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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

what a lovely update!
Asad is recovering slowly
I like his childish behavior
I like when zoya woke him softly, brush his teeth, spong bath, dressed his kurta
Overall I like everything in this part
Aapne rulaya bhi nahi so thank u
Thank u so much for pm

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Edited part!!
Aww its cho cute!!
Asad & baby!!
Its a sweet thing!!
Loved it!!

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Oh dear...thank you ... and d update...shall i say it again...its beautifully written... i could imagine the same...and i never expected dis chapter so soon...

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Zoya is trying her level best to gain her old Asad back.

But poor Asad he only rememebers Zoya in his dreams😭 my heart broke reading that i which he was pleading to Zoya in sleep😭

Why my Asad? cant he be happy atleast once in his life?😭 and why my Zoya? Cant she get the love? Any why my Asya? Why cant they have the happily ever after?😭

I guess thats love. they have to overcome all the tests of fate to be together😊

And by the way i would loveee to see AsYa's kids😉😆

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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

both parts are awesome and yes a long way to go ;) loveed it

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

I unresd on pg 3 4 last part😉

by mistake forgot 2 remind u so u missed it😳

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Mahera

@Maz8

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Aaawww Asad is making some progress! Update soonish 😃

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

awesome.

loved it.

hope asad will be fine soon

plz update soon

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

this is awesome sweetheart..

each update is getting better...

you portray things without much of dialogue..

keep writing...

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zynia890

@zynia890

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Read the last two updates... loved them a lot...zoya trying too hard...and Asad he still have nightmares of zoya...I hope everything gets good...continue soon...