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jasminerose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#531

Awesome Update!!!

MeoWWW!!! HAHAHHAH

HAHHAHHAH

And I honestly giggled and snorted in the office just now... HAHHAHAHA

Oh GOD!! I laughed the most at the Meoww and Giggle in the first chapter. FARZ!!! That was us. HAHHAHAHAHHA

Loved the update,

the next one reserved for a detailed appraise.

Jules you rock babe!! No one can make us laugh ever like you do. You are brilliant

Mwah Mwah!! I am so happy you are writing.

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laks_vish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#532

Aweesome update...i want to see tammy..sadie and satakshi faces while reading this update..guys we love you and juliet u rock...

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sarra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#533

Res

unres
sorry I didn't comment before I was busy 😳
thank you for the PM
awesome and amazing update ..I love it
asad was a real gentleman and with value he didn't take advantage of zoya even think he really want to be with her but she understand something else ...this a big MU ...
Asad was very sad and angry and hurt because of zoya words ...he was thinking she will never judge him or look down at him ...this part was really emotional ..perfect

your written is fab and wonderful I really love your story
I can't wait to read more from you ..pls update soon

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#534

Jules u r still sticking wid last story ka jaap😲

meri dhamki ka no asar tum par...u don't love me😭😭

par main bhi ziddi hon tera picha nahi chodungi

updt was very nice

Zoya got jello again seeing Tamara

she was thinking all weird things in mind about them😆😆

Asad ki do aur Harem members got introduced by Asad

yeh kam tha ke Asad started dancing wid them fuelling d fire in her heart

that scene when she felt lonely when every1 else was busy was very sad I felt 4 her

when Asad came 2 her she throwed herself on him

My god her throwing money on his face as price was just 2 much😲

like Zoe sprinkled salt on his wounds💔

that must have hurt him a lot he sahred his life wid her & she gave a tight slap on his face wid her words😔

Dillu ko Heart attack aaya plz don't let anything happen 2 her I love Dillu

this part was very intense & emotional

I enjoyed it Jules don't say again ki this is last story cuz I will get angry than😒

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Pagalpinky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#535

Wow
This update was so intense

Poor Assad he opened his heart to zoya and it backstabs him
Zoya uff you're drunk leave the poor guy alone, of course he's not gonna take advantage of you! Plus she said she'll forget in the morning and that really killed the mood for him. I could imagine him furious but controlled when he heard that. Then to top it off the whole money sex thing! Wow! Intense

Amazing update
Very true and bitter but realistic

Loved how she met his harem girls one by one
And loved loved that they all knew about zoya
Silly zoya didn't even notice that

Great great update
Excited for next part

Thanks! Please don't stop writing love your work

Hmmm wondering when did he realize he was in love with zoya :)

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#536

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was so happy to see You.😊

Missing You so Much.😭

Both Parts were Amazing.😊

Zoya Jealousy on Round-5 Part was so Nice.😊

Round-6 Part was so Emotional but very Interesting.😊

Zoya 's Pain was so sad.😭

Asad(KSG) angry was so Nicely explained.

The Whole two parts was so Interestingly explained.😊

Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊

__________________________________

(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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life4me

@life4me

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Posted: 10 years ago

#537

Loved it. Continue soon please.

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@ChamakChallo91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#538

Wow!!

Zoya jealous of Asad's friends was great!

When the guys were talking to each other about the girls was hilarious 😆

Asad and Zoya's argument was so intense!!

Can't wait for the next part!!

Thanks for the pm :)

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rajsmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#539

Wow! This update was high voltage!! So Asad is in love! So cute...So want to read more...

Please don't stop writing...You said "last on this forum" Does that mean you write elsewhere? Would love to read your stuff...

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#540

Nikki Reed tho

OMG

This round was something

Asad and Zoya

Their like face-off

That was fire

Juliet I hope you write another story

You're a really great writer

I've read all your AsYa stories

They're phenomenal

Seriously

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