The First Night: Broken Hearts.- A Saahil Shot. - Page 3

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.

This is soo beautiful..!! 👏I loved how you portrayed both their emotions!❤️

both bound in love yet thinks it to be a mistake! How sad and ironical!

You have written it so amazingly!! Bt wnt you give a proper end to it? I would really like to know what happens next !😳

Originally posted by: missbeezee

U nvr fail to amaze m...ur analysis is fabulous...im hoping thiz is how the story will develop...tks for the lovely writing...looking forward to ur next insight on mondays epi 👏

Originally posted by: subhkisonu

Beautiful OS. Soup you have an amazing writing skill, whenever I read anything from you I can visualize the whole scene. You are that good👏.

Here you beautifully described the inner feelings of both the leads.

Why don't you write some FF or at least some SS? OS is too short And Dil maange more😳

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Soup! Awesome or what it is! :D Loved it man. Thanks for the PM :)

Firstly, I just loved the title. When I read only "First Night" got a li'l excited 😆

Then. Ah. Broken Hearts 💔

I loved how the precap got your mind working on the sequel of "One Night" 😆

Yes ofcourse, there are MANY blanks between these two nights, or might say, many "nights" between these nights...😉😆

Loved the story man. This was a possibility in my mind too, maybe Nida might run away and a forced marriage with Sanam would take place.

But this. THIS is so good. Loved the inner turmoils of both of them. Aahil who wanted to be the one holding her in HIS arms, is now not ready to see her face again because she considered THAT NIGHT as a mistake which changed Aahil's whole life.

However, on a funny note. THAT NIGHT and MISTAKE takes me altogether to another level of thinking...🤣

Okay, sorry for that 😆 Loved this man. Please do update soon :)

Originally posted by: vm17

Nice story Soup.I think Tanu would like Ahil to marry Sanam as she would be a willing puppet in her hands.Nida is a head strong girl.Wonder why nobody from her family was present a t the sagai.Tanu might have done something to make Nida back out.

Ahil knows that Sanam is more comfortable around Rehan.Both are employees.Ahil is jealous of the easy going relationship between the two.

Sanam does'nt realize that in her subvoncious mind she wanted Ahil to not go away.She has to realize her feelings