The Outcast?...Scrambled thoughts....

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simran_singh_24

@simran_singh_24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Wow CS! 👏

Loved the line ...Wild flower crushed"

Glad to see that SAHil have turned you into a Shayar, please keep them coming, am loving it😃

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Oh Soup! Your writings are just..so so..touching! Such heartfelt and beautiful musings.

Got me a little bit teary eyed too :')

Why would it concern you?

When a wild flower gets crushed.. :')

This is so so heartbreaking! Thank you so much for this amazing piece!

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-RohitMaxwell-

@-RohitMaxwell-

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Soupy this is so so beautifully written

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vm17

@vm17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: chicksoup

You left me all alone...

In the middle of nowhere...

Stranded, Abandoned...

Deserted by you...

I waited, but you never came...

Night fell, shadows grew nearer...

I sought to comfort ...

A friend who needed me...

Or was it I who needed...

The Hope that I had value...

You stood down the stairs...

Staring at me...

As though I had committed a crime...

Accusation? Anger? Hatred?

Shouldn't MY EYES be telling that tale!!!

How do I read you?

You saved me again...

And stomped off in Disgust...

As if being near me scorches you...

AmI the untouchable you touched?

Another night that you turned saviour...

I saw the face beneath the mask...

A fraction of the concern...

Lavished on others...

Strange awakenings...

That died at a proposal...

Fresh wounds...

The same old story...

Abused ...Humiliated...

You look the other way...

Why would it concern you?

When a wild flower gets crushed...

What am I to you?

A servant? A stranger?

Skirt of a different colour?

Or The Outcast you cringe at?

What are you to me?

A saviour?

A villain?

An enigma?

I dare not think...

Of things beyond me...

I don't believe in fairy tales...

And You are the reason why...

------The Outcast...

WOW awesome Soup.you are gifted.it is a lovely post

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Thanks for this Soup.

Much needed!

*hugs*

🤗Thank U...

Whenever I write for the ML, there is one for the FL too...This was in my head while I wrote Aahil's poem. Just had to wait for a while to see Sanam's shades...😊

I feel a monologue from Sanam is very much required. If she is confused, let her voice it!😆