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Oh my goodness! That was a splendid update <3
Mahhuu darling, my adorable maniac! You're something, ain't you? š
I love you my maniac! You are awesome!
This "little moment" could never be called "little" in any sense. It was awesome! <3 The situation was so well defined and well executed (read writtenš), it all made it so right at that particular moment. Their first kiss and was so beautiful <3
I loved and just LOVED this update! Couldn't be a better kiss than this! This is such an emotional roller coaster.
He asked to stop, but she din't. <33 How could she? The emotions and feelings he had held back for so long, it all came crashing down at that one moment when he felt lost. She won. Definitely.
And she definitely "won" him <3 He lost himself to her. God this has such deep meaning to it, I couldn't just comprehend it all.
Aahil's pain, his eyes, his breakdown at his knees :'( Poor him. He was just been a pawn. Sigh! It hurts me to even think when this would actually happen in the show, his state would be... :'(( I can't imagine how I would manage to see him like that. But well, SHE would be with him, still. And forever <3
You. Take a bow. š³ It was such an awesome update. I couldn't say this enough. You are a beautiful writer. Please don't ever stop writing. EVER! :)
Love! <3
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