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princess101 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
COngrats on the new thread di :D
I loved the update sooo much I was ready to cry it was amazing
pleaseee PM me when u update
update soon pleaseee
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
wow so cute
i hope that asad will soon become stable
pls pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Heart touching update.
Hope Asad recovers soon
Thanks for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
That was wonderful updt sri
Nd I loved it a lot

I was so scared at 1st when he behaved like that in the presence of zoya too...
I mean I ddnt expected that..
I thought wht if he doesn't want to come near zoya too... !!
Thnk god..

Poor zoya.. So job bhi mila.. Actually solution...
Hope she ll manage both of them.. Asad nd her job too..
Dillu was also there so she ll I m sure...

Hey I mssd humi a lot tdy...
Strange na.. But seriously I missed her..
Whr is she ???

Asad k situation mujhe bahut rola Rahi hai yaar..
Actually u making me cry with each updt of urs

After bb.. I m crying dis one only...

Teek kardo na jaldi... Pllleeeaaassseee...

I totally loved dis one

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
thank you for the PM...nice update..well written...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Oh this was so lovely <3
Zoe's care for Asad and the determination she has is so heart touching.
Cont soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HELLO SHELLO!!

SEE WHO'S HERE?? SURPRISED TO SEE ME SOON...😆

A QUICK SHORTY UPDATE...FOR YOU ALL...ENJOY!!

THIS UPDATE GOES TO:

SAIMA DI: EVEN NOW WHEN I READ YOUR COMMENTS, I DOUBT UPON MY EYES...THAT YOU ARE READING MY WORK...IT'S UNBELIEVABLE FOR ME!!!😃😳

AASHIQUA: HEY BUDDY!! YOUR SWEET COMMENT WAS THE FIRST THING THAT MADE ME SMILE AS I WOKE UP TODAY!!🤗


PART 13A: TRY TRY AGAIN!!

BANNER CREDITS: ImmortalLove😊

A MONTH LATER- MONTH TWO...

Zoya woke up groggy and groaning this morning when the alarm screamed in her ears. She looked at a peacefully sleeping husband of hers and her displeasure disappeared. She was experiencing a new challenge everyday in her life...just as she got up in the morning, she had to be ready for her office...blessed she was, that it wasn't miles away from her place...just a few minutes walk. She buried herself deeper and deeper into the computer screens and the files to be feeded always flooded her desk. In a short span of time, she had made friends with almost all the peope working here.

But amidst all this, she never forgot her priority. Bet that, there wasn't a day that she didn't watch the sunrise with Asad. Their morning talks were a ritual...actually Zoya talked and Asad listened. At night, she would always put him to sleep...in the warmth of her lap...even if she was tired and aching after a tiresome day at work.

Zoya had decided today to try something new...of course after consulting Azaad. She was not allowed to take Asad out...as he was still vulnerable but she has to make him accept his surroundings and so she had devised a plan...

She drew the curtains until it let the sunlight enter the previously dark room. Asad turned in his sleep and groaned. Zoya chuckled on his childish behavior and woke him up softly. Quickly, she made him get up and brush his teeths and then gave him a sponge bath. Dressed in his kurta pyajama, he looked devilishly handsome...she mentally noted to thank Azaad for allowing him to wear those...she just hated those boring hospital clothes.

Habitual to their morning ritual, Asad started walking towards the window but Zoya held his hand. He turned and his face expressed a confused look. Zoya just rejoiced on seeing him express himself...even if it was confusion...but it was better than a blank look on his face. She gave him a small smile and walked towards the door...Asad following close behind her. As soon as Zoya opened the door, Asad shrinked back in fear and held her upper arm...his nails digging in Zoya's flesh. Zoya wanted to scream but held herself back. She knew that it was impossible to take him outside so soon but at least she can make him watch the happenings outside from within the confines of their room.

She turned back and held his shoulders, "Asad...we are not going out. We will be here...inside and no one will come. You just relax." Asad became less stiff but his fear was still visible. Zoya shook her head and made herself comfortable on the doorstep, motioning Asad to join her. He was reluctant...but she made gestures of enjoying the cool breeze...clapped on seeing the birds fly high above and curious as he was, Asad joined her after few minutes...and today, he intertwined his fingers in hers...

FEW DAYS LATER:

Asad and Zoya were sitting at the doorstep when Zoya noticed Dilshad watching them from a distance. She instantly got up and reached out for her. She insisted her to meet Asad to which she denied initially but was it Zoya if she's not stubborn??!! Ultimately, Dilshad walked to Asad with Zoya and Zoya sat down again beside him. Dilshad kept looking at the two and then slowly, caressed asad's head, like she had done always. Asad looked up and shifted himself close to Zoya. He wasn't afraid...just someone's presence other than Zoya's was unusual for him these days. Dilshad was turning to go when Zoya shook her head in a no. She once again introduced Dilshad to Asad...like he was a baby...she told him how good she is and how much she cared for him. She motioned Dilshad to talk to him. Dilshad obliged and sat down...she spoke to him about his childhood and his tantrums. Asad listened intently and the two ladies were just as happy as a child who has got his favourite toy.

FEW MORE DAYS PASSED...

Asad and Zoya were sitting with their eyes closed and hands extended wide apart. Zoya peeped through her one lash and saw that Asad was enjoying the feel too much. She had talked him into feeling the morning breeze this way. Dilshad who was passing by watched the two in amusement and chuckled to herself. Zoya saw her at a distance and pouted at her. Dilshad came to them and when Asad opened his eyes, he didn't shrink back. He held Dilshad's gaze for a while and then lowered his head. She caressed his head and went away smiling.

"Asad! That's bad!! You should wish her good morning..."

Asad looked at her.

"G-O-O-D M-O-R-N-I-N-G" she spelled it out for him. Asad suddenly giggled on seeing her mouth twisting, opening and closing in a weird manner. Zoya halted at that instant...to hear him laugh...to see his breath-taking smile...to be spell bound by that melodious voice of his laughter. But he had stopped giggling. Zoya smiled at him and turned around, hiding the lone tear that escaped her eyes. She had made him smile today and what if she didn't get to see him smiling today?? She has a whole life-time to hear him laugh and to devour his smiling face with her eyes. She turned back and cupped his face, pecking his right cheek lightly. Asad got up immediately and rushed inside...leaving Zoya blushing to herself.

MONTH FOUR:

Zoya was sleeping peacefully when she felt something shaking beside her. She groaned and hushed in her sleepy voice. Few minutes later, she again felt something moving. Exasperated, she woke up and switched on the light. She saw that Asad was mumbling something incoherent in his sleep and was sobbing. His stiff posture notified Zoya that he was having a nightmare. She panicked for a while but she had to be strong...this is what she repeated to herself again and again. She held his hand in hers and try waking him up. He clutched her hand tightly but didn't wake up. She heard him taking her name and she moved closer to him...

"Zo..zoya...I miss you! Please come back...I'll bring you fl..owers...Z...o...Ya..."

Zoya was dumbstruck by his words. She kept her mouth closed tightly by putting her palm as she was feeling as if she'll burst into tears anytime now. She had caused him so much of trauma still he remembered only her in his dreams. She was the one who dragged him once again into his nightmares. He was quite when awake but his sleeping subconscious mind yearned for Zoya. Unable to control her emotions, she ran out of the room and cried her heart out. When she returned back, she saw that Asad was still mumbling...she sat close to him and leaned towards his face. She pecked every part of his face...mumbling sorry in between and hugging him at the end. Though he was sleeping but he returned her hug. He calmed down but today Zoya needed the solace of his arms...she didn't want to part with him. She hid herself in his chest and closed her eyes. His musky scent soothed her but her inner turmoil kept her awake for a while...before his warmth engulfed her and they both together were lulled to sleep in each others embrace.

MONTH SEVEN:

Today Zoya had brought Najma to meet Asad. She was sure that he will rejoice meeting the baby after a long time...and that too in real. The connection he had with the baby when it was unborn was so divine...he loved the baby and will even like to meet her now. Najma had delivered a baby girl which was six months old now. Najma was afraid of his reaction at first but Zoya said that she'll handle him if something goes wrong.

Asad and Najma were sitting while Asad stared at the baby girl lovingly. He occasionally glanced at Zoya and seeing her standing beside him he again got indulged in his staring game...as if talking silently with the infant. Zoya blinked at Najma happily like thanking her for her cooperation. She was sure that the baby will make him feel good and that it did. She took the girl from Najma's hand and put it in Asad's arms...he was shocked at first but then wrapped her in his strong hands. He observed her closely and smiled at her. Reflecting his happiness to meet her, the baby smiled too...like saying, NICE TO MEET YOU TOO!!

Zoya, on the other hand, felt as if she was in seventh heaven. Seeing Asad holding a baby melted her insides.

Once Najma left, Asad seemed calm when Zoya came back seeing Najma off. She wondered if he knew how the babies came into existence and then when she realized that what she was thinking she hit her head lightly to reprimand herself on such thoughts.

Zoya smiled at her own behavior and just got lost in dreaming of her future...where she envisioned herself with Asad and their children...she again shook her head when she noticed her thoughts going crazy again. Maybe the setting sun has made the ambience romantic and seeing Asad with the baby in his hand made her so ecstatic that she just kept dreaming about hers and Asad's relation.

"Long way to go Zoya madam!!" she thought to herself and got up to change into her night clothes.

SHORT...?? I KNOW BEFORE YOU ALL SAY...BUT I WILL TRY TO UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOON...IN A DAY OR TWO!!😳

TELL ME IF YOU (DIS)LIKED IT😆

CYA SOON...

-SRASHTI.

****EDITED PART IN RED!!

NEXT PART: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109755542

P.S- PLEASE BUDDY MY PM ACCOUNT srashti21 FOR PMS...NOT THIS CRAZY4ASYA ACCOUNT...😊

Edited by -Crazy4AsYa- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
loved the update it was amazing
thanx for the pm
update soon di pleaseee 😃
Edited by princess101 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
poor asad
congo for new thread
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congo for the new thread Srash 🤗

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