AsYa TS- Rain Rain Go Away!-Part 2-Pg 37- 24/6/14 - Page 38

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

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Well Zoya has been doing her part of stalking too.. 🤣

she bribed the kids to find out when he visits?? 🤣🤣

ab she is not a saint either 😉😳

if i were in Zoya's place, then i would do the same 😳😉

oh no.. you definitely are smitten.. 😳.. Well she does have an idea of what Asad might be thinking seeing her nephew with her.. 🤣

Is he thinking what I assume he is? OH! Freak! I Hope Not!

ha ha... yeah!! 😆

Asad was looking flabbergasted 😆😉

Well this Asad doesn't seem to be judgmental... 👏 which is really good..

Well it's nice that they started talking..

Rain seems to love them... 😆

i personally don't like judgmental guys.. 😛

so i didn't make him one here 😉

ha ha..yeah!! though i had kept talking less here... more was about their POV's 😛

Awww.. Zeeshan is hungry and tired.. Poor baby... Way to go Asad.. Take initiative and drop her home..

which he did!! 😉😆

Hahaha.. he asked her if the kid was her's ... 🤣🤣 Atleast they had a good laugh..

it helped them to come out of their awkwardsness 😳🤣

nice.. she offered for him to stay back till the rain stops.. 😳 and the ever so Gentleman that he is insists he stay in the front porch... 🤗

no girl would ever let any guy in so easily...😛

Zoya somewhere knew that Asad was not any random stalker..

and Asad proved her thoughts right 😳😛

Aww loved the boat scen where he sails his boat, making ripples to direct it and his boat steadying her boat and both sailing together...

it was a beginning of their now.. 😳

my fav. lines

I created some more ripples, and we saw them moving together again, hand in hand. The little drizzles teased them, yet they made their way together, till the time they reached their harbour.

I looked at the sky. The grey mass had receded, making its way for the Sunlight that kissed our faces and sent a feeling of warmth that both of us came aware of, together.👏😳😃

beautifully said...

thank you so much for the long and lovely comment Divya 😳🤗

Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

Yippee!

Now that's what I want

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

Beautiful update
lov each and every part!
When i started reading this chap...i was wondering how wud they fall for each other in a single chap..
Than ur note cleared it...
An attraction stage...
Bur ankie we wud love to read the journey to their love though!
Can't u tun it into an SS...plz???

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

I vl comment in a while anku

Originally posted by: BeYourself

i said note.. not an update 😉😆

i am not going to continue it... will give my reasons and POV in that note 😊

hopefully, you will not be disappointed after you have a read of it 😛

Originally posted by: Azraa01

I didn't think you'd manage to make them fall in love in 1 chapter, but then I read your note and understood, that some things are not mean to be rushed.

Loved the update and how Zeeshan got them to interact, even though it was with paper boats...

Don't you want to show the journey to their love??

Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

All I can say is that...

ALLAH MIYA, WHATS WRONG WITH YOU??!!!

Inna wada aur sona kahaani ko

Tussi why not continuing?

Well issi baat pe ek shehr ars hai

We have heard in all kings stories ki king ke baad their son will be the heir

We have heard in all kings stories ki king ke baad their son will be the heir

Jo tum apne readers ke saath kar rahi ho it's not fair

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey,

It was beautiful. I now understood you point. This one was directed towards attraction only not the whole steps to final stage of love.

It was natural to do what the two did. They wanted to spend time with each other yet maintain their distance too till they were very sure of their choice & rain did give them a medium o be together.

Now can you write a TS on the second stage of love? Would love to read it.

Love..

Originally posted by: BeYourself

i loved the sher 😉😳

and coming to your point,

it will all be the same from here... like isn't it obvious that they will keep meeting each other on every Monday and then more frequently.. till the time love happens..??

i don't want to write anything that makes the story all the same..