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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

I'm totally in loved this OS!

This was a BRILLIANT piece of work! ❤️

This OS is sooo A.D.O.R.A.B.L.E! 😳

Beyond Perfection! 👏

3 meetings over 3 months

Asad was clearly smitten by her

He surely felt the attraction

OMG! Zoya had his letter safe *awww*

And Zoya's letter was so cute

Asad's proposal was simple but it blew my heart away for sure

Love you heaps

Mahi

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

OMG this is the cutest OS ever!!!

An amazing piece of work ❤️

Asad was clearly head over heels for Zoya in the first meeting only 😆

I loved how you just used 'what a feeling' when he met her. Shows how he felt and how the feeling is something which couldn't be described by using a few words 😳

Then again using 'what the hell' .. Asad calm down 😆 .. You chose the right set of words to show how he's bursting with feelings from deep within 😆

'I like that girl' .. So innocent yet lovable 😳 Many choose 'I've fallen in love' or if it was me you know what I would use in place of this 🤣 but I love your choice of words to fit the characters 😳

I didn't even realize 14th Feb was Valentines until I read it in the paragraph below 🤣 I'm so absent minded (only because you occupy my mind all day everyday) ☺️

The way Zoya keeps his letters for years is so adorable makes me feel like cuddling her 😳

The girl proposes to the guy 🤣 🤣 .. Didn't see that one coming .. OMG 'It's high time you marry me' 🤣 🤣 .. Definitely the worst proposal every but something I can picture Asad saying 🤣 To be honest; I was expecting something like 'Zoya will you be mine' but that got me laughing 😆

Beautiful piece of work Mrina 🤗 .. Very nice and calm concept with AMAZING dialogues 😳

Love you to the moon & beyond 😳

Annie x

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Mera bhi :-\

Unres

Wow that was a very cute start..
Zoya is asad's childhood frnd..

He gave the card to her when zoya went us 😳 aawww

But he frgt her 😕 but felt familiar after saw her but ddnt recognized 😳
Aaww zoya proposed him.. 😉 lvly

But asad proposal was not so gud 😕

I loved it
Amzng updt

Continue soon

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Ressyy !

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*Cute*

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Hahhahaah.. Okay so..

I wasn't expecting an OS, but Yayy!! Good way to begin the day !! 😳
I loved it !

For some weird reason , I cant seem to copy paste my fav lines from the OS ! 😒

I loved how he descirbes er features, cute nose 😆

Their second meet , She remembered him, He replied great ! with a wide grin.

And then 14th feb ! ❤️
A very valentiney proposal ! Hayye . Childhood lovers.😳

Hey, that was a cute proposal, He asked her to marry him and she sealed the deal with a kiss ! ☺️❤️

Aise aur OS' likhte rehna. Jaldi jaldi !

Okay bye,
ANd yes , bahut saara pyaar ! 😃😳

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Az07

@Az07

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

R
That's so sweet os
Loved it totally
Can u turn it into a TS like showing there FB

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Oh dear. this came as a surprise for me😃 i just read the title and opened to read it. and when i reached the end, boom, i saw ur name. i was like😆

I loved this story. cute and sweet😃

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aman

@aman93

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

awww... lovely os... both are so cute..

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SimplySmile

@SimplySmile

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Very AsYa-licious🤪,

The cards, I must say were adorable,

And I am praising Zoe right now for being a modern woman and proposing to the guy first👏, HELL YA,

If she'd waited for him, it would have taken a couple of months for him to realize who she was😆,

LOVED IT❤️

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

I have read a similar story!

It was in the compilations of "my favorite love stories" by rajinder singh or something like that...!

But loved it!

Short yet so so so cute!!

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