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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 10 years ago

#1491

Originally posted by: -hotsauce-
Loved both the update!

It ended so sooon!

going to miss this story😭

It was well written!

Thank for the PM!

yay another AsYa story!😃

Thanks so much dearo. 🤗

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1492

I loved the "with who" question everyone had..
Once again, a wonderful end to a lovely story.

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#1493

Hey Mri,

The last two parts plus epilogue were as always brilliant. Loved the subtle changes that you showed in Asad from the time of their courtship till nikaah. It showed him changing and that too for the best. Seriously at moments where he is romantic, its extremely hard to come back to reality. I wish I could live there only, with him.

Well this brings another one of our journey together to an end. I dnt think I need to say this but still I will, for you to remember. I honestly have enjoyed every bit of this story from the start where Zoe retains her independent & strong minded streak to where Asad goes out of his way to express his apology on not trusting her & the entire time they spent together trying to understand the other. It was a pleasure reading it all. Though I know I have been late in replying, it was never intentional.

Looking forward to your AsYa story. Am sure its going to be another beautiful addition to your work.

Much love...

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#1494

Wonderful story...beautiful ending...thanks for the PM

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 10 years ago

#1495

Originally posted by: Azraa01
I loved the "with who" question everyone had..
Once again, a wonderful end to a lovely story.

Thank you so much Azraa! 🤗

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 10 years ago

#1496

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Hey Mri,
The last two parts plus epilogue were as always brilliant. Loved the subtle changes that you showed in Asad from the time of their courtship till nikaah. It showed him changing and that too for the best. Seriously at moments where he is romantic, its extremely hard to come back to reality. I wish I could live there only, with him.

Well this brings another one of our journey together to an end. I dnt think I need to say this but still I will, for you to remember. I honestly have enjoyed every bit of this story from the start where Zoe retains her independent & strong minded streak to where Asad goes out of his way to express his apology on not trusting her & the entire time they spent together trying to understand the other. It was a pleasure reading it all. Though I know I have been late in replying, it was never intentional.

Looking forward to your AsYa story. Am sure its going to be another beautiful addition to your work.

Much love...

Hey Nim,

Thank you so much for the lovely comments. 🤗 You've always been so appreciative and encouraging. Thanks a lot for that! 😳

I'm sure you'll miss it and I'll miss it too. But all things come to an end and every end brings a new start. New fiction would come around soon. 😃

Much love,

Mrina <3

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 10 years ago

#1497

Originally posted by: yoga123
Wonderful story...beautiful ending...thanks for the PM

Thank you so much! 😊

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 10 years ago

#1498

Originally posted by: Prizi
Amazinggg

Thanks! 😊

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 10 years ago

#1499

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
haye cho cho lovely!!!!

Thank you! 😳

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#1500

Awww it came to an end 😭

But what a beautiful ending

Loved it finally Asad speaks to the family

Oh it was fun them asking to who when he says they want to marry

Oh the teasing it was to expect bcuz these 2 people never want to get marry

They never got along with each other

And now they want to marry right away to each other

Haha

So finally nikaah is set all happy

Nikaah happened 3 wks of wedding bliss

Then he return alone she had to complete her job

It was nice she shifted to her gift Home

Aww he surprised her loved it

The time away made them love each other more

So he is here to pack her upa and take her home with him

No more waiting to be together

Love the song beautiful

And the dance so unromantic

Really let me show you and remind you

Love it

Looking forward for the new asya story

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