AsYa TS- Rain Rain Go Away!-Part 2-Pg 37- 24/6/14 - Page 37

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

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Sorry ankie dear i was lil busy i hope u know the reason.
So bear this late comment😳

i know the reason Ani 😉😳

and thanks for this pic 😳

Unres😃
Firstly: happy bithday wishes to u all my buddies - divya, riddhi,mahuu bear, ritzy , sunny and adv b'day to my dear don😳
Stay blessed. Hope u all will get all the happiness in this world.
May god bless u all.
Have a Happy year ahead😃

Thank You on their behalf Ani...😳

and they are wishing the same for you too 😳

secondly: Wat a great start dear👍🏼
Im so happy that u r come with a TS to surprise us.
Thank u so much for dedicating this TS to us🤗

awww😳

i am glad that you liked the start Ani 😳😛

and also the surprise 😃🤗

Thirdly: this was brilliant.
This was a right opposite side of asad akmed khan.
Who was smitten with her☺️

This AAK was opposite to the others 😳

He is definitely shareef, but not dumb! 😳😆

Fourthly: I loved both their pov. It was beautifully written👏

Thanks once again Ani 😳

Fifthly: i think i cant describe what i truly feeling right now, sometimes. Something are just beautiful and no words can truly give justice to it. So its better to be quiet and simply enjoy this raain rain go away😃

This was such a huge compliment dear 🤗

Sixthly: i personally love rain but like asad i always believe , everything has a time of its own. so i hate rain sometime. 😛

hain na?? same is with me 😆

Seventhly: i found something as a new which i never read before that is rashid as his super hero😆

that was something new too..other wise he is the villain in every story 🤣

eighthly: being careless didn't suit AAK character😆 he thought himself - asad mesmerized by her beauty. Completely smitten by stranger girl😆
Even he stalked her by standing behind pillar and then he came everyday in the hope to see her and also he demanded her attention🤣

that's the best thing about attraction..it makes you do a lot of things that you don't do it usually 😛

Ninethly: wow what a clever zoya - she noticed him stalking her. Even she smitten with him at her first sight❤️ loved zoya intro😳
Even she also came to orphanage everyday.
Finally monday agaye😆
Adorable couple

Zoya acted like a smart girl here!! girls are often very active in such cases!! 😉😆

Tenthly: i loved this nursery rhymes 😆
I can't believ that it was ur random thought lol it was simple fabulous. Now who is that new kid in orphanage. Cliffy end.
Chalo im not going to ask for an update bcoz u already updated but i was late with comment.
Now im rushing to read next part im so excited.
Cant wait😆.
Thanks n love yah ankie

Ani😊

thank you so much darling for this awesome comment!!

your comments are always so great to read and reply back 😳

go ahead and read the next part.. and let me know how it was! 😉🤗

Originally posted by: treasure11

Tere chakkar mein mera pizza hamesha thanda ho jata hai ankiee 😳

Hawww😲

but you said that i was 2 mins early 😲😡

Hayeee ye barishh yaha ku nahi attii 😆

It isn't raining here at all 😆

its raining a lot here 😆

Comming to the update 😳

I was shocked that he even started the conversation ...and it started raining soon after 😆

As she took kids inside with her even he followed ...I thought he would keep wondering to follow her or not...🤣

Must say this Asad was a brave one in terms of dealing with zoya 🤣

ha ha.. 😆

see, this Asad is anything but dumb 😳

and don't view him as Asad..imagine him as any random guy.. and you will understand the attraction phase better 😛

Stalking her,Offering her a lift,Putting on the music even... 😆and finally confirming if it was her kid or not 🤣

I would have loved to read ZOYA persuading him to come inside her house while both getting wait 😳😆

but we generally don't do that to strangers na 😳😆

I can imagine ...him in white shirt and a tie..coat removed...both completely drenched sailing boats😳TIP TIP BARSA PANII...🤣🤣

☺️

And...ermmm...I did'nt get the significance of the title 🤔* embarrssed*

you don't have to be embarrassed...😊

see, Asad and Zoya both are cursing the Rain everytime it came between them...

hence the title...

and at last, the rain did go away, leaving a clear sky for them..

clous of uncertainty were gone! 😊

So this was just a phase of attraction 😳and love can happeen when they meet every monday 😳

that's what it is supposed to happen.. 😛

Attraction at first sight is more convincing than Love at first sight 😆

The song ...only reminds me of the one which kids sing 😕 and why would they want the rain to go away whn they were throughly enjoying 🤔

ha ha...i don't really understand love at first sight...hence it is attraction for me 😆

ha ha..i love to get wet in the rain myself 🤔🤣

I DUNNO WHY I USED THIS COLOUR 🤣

i dont know that too 😳😆

Originally posted by: Amulya9

awesome update... totally loved it
ASYA POV is beautifully penned
asad offered her lift 😉
the way he confirmed abt that kid Is soo cute
n ya Zoya faroqui can do anything
paper boats. ..I sooo love them
asad creating ripples n making their boats float together part is lovely
😛 can I get part 3 ...pleeejjj
this story reminded me of my most favorite rhyme n paper boats 😊 childhood days 😛 I vl prepare paper boat now 😛

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Oh this is my most favourite part of all love stories! The attraction phase!


And this is a story on that phase!


Make it as long as possible! And as beautiful as you've made it thus far!


Wow!



Incredible part 2!!


Love the little interaction!




Awesome work!

Originally posted by: Garimavirmanksg

Its awesm. Plzz convrt it into ss or ff. The concpt is amazing.

Originally posted by: jas91

awesome updt😃

really loved it😉

can't u change it into FS or SS😳

i enjoyed reading this story😊

Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

it was awesome blossom

pls do cotinue it!!!!11

Originally posted by: aman93

sweet story

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

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Happy belated birthday to all the girls and Happy birthday to Sunny.. 🥳

And thanks a lot for that sweet dedication.. 🤗

thanks a lot on their behalf 😳

and they are wishing the same for you 😳

awww😳

my pleasure 😳😛

First off.. I'm must tell you have chosen my fav. weather.. 😳

Monsoon is my favourite too if i am allowed to sit at home and enjoy it 😉😆

Asad as usual is fed up of the weather being late and what not.. Mr.I'm-always-perfect 😡..

but it's actually very annoying you know 🤣

That was sweet of him wanting to keep the tradition going... 😳.. Poor guy misses his father a lot..

he is a nice son 😳

and Rashid is rarely good in stories 😉😆

and there he spots her..

Well He seems mesmerized at the very sight and wants to get look at her face... 😳

AAK.. are you stalking.. 😆

he is staking! again, he is not!! 😉😆

Aww.. It was cute to see him hide and stare at her.. but my did she feel creepy at first and waited for him to leave ... Ohh nice now she does her own little staring... 😆

ha ha.. 😆

any girl would think like that.. isn't it?? 😉😳😆

Gosh!! these two are so cute... 😳

Awww... Asad Ahmed Khan is stalking a girl... 😳

Can't wait for these two to come face to face.. 😳😉

hain na.. 😳

they both are really very cute ☺️😆

in the next chapter 😳🤣

Originally posted by: BeYourself

thanks a lot Lasya.. 😳

and regarding continuing it... i will soon come up with a note 😊