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@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Oh God cho emotional!!!!!😭... Asad 🥺... beautifully written!!!

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karan-007

@karan-007

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

this is very sweet continue it plzzz😊

PS: i was talking about 'A New Dawn' do continue it 😊

Edited by karan-007 - 11 years ago

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Preeti sharma

@kanchan23

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

lovely and emotional update yaar...
asad is a best husband...😊
he made pizza for her...buy gift for her...
mujhe laga nhi tha...iska end itna saddy hoga...😭
beautifully written yaar...👏
keep writing...😊
thanx for pm...

preeti

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pattiala

@pattiala

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Awesum. It literally brought tears to me.
Do write more.
Thnx 4 pm

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shonayaa

@shonayaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Emotional Drabble in end
I thought she was angry but asad lost her
I agreed life is not a bed of roses.
Thanks for pm

thanks asif
ya love has no boundaries

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shonayaa

@shonayaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: -ABI-
<font size="4">hay thanks for PM
well it was an emotional update&a heart-touching one.
I agree with u that a life is not bed of roses
But honestly, you don't know How much I wish u to change ur mind & the story doesn't end here,atleast not like this.
I believe on second change,though everyone doesn't get it.
how much I wish u to not kill Zoya & give us a happy walla ending.
</font>

thanks abi
but every one doesn't get a second chance
not all stories have happy walla ending 🤗

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shonayaa

@shonayaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
beautifully written
sad but heartwarming...

keep writing more...

thank you so much 🤗

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shonayaa

@shonayaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: jas91
very emotional story
but well written

thank u jas 🤗

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shonayaa

@shonayaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: nilusoni
emotional os
thanx for pm
plz pm me for other work

thanks
il surely pm you:)

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shonayaa

@shonayaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: Amin21
what an adorable update yaar 👏
he said she is getting annoyed with him coming late and told Prasad to don't call him and he just stood to her photo it was 😭

really lovely and beautifully written yaar truly loved it😉

thank u so much dear
I'm glad you liked it 😊