AsYa FF: Change In Thinking And Lifestyle- Epilogue- Page 107- 10/4/15 - Page 66

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Tanveer was evil earlier but she had her limit of not to sleep wid anyone. But now, she has truly changed a lot in a year n will not do anything wrong.



good .. she learn her lesson 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


Thank u😊
Haseena is a pain in d neck😡
Tanveer has to change eventually😃
Haseena has to see AYa's kiss😆



she is real pain 😡 😡

yaa the kiss 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


Well i really liked the plot and Zoya's character... 😳



yes i like it to...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hassena irritating person and try to harm zoya

tanveer saved her...

good tanveer changing
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imran ... is so going to get ... bad for this..
keep disturbing tanveer

asad.. begin naughty
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"Aata Maajhi Satakla," said Ayaan wid irritation. 🤣 🤣
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Juhi... 😊
Well this was a wellwritten & goodpart👏 For the first time i can say that i liked Tanveer's part...more 😳
ASYA scenes were funny.. 😆
Haseena is getting irritating... 😡
Continue soon..



changing tanveer 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 10(A)

"Luks like Tanveer has changed but dis Haseena Bi has crossed her limits," said Zoya.

In d morning, all r hvng breakfast.

"Ammi, I will be late cuz after college I have to Asad's house for doing project n practicing for d singing competition," said Zoya.

"Okay beta," said Razia.

Haseena was shocked to see Zoya's voice intact. Zoya n Tanveer saw luk on Haseena's face n smiled inwardly.

In d evening, GaZia, Nida n Haseena went to shopping. Zoya was at Asad' house. Imraan went out somewhere. Tanveer refused to come for shopping as she had to study for 2mrw's test. She was sitting alone in her room wearing a red t-shirt n black harem pants. Just then d doorbell rings.

"Wajid, see who is it?" asked Tanveer to a servant.

"Its Imraan," came Wajid's voice.

Tanveer felt uneasy.

"Why I am feeling uneasy?" thinks Tanveer, "I sud concentrate on my 2mrw's test."

As Tanveer was busy studying, Imraan comes behind n keeps his hands on her shoulder shocking her. Tanveer gets up n faces him.

"Wat r u doing here?" asked Tanveer firmly, "Why didn't u knock?"

"I don't need to knock to come to ur room," replied Imraan wid a grin.

"Leave d room. I have to study," said Tanveer.

Imraan got angry n grabbed her shoulders while saying angrily, "No girl ever said no to me."

"Wajid, Shankar, help me," screamed Tanveer.

"No use of screaming dear. I have spiked their water. So, no will disturb us," said Imraan wid a smirk.

"U creep," said Tanveer angrily n pushed him.

She tuk her cell n ran out of d room. She dialed Zoya's number while hiding behind one of d pillars near d hall.

Zoya who was studying wid Asad answers d call.

"Hello," said Zoya.

"Zoya, plz help me. Dat Imraan is trying to force me. I am alone in d house. He even spiked all d servant's water. Plz, help me, Zoya. Imraan is...," said Tanveer while crying.

Before Tanveer cud say anything more, Imraan grabs her 4m behind causing her cell to fall down. Tanveer started screaming. Zoya got worried as she cud hear Tanveer's screaming as her cell was still on.

"Tanveer," said Zoya worriedly.

"Leave me, Imraan," said Tanveer trying to free herself.

"Wat do u think urself ha?" asked Imraan squeezing her waist tightly, "U insulted me by refusing me to be my girlfriend. Now, I will teach such a lesson dat u will never forget."

Zoya got scared hearing dat. Imraan lukd down at her cell which was still on n stomped on it to break it. Zoya got worried wen she cud not hear anything n realized d cell is disconnected. Tanveer freed herself by biting his hand n ran to d corridor.

Scene shifts to Asad's room.

"Asad, we need to go. Tanveer is in danger. Imraan is trying to force," said Zoya teln him wat Tanveer said n wat she heard till her cell was on.

Asad got angry. Ayaan n Najma who were standing in d doorway listened to everything n came inside d room. They were also angry along wid Zoya n Asad.

"Lets go, guys. We need to save Tanveer," said Asad.

They all rushes outside d house n gets into Asad's car. Ayaan sat beside Asad on d front while Najma sat on d back wid Zoya.

Scene shifts to FM. Imraan is furiously lukn out for Tanveer.

"Tanveer, come out," said Imraan aloud.

Tanveer was still hiding behind d pillar.

"Tanveer, come out on ur own. If I find u then it will be worse for u," threatened Imraan.

Tanveer got more scared.

Asad is driving d car fast. All r getn worried for Tanveer.

"We need to reach soon," said Zoya.

"Dat Imraan is such an asshole," said Najma angrily.

Scene shifts to FM.

Tanveer was still hiding behind dat pillar. She was peeking out to see where is Imraan wen she feels him grabbing her hair 4m behind. He turns her around to face him still grabbing her hair. Tanveer gets angry.

"U bas***d, leave me," yelled Tanveer.

Imraan slapped her hard.

"Hold ur tongue, u bitch," said Imraan thru gritted teeth while tightening his grip on her hair making her scream in pain.

He pushes her hard on d floor. She moves back while he moves forward. He grabs her hand n starts dragging her. She tries to free herself 4m his grip but he was stronger.

"Imraan, leave me," shouted Tanveer.

"Shut up," said Imraan said angrily.

He drags her to her room n pushes her on her bed. He then comes on top of her. She tries to push him off but in vain.

"Stop resisting, darling. Its of of no use," said Imraan wid a smile.

"Get off me, u pig," yelled Tanveer.

Imraan slapped her hard on her other cheek.

"U did not learnt wid one slap ha," said Imraan furiously grabbing her jaws tightly making her scream in pain, "No girl talks wid me in dat way. I will show u ur place."

He left her jaw n removed his hurt n vest shocking her.

"Imraan, plz let me go," begged Tanveer.

"Let u go?" asked Imraan wid a taunting smile, "How can I let u go widout hvng fun wid u."

He tore her sleeves n said angrily, "I slept wid many girls, did wateva I wanted wid them n dumped them but no one ever complained. But u dared to reject n fight wid me ha."

"Imraan, plz stop," begged Tanveer.

Imraan held her pants by her waist n was to pull it down wen a hand caught his hand. Imraan turned around to see Zoya catching his hand lukn angrily at him.

"Zoya, Asad, Ayaan, Najma," said Imraan shockingly.

Zoya slapped him hard across d face.

"How dare u try to hurt my sister?" asked Zoya angrily.

"He needs to be taught such a lesson dat he will never forget," said Ayaan angrily.

Ayaan grabbed Imraan's collar n started punching him. He then pushed him on d floor. Asad pulled his hairs making him scream n then pulled him to his feet.

Tanveer got up 4m d bed n ran to Zoya n Najma. Zoya tuk a jacket 4m Tanveer's 4m her cupboard n makes her wear it. Najma poured some water n gave it to her. Tanveer drank d water. Tanveer bursts into tears n hugs her. Zoya hugs her back.

"Zoya, I am so sorry. I always hurt u. I have insulted my juniors n tore their clothes. Dats why, Allah has punished me like," said Tanveer thru her tears.

"Tanveer, don't say like dis. No one deserves to be treated like dis. Not even our enemies and u r my younger sister. Its good dat u have changed," said Zoya softly.

Asad started punching him.

"How dare u hurt Tanveer?" asked Asad angrily.

"Plz, forgive me," begged Imraan.

"Forgive u?" asked Najma angrily, "Dat also so easily? Didn't u felt any shame before trying to force Tanveer?"

Asad kept on beating him. Tanveer n Zoya broke d hug. Zoya called her mother n told her d matter. Razia got worried. She told everyone. They all started to rush home.

Asad n Ayaan beats Imraan a lot n then ties him on a chair in Tanveer's room.

"Let me go," begged Imraan.

"Not so easily, u asshole," said Najma angrily.

"Tanveer, slap him as much as u want," said Zoyaa.

Tanveer got nervous.

"Wat?" asked Tanveer nervously.

"Tanveer, slap him. He tried to do such a disgusting thing wid u," replied Najma.

Tanveer lukd at Imraan n got angry. She came before Imraan. She recalled him slapping her twice n trying to force her. She got more angry n slapped him hard.

"U said dat u slept wid many girls n dumped them but no one ever complained to u. Wat d hell u think of urself?" asked Tanveer angrily.

She slapped him on d other cheek.

"People like u sud be be beaten by d crowd," said Tanveer angrily.

She slapped him 4 more times.

"U r such a disgusting creature. U urself have a sister then also u sleep around wid girls," said Tanveer angrily.

Zoya n Najma went n woke up all d servants by sprinkling water on them. They told d matter to all d servants.

"Sorry mam, we cud not do anything," said Wajid guiltily.

"Its not ur fault," said Zoya.

After some time, everyone came back. Asad n Ayaan untied him n dragged him to d hall.

"Wat u all r doing to Imraan?" asked Haseena shockingly.

"I told everything on d phone," replied Zoya firmly.

"Tanveer is lying. My Imraan can't do anything. She may have only trapped him n now she is trying to frame him," said Haseena.

"Why Tanveer will frame her?" asked Asad, "We ourselves saw him trying to force her."

"U keep quiet only," replied Haseena in a taunting tone, "U urself hugs n kisses ur fiancee before marriage n now talking such things abt my grandson."

"Don't talk to Asad like dat. U r still supporting Imraan after he tried to hurt Tanveer. He sleeps around wid girls n also rapes girls," said Ayaan in a disgusted tone.

"Stop talking abt my grandson like dis," said Haseena angrily.

Nida who was also lukn angrily knew of her brother's deeds.

"Bi, they r right. Imraan has slept wid many girls n raped them," said Nida disgustedly.

"How can u tell abt ur own elder brother like dis?" asked Haseena angrily.

"I said wat is truth, Bi," replied Nida firmly.

"U both sisters have spoiled my granddaughter too," said Haseena furiously.

"Don't u say anything to my daughters, Khala," said Razia firmly.

"I always said Gaffur not to marry u but he never listened. U spoiled ur daughters. U are a bad mother making ur daughters shameless like urself," taunted Haseena.

"How dare u talk like dat to our mother?" asked Zoya angrily.

"Its u who is shameless to still defending ur grandson," said Tanveer angrily.

"U even tried to tamper wid my voice by spiking my orange juice," said Zoya angrily.

"Wat nonsense u r saying?" asked Haseena angrily.

"I saw it myself n I have proof," replied Tanveer angrily.

Haseena gets shocked.

"Why u r quiet ha?" asked Tanveer in a taunting voice.

"She has nothing to speak, Tanveer," replied Najma in a taunting voice, "Her misdeed has come out. She stooped so low wen Zoya refused to withdraw her name 4m d competition."

"Now only police will come n put u both in ur place," said Asad.

"No no, plz don't call d police," said Haseena in a scared voice.

"Enough Khala, u r too much now. U brainwashed Zoya 4m childhood n tried to do d same wid Tanveer. U tried to break Asad n Zoya's relationship. Ur grandson slept wid many women. He now tried to force my younger daughter n instead of getn angry wid him u r defending him. U r shamelessly blaming Tanveer for dis," said Gaffur firmly.

Asad tuk out his cell n calls d police.

Precap: #D police takes away Imraan. Haseena is also taken away wen she tries to stab Tanveer for getn Imraan into trouble. Razia slaps her for trying to harm her daughter.

#Zoya n Tanveer has a nice sister time. Tanveer calls her aapi making Zoya happy.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
Loved it
Glad that nothing happened to tanveer
Its true no one deserves such thing
Imrann is such a pig
Glad asya n ayaan n nazma came on time
Plz update soon

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