Love Happens ASYA FF #4 EPILOGUE Up, pg 136 (09/04/15) - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet4shehzadi

yay update mil gaya

update was

awesome
fabulous
brilliant
amazing
fantastic
i love it
beautifully written 👏
continue it ASAP

thanks for pm 😆




LOL yes finally i was able to updated 😆.

Glad you liked the update 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

gr8 part

thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon



Thanks Nilu Di 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: imcooldude

hy, Chocochips ! can I call u Chocochips(chocolate+chips)
I found it more cute than Chocoberry&Chocodip.(i'll call u Chocochips only if u r fine with it)
Inreturn u can call me Abi or Avi.(first 3 alphamate of my real name or my short name&i perfer Abi.

about ch-21:
"first sorry for being late
honestly, I was sure that u'll update ch-21 on next Trusday or Friday but u prove me wrong buddy&thanQ for that"

love ring slection scene: "Zoya, the ring we buy today will be a symbol
of my love for you, it has to be perfect." He
said looking in her eyes. Zoya smiled at him
and said "But if you be so choosy and difficult
then I will never receive that symbol of love."
Her tone dripping with sarcasm. seriously. hahaha
LOL

and a jelous & inscure Asad but Zoya's trust on him help him to overcome his inscurities.


thanQ for a long & a lovely chapter
continue soon




Thanks Abi Am glad you liked the update and yes you can call me Chocochips 😃

And will say again please dont apologize coz am happy to get the comments even if late, at least you take time out to tyoe them. am happy with them and youre most welcome 😉

Youn are the only one uptil now to mention the dialouge zoya used and am happy you liked it that much coz i loved writing it too.

thanks for reading Abi 🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa




Buddy as the great Shakespear said "Whats in a name" 😉

On a serious note I still am too shy to give my real name away ☺️ . Call me Choco/ Chocoberry/Sis/Di/Buddy whatever you like 😃.

Iam ok with it 😃


I will call u choco then... 😊 😊
Fine na??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SimplySmile


Heyyy, congrats on the new thread🥳,I hope you get many many many more🤗,

I was so happy to read an update where it was mainly Asad and Zoya, that is always a very big treat for me,

It was mentioned that Asad was very insecure, why is that??? Is it something to do with his father??? Or does it come with the whole package???

But honestly, I can understand why he was feeling the way he was feeling, it seems like after such a long time he's finally found some happiness, it makes sense for him to be jealous when seeing Zoya talk to another man,

And it was also somewhat Zoya's fault as well, I get that she and Aamir had a lot in common but I was really expecting for her to realize that Asad feels left out and include him in the conversation,

Nice to know that Aamir isn't a villain, he seems alright,

I'm glad the two shared their feelings and worked everything out. What Asad said was very unexpected and I was glad to know that he was just joking, but the way he apologized was cute,

Loved the update,
Update soon,
Please PM when you do:)





Thanks Sonny 😃


Yes its a treat to read just asad n zoya, i crave for the same when i read other stories.

He was insecure cause Zoya is the first girl who he has fallen for and she was so busy talking to his friend unintentionally ignoring him.

What Zoya was doing was that she wanted to know whatever she could about asad's childhood from his friend who has had first hand experience.

Asad wasnt joking, he had just let his irrational side take over, but as soon as he saw zoya doing what she did for him, he snapped back to his senses and apologized 😊


Hope all this explanation helps.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: laks_vish

wow fun,emotional,jealousy and loads of love mixed together in this update..well written!




Thanks Buddy. Am glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess101

loved it

thanx fro the pm
update soon




thank You 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Woowww...
First of all a biiig thaank u for this...

I always ( from asya- kabhi days) used to wish to see something exactly like dis to happen...and finnaally u did it... 👏 ...

Have seen manyy jealous scenes of asad n it was way to different... 👏

Loved each n every part of this update... Ending last part was amazing,
Mind blowing,
Heart touching,
Wat else...no words...

I won't be able to describe what I feel about the update...
The way you explained asads feelings, insecurity, fear,possessiveness AND his guilt about his behavior, wowww... Great job...

Fabulous!!!!




Youre most welcome Buddy. Am glad you liked it.

Am honored to get such feedback for whatever i was able to write here. Thankyou once again and you leave me with no words to thank you enough for liking the update so much 🤗


Love you Buddy ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Azraa01

At one point I thought Asad was going to punch Aamir.. But he managed to control his anger..
Loved Asya make-up session on the roadside..




Thanks Azraa am glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA


I will call u choco then... 😊 😊
Fine na??




Absolutely, yeh theek hai. I like it too 😃

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