AsYa SS-WALLBANGER!Round 9 - Pg 98, 4th Aug! - Page 56

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Posted: 10 years ago
On fire, for sure!
Firstly, my dear Juliet... Thank you for letting me play a part in your story. You made me sound hot and you made me an angel in a red sari - And then... *sigh* I am playing tonsil hockey with Ian, and I shall marry him in some alternate universe!

I LOVE!

Secondly... WOW! I am just loving how this is unravelling. The relationship between Asad and Zoya has gone through so many phases already in such a short space of time.

I loved Zoya's outburst - hell hath no fury like a horny woman refused hot sex with a hot man!

Now we'll watch her be there for him, after this bad news?

Love love love! Gimme more, baby!

❤️🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Am i glad or Am I glad...you finally updated...but you make me sad now...why oh why is this your last story. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice updates
do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry Guys I am aware an update is due on this one. Something came up leaving me no time to write. I am going to continue this shortly with a long update.

Cheers.
Juliet
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Posted: 10 years ago
Taken down at discretion of author. Thanks for understanding.
Edited by Perfectionist2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
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Yay me first..
First of all thanks for your wishes dear..

Now to the update it was awesome.
Juliet you are truly blessed and talented..
I can't express how well u write that u make normal reading as though it's a film going on.
With just the talking and kinky phone calls u made the whole part so very hot n interesting...

It's really not easy what you do and how u write..
Dear u r a gifted writer..

I so love your works ..
And Zafar gosh u love him don't u?

He has to be there all the time.
Asya were amazing here..

I would say Asad was more accommodating maybe coz he truly loved her n still couldn't let go of her after all the mess too.

Please continue soon.
Edited by sweet_tehs - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dirty talking, kinky phone calls and I love love love it. Haha. Juliet your style like no other truly.
Asya are totally awesome. Hahahaha. Zafar. you surely do love him but we love Asya... So you know we want them soon banging together. captain Humongous should definitely find the way to the treasure chest. love love the update.

👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Never thought we'd see the day when it would be a battle of the wits between these two. Well, battle of sexual innuendos more like it. Either way, enjoyable as ever. 😛

I'll add to this comment once I get onto my laptop. My phone is not the best for long reviews.

Peace!

Oh and 💔

I'm back!
The thing I like about this story is that it's just sooo hilarious. Pure comedy and still has a plot to it. The initial dislike towards each other that slowly morphs into tolerance then slowly into friendship. And obviously, the girls are like an added advantage.

I'm just wondering of I can try to persuade you to keep writing. You're fab. Be it smut, cpmedy, angst, or whatever. You've got a knack for keeping everything well balanced in your stories.

And yes I know you're sure I'll hate you but whatever. It's all for fun.

Keep at it gorgeous and you already know that I'm your fan. ❤️
Edited by AmbroseFever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved this update...my favrt one in this story 😳
their phone convo...nd the way he always says her swthrt 👏
he is jelous ...well serves him right...
waiting for next

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