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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awww yeah! Man, THIS. WAS. SO. GOOD.

So totally awesome ya! You have written that so so well!! That was some amazing stuff there!

Loved and just loved each and every bit of it! :D

The essence of Aahil has been so well captured. The wall he has maintained around him, and how its slowly beginning to break..it was so beautifully written ❤️

How he was hesitant, and not ready to give into his feelings. And then back to being ARI.

Dude, its not you, its SHE who owns you! 😆

And the last part, that smile that crept on his lips, aww! Even i smiled reading that 😳😆

Why the hell is this an OS?? Please make it like a TS/SS or an FF?? 😆

Please write more!! Please! I beg of you! 😆

Edited by Prags_Sociopath - 11 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...
Unres.

Just love it
superb awesone
u r amazing writer
wonderful Os as last one
beautifully written u describe Aahil emotions in a perfect style well done plz write a SS or TS on Sahil please...

thanks so much dear🤗
I am happy to know that i could please you!😳 i tried to portray Aahil as best as i can.😳 I have nt thought about that but i will write if and whenever any plot strikes me and that's a promise! Though am nt sure whether it can be an SS or TS bt OS --Yes ! 😛

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--Sana--

@--Sana--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awesome
Very well written
Loved it
Keep writing dear

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Sanjeeda

@.Sad.But.True.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

It was amazing..Loved it..I could picture it all in my mind <3.Please write more.
Thanks for pm dear🤗

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Enigmatic_Angel
*Unres*

Beautiful..lovely 😊

Thanks for reading dear!😳

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sylvia99

Beautiful

thank you! :)

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

Nice job👏

Loving it,

Oh how I wish this would happen in the show,

Thanks so much for reading and loving it dear.🤗
I wish the same dear thats why i wrote it since in the show we got no such Saahil moment.

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

This is lovely, beautiful, you should continue...

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: chco
lovely😛

thanks!😊

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath
Awww yeah! Man, THIS. WAS. SO. GOOD.
So totally awesome ya! You have written that so so well!! That was some amazing stuff there!
Loved and just loved each and every bit of it! :D

The essence of Aahil has been so well captured. The wall he has maintained around him, and how its slowly beginning to break..it was so beautifully written❤️
How he was hesitant, and not ready to give into his feelings. And then back to being ARI.
Dude, its not you, its SHE who owns you!😆
And the last part, that smile that crept on his lips, aww! Even i smiled reading that😳😆

Why the hell is this an OS?? Please make it like a TS/SS or an FF??😆
Please write more!! Please! I beg of you!😆

thank you soo much! means a lot to me🤗
So Right you are!! Sanam owns Him...! but poor guy is still unaware...😆

aww...glad i could make you smile dear.😳
well...i havent thought about continuing this...but i will definitely keep your words in mind and do it in future if i can!😊

p.s.if you dnt mind dear may i know your name please? :)

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