#3 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 10- 15 ! Link new thread !

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

amazing part

asad is sooo much angry

awe very cute asya moments

thanx for pm

do pm me for next part

continue soon

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-silentbang-

@-silentbang-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

nice update
asad is so angry with najma
but his anger is also justified
loved asya's bonding
loved zoya when she said ' chalta fhirta dictionary'😆😆
loved to see the bonding of asad and tamatar
continue soon

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Thanks for Update.

It was very nice part.

Asad(KSG) really worried and scared for Zoya and Najma and he hurts himself,thats so sad for him.

Zoya was also scared for the incident and by seeing Asad(KSG) wound she feels bad,scolding him so nicely for hurting himself,it was so nice.

The way Zoya asked Asad(KSG) not to leave her thats so nice.

The moments of ASYA(KABHI) were so cute.

The picnic part was so nice and The way Zoya and Dilshad convincing her was so nice.

Najma feeling guilty for the mall incident,and Asked Asad(KSG) to forgive her and Asad(KSG) forgave her,it was so nice.

Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.

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(ASAD will be KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY,MISSING ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PRIYAKABHI.

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

awe such a cute part Bano

Asad scolded Naj 4 her carelessness

buddhu injured his hand

Asya scene was too cute

i loved all of it

Naj apologized in d end

& Asad forgave her

D scene on breakfast

when Zoya & Dillu were convincing Asad was cutest

Loved it aur kitni baar bolun yaar😆

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Bano.. you don't get depressed thinking it is not coming out well.. Infact the story is progessing very well.. Liked the way Zoya and Najma bonded during ice cream scene but later whatever Zoya went through was 😭.. so how does she come out of her current mental status and realize Asad's love for her.. and what had happened with her ..the baby.. am sure you will be doing a great job out of it.. so relax and write..

Thanks for continuing 😊

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Morsmorde

@Morsmorde

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Wow lovely chapter :)

They went to have a picnic.

Finally asad forgive her :)

Thanks 4 pm

Update soon.

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Amulya

@Amulya9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

awesome update Bano..
loved it..
asad scolded nazma... I can understand his fear...
ASYA r so cute n lovely...
they slept together ...hayee
wow they r gng fr picnic...would love 2 ASYA scenes more...
I'm happy all is well between asad n nazma
continue soon..