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Suri

@BlackJack.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Emaani.95
Part 1 was a lovely read. I am loving the character of Asad.
Umm .. I guess Paras and Zoya are the same girl. As Zoya is trying to forget her past so she must have changed her identity in the process. So that no one from her past could locate her. It's just a guess. 😳
Curious to know what happened in her past.
I have no issues with the length yet. 😆
May I know for which couple you had penned this fiction down?
I hope you'll update soon. I have sent a buddy request to your PM account so I hope to receive a PM for the further updates. 😊
You're a great writer Suri. 😊

yeah yeah the guesses are in the right direction.

cool peoplee do have issue with length sometimes.

umm i am doing this thing parallely for RishBala...

yep as soon as i can send links from that acount.

thank you... this was a nice long comment.😃

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Suri

@BlackJack.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sasir
different
but lil confusing but i think it will clear when the story progress
will be eagerly waiting for next update.
hope its not sad story
plz update soon

Thank you..sure will update as soon as i get time.😃

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Emaani.95

@Emaani.95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: AshesToDust
yeah yeah the guesses are in the right direction. Yayy! See, I am so intelligent. 😆
cool peoplee do have issue with length sometimes. I might have in the future. 😉
umm i am doing this thing parallely for RishBala... I like Drashti from DMG times but don't like her as Madhubala 😳
yep as soon as i can send links from that acount. Will be waiting.
thank you... this was a nice long comment.😃 Most welcome! 🤗

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Suri

@BlackJack.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Emaani.95

i hardly watch it but you see the setting suits them more... the film industry and blah blah.

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Divya.S.R

@Divya.S.R

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Nice start... 👏

Well ya it seems confusing but I somehow feel that in prologue it must have been Paras and Asad..😊

I'm guessing after she said given she would have jumped in the water herself.. and they wouldn't have found the body..

which is the reason why Asad is sure that she is alive while others think that she is dead. and is determined to get her back.. as in the prologue too he came to explain to her just cause he didn't want to loose his girl...

coming to Zoya.. She seems to be running from her past.. till we get to know what or whom she is running away from I'm gonna just assume that she is paras..🤓

Probably she didn't die.. or someone might have saved her... and she would have changed her name so that Asad cannot find her.. and is now trying to dodge him.. 🤓

Did I get anything right?? 🤣

Update soon and give bigger parts.. 😃

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Emaani.95

@Emaani.95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: AshesToDust
i hardly watch it but you see the setting suits them more... the film industry and blah blah.

That doesn't matters!

As it's a fanfiction so it gives you the freedom to set everything as you want. Doesn't matter if your imagination or ideas suits the original story or not. 😃