro zoya but zoya still can't believe
Nisha told her right she don't want to prove tht everyone was right tht asad was the one for her
She wants I to be her choice still
And also she can't forgive herself for what she did to asad such an amazing person
So she thinks she is not good enough for him and she don't deserve his love
Glad she know Amir is just a good friend and her possessiveness on asad was nice
So he is away for 2 wks hope she get her clarity then
Wonder if asad will bring back a girl New York so the jealousy
Continue soon as nisha said just hold him and kiss him a nice French kiss
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Posted: 10 years ago
Can i just say something ? I SO LOVE U DAMN VERY MUCH !! 🤗
Read this story in a go and yaar i'm hooked !! loved every bit of this story !! ❤️
I kinda didnt like Zoya in the begining because i had found her to be selfish to Asad, i'm sorry i'm quite bad at expressing myself but what i mean to say is taht it was like she cared about everybody but had made an opinion of Asad without knowing him
I think that what i'm trying to say is that Zoya behaved like a spoilt brat ! 🤢 now i would like to see her running behind Asad and him not caring about her
But now i'm loving the flow of this story, with Zoya being more sensible and Asad caring as usual but dont tell me that Aamir will be the pretendant Adad will introduce to Ghaffur ?! 😲
Finally Zoya realized her feelings ! Loved that friend of hers ! 😆
Its an amazing FF and i'm looking forward to next chapters ! 😃 will be sending u a buddy request, could u please PM me when u update ? 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Can i just say something ? I SO LOVE U DAMN VERY MUCH !! 🤗
Read this story in a go and yaar i'm hooked !! loved every bit of this story !! ❤️
I kinda didnt like Zoya in the begining because i had found her to be selfish to Asad, i'm sorry i'm quite bad at expressing myself but what i mean to say is taht it was like she cared about everybody but had made an opinion of Asad without knowing him
I think that what i'm trying to say is that Zoya behaved like a spoilt brat ! 🤢 now i would like to see her running behind Asad and him not caring about her
But now i'm loving the flow of this story, with Zoya being more sensible and Asad caring as usual but dont tell me that Aamir will be the pretendant Adad will introduce to Ghaffur ?! 😲
Finally Zoya realized her feelings ! Loved that friend of hers ! 😆
Its an amazing FF and i'm looking forward to next chapters ! 😃 will be sending u a buddy request, could u please PM me when u update ? 😳


Woow i'm honor to have you as reader and of course I accept your buddy request.
I want to say that I'm huge fan of your stories , for the moment : hidden love and mental love, you do a great great job in those two 👏
well for zoya, i agree, that in my story she is a selfish and childhish, actually she was like me years ago 😳, but now i grow up (not too much but 🤪). I want her to grow up slowly and sometimes, becoming a women need some important step, I like having complex character with many shades, and I hope I will let this character to grow.
amir will play an important role in Asya's live, but I can't say more,
and of course i will pm you for the next chapter
thank again to have you here 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida



Woow i'm honor to have you as reader and of course I accept your buddy request.
I want to say that I'm huge fan of your stories , for the moment : hidden love and mental love, you do a great great job in those two👏
well for zoya, i agree, that in my story she is a selfish and childhish, actually she was like me years ago😳, but now i grow up (not too much but🤪). I want her to grow up slowly and sometimes, becoming a women need some important step, I like having complex character with many shades, and I hope I will let this character to grow.
amir will play an important role in Asya's live, but I can't say more,
and of course i will pm you for the next chapter
thank again to have you here 🤗


HAHaha then i 'm glad to be here ! 🤗
Awww thats so sweet !! 😳 yeah i know that u follow my stories because ur comments always left me in awe !! ❤️
Well then do know that i dont take myself as a 'Great writer' ! 😆 i'm only a 16 years old amateur !! 😆 but Thank you so much !! I'm glad to know that my work is being appreciated so much !! 🤗 😳
Yeah Asad is right whenever he calls her a kid ! 🤔 hahah but that must have been a long time ago, right ? 😉 😆
Yeah i agree that a person cant wake up someday and be a total different person from what she was the previous day ! So waiting with patience for the growth of this cahracter as well ! (its the same with my mental love nowadays, with Zoya being mature yet not matured ! 😆 )
Awww bechara Aamir will be left heartbroken at te end !! 🥺
Thanks to u for welcoming me here !! 🤗 😳
By the way, when r u gonna update the next chapter ?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


HAHaha then i 'm glad to be here ! 🤗
Awww thats so sweet !! 😳 yeah i know that u follow my stories because ur comments always left me in awe !! ❤️
Well then do know that i dont take myself as a 'Great writer' ! 😆 i'm only a 16 years old amateur !! 😆 but Thank you so much !! I'm glad to know that my work is being appreciated so much !! 🤗 😳
Yeah Asad is right whenever he calls her a kid ! 🤔 hahah but that must have been a long time ago, right ? 😉 😆
Yeah i agree that a person cant wake up someday and be a total different person from what she was the previous day ! So waiting with patience for the growth of this cahracter as well ! (its the same with my mental love nowadays, with Zoya being mature yet not matured ! 😆 )
Awww bechara Aamir will be left heartbroken at te end !! 🥺
Thanks to u for welcoming me here !! 🤗 😳
By the way, when r u gonna update the next chapter ?


You are a great writer, when a story gave goosebumps, I know that the writer choose the good words, it's my opinion and you story have this effect on me, or may be I let my window open 😆
anyway, hope I will be able to update soon , by the end of this week, hopefully

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