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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tia.Saigal2002

Part 9: Why is this Sanam working as Barista again?? She should seriously opt for a career change either as "Daily Soap Actress" as she is such a Drama Queen or become a "Detective" as she is so good at getting information about people. Now I'm falling in love with your Sanam. This girl has nerve of steel. Despite of her drunken rambling faux pas in front of Aahil, One almost assumes that she would never ever try to meet Aahil. But No, not this Sanam. Na-Ah. She is sturdy as Bull, who tries to bring down Matador with its sharp horns.

Aahil shirtless. Well I would have fainted on spot. Sanam's kinky dreams are so much in co-relation with mine. Even I would have dreamed of kissing Aahil, while me sitting on the Kitchen Counter and he standing near me. I would have locked him between my legs, hands on his broad manly shoulder followed by an intense LIP-LOCK, simultaneously opening the buttons of his shirt and be done with the un-holy shirt of his. I so dig this Hot Sexy Heros who are in so much of Angst and Pain. Aahil's rejection speech was an anticipated move. The more vehemently Aahil rejects Sanam's advances and her love the harder he is to fall for her or he has already fallen for her but not accepting it in front of Sanam b'cos of his obvious Angst and Pain and the baggage of Guilt and Sorrow he carries around. Sanam's panic attack was the highlight of the story for me. Aahil, Aahil, Aahil. This man despite seeing Sanam in this state he did not budge. This man wuld not give in that easily it seems. Oh Dear Sanam why in the whole wide world you have to fall for this Adamant Sexy Fool??!!




Everything she said.



Tia Saigal you are something you know that! I'm in love with your comments/reviews! Am so impressed! Almost as good as reading the parts? Well almost, maybe... but most definitely a class on its own. I'm very sure suds. will agree.

And I don't think I'd mind (so much) if suds. here decides once and for all that her favourite reader is you. Coz yo you sum it up real good! And well...you do it all together too! Makes even me feel like giving you a real big hug! Right Dippy!!


Excellent!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey sardeep! I am new to this forum and i only joined IF cuz of your awessoomme and badass Sahil stories
😊
Lovely and the best FF of SaHil I have read so far!
you just make me fall in more in love with them with each of your updates.
I sometimes wish Gul reads your FF's, SS's and all ur OS so she can get some ideas and maybe even just "steal" some of your scenes and put them in the show
But really, thank you for this awesome FF, cant wait for the next update 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
^Dippu look!! Somebody joins IF just coz of you. Well really your amazing and bad ass stories.


And She loves your SaHil ones...so you gotta love her man!!


;)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

^Dippu look!! Somebody joins IF just coz of you. Well really your amazing and bad ass stories.


And She loves your SaHil ones...so you gotta love her man!!


;)


Its worth it at the end afterall 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute



THAT SCENE!!!


I was broken too!!!!



Yup.


OWNED YO!


Steve was all BUCKY IT'S ME!


anD WAS LIKE STAHP RIPPING MY HEART IT /HURTS/
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tia.Saigal2002

Part 7: Sanam is hardly getting any piece of Aahil and on top of that she wishes to get the "Artist at work, Aahil" the one who is all calm and happy giving birth to his creation. Oh Sanam always wishes to reach for the stars. Must say Sanam has some weird imaginations about serial killer and axe murderers and the whole homicidal persona. Does this Sanam lived off on Horror Movies for entertainment?? Only if she could have spend most of her time watching rom-com she would have learned a thing or two about luring Reluctant, Hot Artist into a passionate Kiss.. But this Aahil is just "Too Hard to Get" kinda material. So Sanam Baby try Harder!!!

P.S. I know most of your Fic Fans won't be happy with my comment but man you update damn fast. I disappear for two days, come back and see you already posted three updates. I wanted to request you to slow down but I rather not, b'cos others who are eager for your next update will kill me mercilessly. So I will just shut up and enjoy your updates. Oh the word "Shut Up" reminded me of Aahil the way he said "Shut Up" to Sanam. But Sanam toh Sanam hai. God forgot to fit filter in her mouth it seems. Aahil can only make Sanam "Shut Up" by giving her the thing she desires most. If only Aahil had not stepped away from her, he would have witnessed the miracle of Sanam "Shutting Up" her mouth for entire Week. That's the max she could live without speaking. LOL


seriously, i love your reviews. like legit, i was waiting for your comments 🤣

i just wanna get this one finished and done, bc i know when i read stuff, i hate it when its WIP, cos you dont know if the writer is gonna update or not. 🤣

and i have so many fics man, so i wanna get this outta the way so i can focus on them :P

but yeah, today theres gonna be none cos i just cant 🤣

i agree. she has no filter 🤣
Sanam's imagination is very uh- wild, shall i say?

very.

thanks so much for reading and giving me such good comments love, i seriously live for these <33

ily
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

But is it not awesome to come back to two/three parts waiting to be read!!


I count the minutes and hours!!


Heee!


We're not that merciless!!


But what to do!! We can't let suds. here get away for so long...she's guilty for awesomeness!


🤣

i love you so much man, you dont even know 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tia.Saigal2002

Part 8: Aahil is romantic in a twisted way. But have to admit "Style hai Boss Bande Ka" Naming the Sketch "Thanks" was heart warming and Fuzzy. No wonder Sanam's not-so-innocent crush is turning into "He is my ultimate Soul-Mate" kinda obsession. Poor Sanam here she is restless that she has not seen her reason for existence for a long time and does not even know when she would be able to meet him or see him again and these Newspaper Media is indirectly adding salt to her injury. If that was not enuff Rehaan, Haya and Rahaat the Evil Trio pestering her. Badi Ammi seriously needs to come out of Stone Age. I mean come on Badi Ammi when "Miya, Biwi Razi toh kya karega Kazi" Sorry in Sanam's case only Biwi is Raazi but Miya is pretending to be oblivious to her feelings and avoiding her like plague. I think the only way Sanam would be able to attain Aahil would be if she blames Aahil for being the father of her unborn child in Print Media. Of Course there is no guarantee that she would be alive to witness the next moment, B'cos by the time these words escapes her mouth Badi Ammi would have had buried her alive and would dance on her grave. LITERALLY. But I don't think this Sanam of yours would care much for these things. If she had, she would have had stopped with the innocent crush and would not have gone all this extra miles, from where it is just impossible for her to make an U-Turn. Really it does sucks to be Sanam for time being.


so fuzzy and warm innit? i was smiling like a lunatic as i wrote it 🤣

I think the only way Sanam would be able to attain Aahil would be if she blames Aahil for being the father of her unborn child in Print Media. Of Course there is no guarantee that she would be alive to witness the next moment, B'cos by the time these words escapes her mouth Badi Ammi would have had buried her alive and would dance on her grave. LITERALLY.

^^^^
this? GOLD.

yeah, she wont give no shits 🤣


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tia.Saigal2002

Part 9: Why is this Sanam working as Barista again?? She should seriously opt for a career change either as "Daily Soap Actress" as she is such a Drama Queen or become a "Detective" as she is so good at getting information about people. Now I'm falling in love with your Sanam. This girl has nerve of steel. Despite of her drunken rambling faux pas in front of Aahil, One almost assumes that she would never ever try to meet Aahil. But No, not this Sanam. Na-Ah. She is sturdy as Bull, who tries to bring down Matador with its sharp horns.

Aahil shirtless. Well I would have fainted on spot. Sanam's kinky dreams are so much in co-relation with mine. Even I would have dreamed of kissing Aahil, while me sitting on the Kitchen Counter and he standing near me. I would have locked him between my legs, hands on his broad manly shoulder followed by an intense LIP-LOCK, simultaneously opening the buttons of his shirt and be done with the un-holy shirt of his. I so dig this Hot Sexy Heros who are in so much of Angst and Pain. Aahil's rejection speech was an anticipated move. The more vehemently Aahil rejects Sanam's advances and her love the harder he is to fall for her or he has already fallen for her but not accepting it in front of Sanam b'cos of his obvious Angst and Pain and the baggage of Guilt and Sorrow he carries around. Sanam's panic attack was the highlight of the story for me. Aahil, Aahil, Aahil. This man despite seeing Sanam in this state he did not budge. This man wuld not give in that easily it seems. Oh Dear Sanam why in the whole wide world you have to fall for this Adamant Sexy Fool??!!


she should, right?

ksbkbt season 2. she'd be perfect.

she sanam and she got balls.

A shirtless artist who drew you in a rag. i would be dead already.

klsdufasglf ☺️

Aahil is such a turd, i know 🤣

yeah? i hope i described it right. bc i get them all the time and yeah, i know how it feels, but thats me and how i think it goes, as i dont really pay attention to whats happening when i get one, i just try not to die.

<33
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crystaltwirl

Hey sardeep! I am new to this forum and i only joined IF cuz of your awessoomme and badass Sahil stories

😊
Lovely and the best FF of SaHil I have read so far!
you just make me fall in more in love with them with each of your updates.
I sometimes wish Gul reads your FF's, SS's and all ur OS so she can get some ideas and maybe even just "steal" some of your scenes and put them in the show
But really, thank you for this awesome FF, cant wait for the next update 😛



OH MY GOD ARE YOU FREAKING KIDDING ME??

jfc.

🤗

thank you so much this is legit the best thing ever <33


oh my gooodness i am incoherent.

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH LOVE <333

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