AsYa SS~ Beautiful Scars~ Chapter 3 Pg 22 up*5July14 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
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arshi writer ho na?? They r my fav too!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
hey dear interesting start
suspence thriller

pls update soon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Wow...this one is interesting
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
This is super interesting. Paras is she AAKs gf? she commited suicide but he wont believe it.

Hard to digest akram as a non evil person 😆

Zoya and beren hmm. she felt a presence around her is that AAK? and the prologue, maybe the first chap happenning after it??

so many ques in mind and trying to unveil them. update soon and send me pm next tym am sending BR in ur other id
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

""Give me one chance of explaining myself." He begged. She looked right through him scuffing and somewhat smiling desolately.

"Given...""


The 1st chapter was intriguing, look forward to the read.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
interesting start!! definitely intriguing!!
paras is zoya??
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Wow talk about keeping us on out toes,

I'm very intrigued by the story line,

I'm so hating you for ending the prologue at that point, its frustrating me. Who is she and who is he??? I want it to be and don't want it to be AsYa at the same time.

Zoya seems like the broken soul suffering from a heartbreak. Asad seems like the cold-hearted business with a dark past. I don't know what to think of Akram or Beren, I hope they're just add ons to the story,

But the character concerning me the most is Paras, who is she????? I eel as if she's Asad's lost love, I badly hope its not, but I'm very intrigued by the story here.

Please PM when you update next, I've sent you a buddy request,

Update soon:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
My god mysteries I love them
So Zoya is paras or not
She left asad but she said she give one chance
Waiting cool...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Quite intriguing 😊

Beautifully written😊

Narration was amazing with amazing choice of words !!!! 👏

So asad is looking for Paras who apparently has committed suicide 😲

Who could she be (asad's gf/sis/friend) 🤢

Zoya lives in Brazil wow

She's running/hiding from her past

Question is could Paras and zoya be the same ????? 😛

Please continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Nice a new asya story yay
So zoya running for her pass
And asd is I'm search of someone a paras who is that
Could it be zoya
Continue soon thnx for pm

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