New Asya FF: the runaway bride * update chap26 page 129, 2/1/15* - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update!!
good that akram is behaving...

asya were getting along but what did she do now!?

hope no fighting between them

continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wooww. ..such a lovely update

Zoya made asad angry. .hopefully did will lead to something really intresting. ..

I still have doubts on dat akram..

Plzz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi guys, here the chapter 8. I should say that I really enjoy writting this part and hope you could feel it. It's a short update but hope you will like it.



Chap 8 Dance with me


He grabbed her by her shoulder firmly and yelled :

-what was this Miss farroqui?
-Mis..Mister khan? she gluped nervously.

-what did you do Miss farroqui? What is this?
She looked behind his shoulder, and said sarcastically:
-dancefloor , Miss Khan?
-don't act smart Miss farroqui
-I did nothing Mister khan, we were just enjoying your so called " party" , she mimed the quotation marks
-party? really ??? you transformed it as a night club how could you be irresponsible? I spent a lot of time organizing this business party and for the first time that I received some foreigners partnerships, you screwed up everything.

-if it's the case, you should just have invite them at dinner than organizing a huge party, you could save your money. Mister khan, i don't understand why are you upset? it suppose to be a party, so definition on party is having fun, dancing, eating, enjoying time with other, and I think it what happened here, hain na? she addressed him her most beautiful smile.
Asad was not in mood to melt away by her behaviour, she crossed limits this time, he could accept anything but not about his job. Only God knows how he sacrifided to be where he is now. She could not destroy years of hard working by her irresponsibility.

-this definition is for normal "party", he mimed like her the quotation marks, but not for

"businness party" Miss farroqui, and don't tell me what i have to do with my businness miss musibat magnet, he turned his back, and putted his hand on his face, how can I face them now? how I have to repare what you destroy? My collaboration will end , just like this? He snapped his fingers. Just because of your stupidity. He pointed his finger on her.

-Mister KAN?
They was interrupted by a strong american accent coming from behind. Asad turned back to see Mister Jackson with a serious look. Asad gulped nervously.

-Mister khan, I just came to tell you that I can't be late for my plane,
-oh Mister Jackson, I'm sorry , really so sorry for what happened, don't be upset for all of this,
-actually, I'm really upset
Asad looked at Zoya with anger, she just wanted to disappear.
-I'm upset because I have to go from this wonderful party, I'm really enjoying , I have a lot of fun, it's nice sometimes to let it be.
Asad felt like he received a hammer blow on his head and Zoya started by smiling.

-and you, lady, he came toward her and hold her hand, you are a wonderful dancer, he kissed the back of her hand. Hope you will dance with me before I leave, beautiful lady.

Zoya looked at Asad with a victorious smile.
-of course, I will , it will be my pleasure, this party was Mister khan's idea, I'm happy that you enjoy it, she stressed the last word.

-And Mister khan, I think , we will have, in future, other successfull collaboration, I'm sure.
Asad smiled hesitantly. Asad looked at Mister Jackson leaving, and closed his eyes when he heard her speak:

-Mister khan, who's this guy? she asked with sarcastic tone, which was noticed by him
-my new partnership, he breathed loudly

-ya Allah , how can we face him now? She shouted dramatically, how can you repare what I destroy? Everything fade away like this? she snapped her fingers, hai na Mister KAN?

-stop it Miss Farroqui, he said without looking at her.
-OK, at least, you can apologize.
-excuse me? For what?
-for your behaviour, for shouting on me for nothing
-I won't Miss farroqui, you are just lucky that he likes party, but next time, it may be different, if we receive some conservative owner.

-whatever, by the way Mister khan, did you just look at those who worked for you everyday ?
-I was busy looking at your mess
-If you just looked at them, you will notice that all of them were smiling and enjoying this party, they worked hard for you and they all appreciated you, you have to take care of them.

-I care for them Miss farroqui
-I know, but don't be strict with them, they deserved to enjoy also after all those stress, they are respectable, and it's not because they are dancing that they are doing something bad, they are here for you , so let them enjoy. And it's not because you don't like something that he should be bad for others. There is nothing bad in enjoying life, Mister khan.

-I know how to enjoy Miss farroqui
-really? I didn't see you dancing
-I don't need to dance to enjoy Zoya
-Oooh I see, It's ok
-what ?
-It's ok if you don't know how to dance, you can just clap you hand
-it's not this , you misunderstand
-koi bat nahi, at least, looked at them, they just express their joy, happiness and even sadness, dance express what we have in our heart, and you Mister khan, he looked at her, what is in your heart?

She smiled at him soflty and left.

-you can't handle what is in my heart, Miss farroqui

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Zoya didn't left the dance floor, she putted her heart on this floor, she was so excited song after song, she sang loud for each song, she moved for each song. Everyone around her was in the same mood, no one quitted the dance floor, everyone seemed to enjoy this party, there was an infinished back and forth to drink table for refresh but the dancefloor still full.
Suddenly, the light decreased slowly to shift to a romantic mood. No face was clear with this dim light, the DJ started a romantic song where guitar strings started to be heard. Zoya felt a hand from behind around her waist and he turned her to face him. She saw a guy with the same hat that she was wearing in the first dance, and she remembered that the guy who danced with her took it.

-oh it's you, she said happily

He pulled Zoya towards him, in one hand he caught her hand and twirled her and brought her face close towards his cheek and with the other, he grabbed her back firmly, and they started twirling.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_qcKoppvCvo

Mohabbat Barsa Dena Tu, Sawan Aaya Hai
Shower (Your) love (on me) as monsoon has arrived
Tere Aur Mere Milne Ka, Mausam Aaya Hai
The season for us to meet has arrived
Mohabbat Barsa Dena Tu, Sawan Aaya Hai
Shower love as monsoon has arrived
Tere Aur Mere Milne Ka, Mausam Aaya Hai
The season for us to meet has arrived

Zoya felt that it was nice to be led by him, he was so graceful and his hand on her back told her how and where to move.

Sabse Chhupa Ke Tujhe Seene Se Lagaana Hai
I want to hide You from everyone and embrace You
Pyaar Mein Tere Hadd Se Guzar Jaana Hai
I want to cross all limits in Your love
Itna Pyaar Kisi Pe, Pehli Baar Aaya Hai
For the first time in life, I am feeling so much love for someone

With a quick movement, he pushed her body to fall back,she made a half-circle with her upper part and returned to her original position, swinging her hair and fell around his exposed face. She tried to take his hat, but he snacked her hand and twirled her, which made her back to crush on his chest. He interwined her hands in his. She could feel his warm breath on her hair.

Mohabbat Barsa Dena Tu, Sawan Aaya Hai
Shower love as monsoon has arrived
Tere Aur Mere Milne Ka, Mausam Aaya Hai
The season for us to meet has arrived


They moved left to right first and then their shoulders moved in parrallel forward and back. He placed his hand on her hips and they moved their hips together in circles. He was soft and gentle, and their movement came naturally as if they always danced together.


Kyun Ek Pal Ki Bhi Judaai Sahi Jaaye Na
Why can't I bear even a single moment of separation?
Kyun Har Subah Tu Meri Saanson Mein Samaaye Na
Why don't You unite with my breath every morning?
Aaja Na Tu Mere Paas, Dunga Itna Pyaar Main
Come close to me, I will give You immense amount of love
Kitni Raat Guzaari Hai, Tere Intezar Mein
I've spend so many nights in Your wait
Kaise Bataaun Jazbaat Ye Mere
How should I express these emotions of mine (what I feel for You)?
Maine Khud Se Bhi Zyada Tujhe Chaaha Hai
I love You more than I love myself


He rubbed both of her shoulders, got down to her arms and her hands, grabbed both of them and brought them to his face and then he putted both of her hands in his hips.She caressed his face, as if she wanted to picture him, why she felt no inhibition with this stranger ?

Sab Kuch Chhod Ke Aana Tu, Sawan Aaya Hai
Leave everything else and come, monsoon has arrived
Tere Aur Mere Milne Ka, Mausam Aaya Hai
The season for us to meet has arrived


He lifted her from the ground and she bend her knees and played with her legs in the air, he putted her back gently, moved in unison their head in circle. He took her hand and pushed her apart from him, and she stared at him, she couldn't visualize clearly his face, it's was dark and his hat hided most of his face. He made her twirled along of his arms and snacked her from behind, cheeks against cheek.



Sabse Chhupa Ke Tujhe Seene Se Lagaana Hai
I want to hide You from everyone and embrace You
Pyaar Mein Tere Hadd Se Guzar Jaana Hai
I want to cross all limits in Your love
Itna Pyaar Kisi Pe, Pehli Baar Aaya Hai
For the first time in life, I am feeling so much love for someone



He caressed her lower lip with his thumb and Zoya felt her shiver crossing all her body, she started by breathing with difficulty. she began to struggle, but he hold her firmly.
-who are you? she hissed , he smirked at her and forced her to moved with him, he putted his arms around her shoulder and they bowed together towards the front three times.



Bheege Bheege Tere Lab, Mujhko Kuch Kehte Hain
Your drenched lips are saying something to me
Dil Hai Khush Mera, Ke Khayal Ek Jaise Hain
My heart is happy as our thoughts/feelings are alike
Roko Na Ab Khud Ko Yun, Sun Lo Dil Ki Baat Ko
Don't stop Yourself anymore, listen to what the heart is saying
Dhal Jaane Do Shaam Aur, Aa Jaane Do Raat Ko
Let evening pass and let night arrive
Kitna Haseen Ye Lamha Hai
How beautiful this moment is!
Kismat Se Maine Churaaya Hai
I've stolen it by my good fortune/destiny

Aaj Ki Raat Na Jaana Tu, Saawan Aaya Hai
Don't go away tonight, monsoon has arrived
Tere Aur Mere Milne Ka, Mausam Aaya Hai
The season for us to meet has arrived

He seemed familiar to her, his touch, his smell, his breath...she closed her eyes to look in her memory who could be this stranger. Still holding her from behind, they twirled together slowly, she could feel his breath on her neck, she felt dizzy, she couldn't breath normally because of this closeness. Why she can't move? Why she liked his torture on her ? She was completely submitted to him.



Sabse Chhupa Ke Tujhe Seene Se Lagaana Hai
I want to hide You from everyone and embrace You
Pyaar Mein Tere Hadd Se Guzar Jaana Hai
I want to cross all limits in Your love
Itna Pyaar Kisi Pe, Pehli Baar Aaya Hai
For the first time in life, I am feeling so much love for someone



And when the music stopped, they stopped for a second, he let her hands slowly and he spoke:
-dance esse kehte hai, Miss farroqui
She opened her eyes like she received a electric shock, her lips shivered :
-mmist...
She turned back , but he disapeared in crowd. She putted her hands on her mouth totally in shock for what happened. And she whispered between her lips:
-Aasad

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Edited by radadolcevida - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres
thanks for PM
Well it was Suprise Update
AND I LOVED THIS SUPRISE

Plz.., Continue Soon
Edited by -ABI- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super hott update☺️
the dance hayee
cant wait for next part!!!
hoping for more romance😃


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Edited by maha2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry I took so long to reply. I actually forgot that I had reserved a spot on here.
love Asad and Zoyas dancing scene. that was very well written. off I go to read 8b
Edited by HamariAduriKahn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG! ...

This is now a real surprise. ...

Wooww. .just loved it.. .

Can't wait for the next update. .

Loving the dance scene. .amazing. ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update.
Loved the dance..
Thanks for updating
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a beautiful update!!

the song was perfect!!

asya danced...wow!!

zoya is feeling something!!

continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the dance sea
Awesome updt
I loved it

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