SaHil FF: Mohabbat Toh Ek Javeda Zindagi Hai. Completed! *AWARDED* - Page 5

Ah I finally made it!

Beautifully written😊Can't wait for the next chapter

Originally posted by: JULIEL

It's awesome. Loved reading and looking forward to the next update.

Thank you! I'm really happy to know that you are enjoying the story. 😊

Originally posted by: Aye12345

Woohoo, you updated!! :)))) Aww, poor Aahil, feel so sorry for him, is he going to the haveli, wonder if he'll see Sanam there... hope he finds some comfort in that :)) And can't wait till you update next, wonder if Sanam will still hate him, her fiesty character in this is really good and interesting, especially when she back chats him and gives him a piece of her mind :))) Oh and thank you for the PM, do keep on PMing me please, thank youuu :))) xoxoxoxoxo

I know!!! Hmm, I guess you ahve to hang in there to find out where he's going.. 😉 But thank you so much for the sweet words. It really means a lot to me. Just keep reading and enjoying the story <3

Originally posted by: scarletmalik

awsome update👍🏼

tanveer's truth is out

poor aahil😔

felt sad 4r him

continue soon

nd thnx 4r pm

Thank you!! <3 I know :( but I had to let him find the truth.. Once again, thank you so much for reading! 😛

Originally posted by: dinazz

wow . atlast tanveer's truth is out.

feeling sad for aahil😔

superb update.

cont soon .

thanks for pm.😊

Thank you for liking the story. It means a lot to me! ^_^ <3 I hope you'll like the next part. :-)

Originally posted by: TasriS

Awesome update.

Thank you! <3 I'm glad you liked it. ^__^

Originally posted by: Dhanesh27

Ah I finally made it!

Mahhuuu what a brilliant story girl! Amazeballs

It's like this breathe of fresh air that hit me, I just love it!

You were right, this story is nothing compared to mine in fact yours is WAY BETTER!

This is perfection!

Aahil baby drive all the way to where your hear desires it most, to Sanam, who has everything but still feels incomplete because she doesn't have her love Aahil.

Oh their turmoil of a relationship is about to get all romantic and intensified, I see more pinning to the wall😳And I can't wait for the next update. Soon soon soon!!

No stohp it! 😳 YOU'RE the talented writer!

I LOVE YOU🤗

😆 Yes, Aahil, drive all the way where you know you want to be.. 😉 I'm sure your going to love the next update! 😳

I think the Adda has affected me in a way which will be seen in the story - Now, I don't want to reveal too much, but it's there.. 😆 Damn you all my maniacs! :-D ❤️

Originally posted by: music1

Beautifully written😊Can't wait for the next chapter

Thank you 😳 teh words really mean a lot to me! I'll try to update as soon as possible 😊

I'm awfully late to the party. I feel awful.


Oh my God.


Four parts.



The beauty of having read all four parts at one go is that I had four parts to read...the wait was none.


Now.


The downside of having read all four parts at one go is that I had ONLY four parts to read...I'm hooked. I'm addicted. I. NEED. MORE.



And I need fast.


Mahu love.



You've touched my heart with this one. This is my kind of fluff. I feel so involved and was really engrossed...if practically immersed myself in the story.

Love your writing. Love your style.


Absolutely loving the flow of story!


Love the song choice, i.e. THE TITLE!


I'm such a fool to have put off reading this! And I'm so glad I finally came to my senses. And once I started...I couldn't put it away.


I love your Aahil!!! And Sanam.


The essence of the show is there! Thank you for that! It makes for a better, more relatable read!!!


I love their little interaction. Her conviction of staying away, his for wanting her. And that part where he asked if she feels the way he does...that for me was the scene stealer.

The almost kiss was beautiful. I'd imagine had there been a kiss at that point...it wouldn't be as beautiful. The thought that there was to be a kiss, the built up, the anticipation, the expectation...All beautiful!

And he gets to smirk. Only because he now knows! She feels the same. And it's just a matter of time. For now he'll just relish in the thought that she feels for him what he feels for her. And just basked in the beauty of that thought.


I'm so very glad the truth is out! Aahil having to question his life...and where is he headed...?


I know.


Still.



Part 5!



I need!



You're simply brilliant Mahwash sweetheart!!!! Am a big fan as it is...now you've won me over!! More than before!


Mohabbat Toh Ek Javeda Zindagi...indeed!


Love my darling Mahuuu!!!!


You rock!!!



Mwahhh!!!