New Asya FF: the runaway bride * update chap26 page 129, 2/1/15* - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey buddy r u planning jealousy of zoya. Please dont do this. I hate jealousy. But if u introduce it then i hope that u dont give ki now asad avoiding zoya. Please dont go this way. Please please preety please
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Posted: 11 years ago
here i was waiting fr an I luv u ... since so long ...
n u gave i didnt luv u n i wont luv u...
y u did this 😭 😭
my poor asad...
surely hes controlling his anger js fr zoya... and he vl think abt ayaan n humaira...
but wt abt him...
hw much more pain r u planning to gv him??
please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Hey buddy r u planning jealousy of zoya. Please dont do this. I hate jealousy. But if u introduce it then i hope that u dont give ki now asad avoiding zoya. Please dont go this way. Please please preety please


The jealousy track will be short but not soon, don't worry, and after that argue, Asad will avoid zoya and she will run after him now, this is how it should be or how I imagine my story. But, she will realize slowly her feeling for him.
Missing, jealousy , fear to loose the one your love are the different step of realizing love (according to me)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow its simply awesome.
U brought tears in my eyes.
Asad says his fears. He didnt want same thing happen to humaira. I just loved this chapter. Mind blowing.
I hope zoya realise her love for him.
Ayaan n humairas story is beautiful.
U know that jealousy thing can work on zoya to. I love to see that.
My poor asad.
Update next part soon.
Eager to know what will happen next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohh. ...feel soon bad for asad n zoya too.. .

She better realize her her feelings soon.. ..

N ayan should proov himself n impress asad.. ...in heroic Wat. ..;)...

Niceee update. ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ihopelove

Wow its simply awesome.

U brought tears in my eyes.
Asad says his fears. He didnt want same thing happen to humaira. I just loved this chapter. Mind blowing.
I hope zoya realise her love for him.
Ayaan n humairas story is beautiful.
U know that jealousy thing can work on zoya to. I love to see that.
My poor asad.
Update next part soon.
Eager to know what will happen next.


thank you so much, you can't imagine how I was insecure about this chapter,
I'm glad that you like it 😃
soon, Zoya will realize tha she lied to him and to herself
thank you again for your comment

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Ohh. ...feel soon bad for asad n zoya too.. .

She better realize her her feelings soon.. ..

N ayan should proov himself n impress asad.. ...in heroic Wat. ..;)...

Niceee update. ...


thank you dear, I know I rushed arya story because I want to focus on Asya more

but soon, zoya will realize, next chapter she will feel confuse about her feelings 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida


The jealousy track will be short but not soon, don't worry, and after that argue, Asad will avoid zoya and she will run after him now, this is how it should be or how I imagine my story. But, she will realize slowly her feeling for him.
Missing, jealousy , fear to loose the one your love are the different step of realizing love (according to me)

ok. But one request dear dont give that zoya doing silly things for jealousy and also dont want her to lose her self respect for jealousy. One more thing i want a jealous asad also. Dont forget about it. BTW i dont belive in jealousy. I belive that if u truely love one then their is no need of jealousy. If u love some one then u have gut to say it directly
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Posted: 11 years ago
u missed my comnt on last page i think... 😔
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

ok. But one request dear dont give that zoya doing silly things for jealousy and also dont want her to lose her self respect for jealousy. One more thing i want a jealous asad also. Dont forget about it. BTW i dont belive in jealousy. I belive that if u truely love one then their is no need of jealousy. If u love some one then u have gut to say it directly


I agree with you, that when you love someone you just have to tell directly, and you have your answer as if it's yes or no, you don't waste your time. But it happen that sometimes, you are not able to distinguish attraction from love, or closed friendship from love.
I know also that even in frienship we can be jealous, it's a human feeling, not a good one but it occur in some situation.
In my story, i construct step by step her feeling for Asad, first was respect, frienship, trust, caring, missing etc...
don't worry, she won't loose her self respect or doing something stupid, my story is not dark and I never right a sad ending.

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