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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

lovely beginning ended with a twist
what is next??

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#422

hey plz pm me for updates

i read and comment on each part

continue soon

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day_lily

@day_lily

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Can never get enough of Aahana n her cuteness...Loved it

N here comes Gaffur😡

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: jas91
excellent updt Ankita Di👏
Asad was admiring a sleeping Zoya
they were having their sweet cozy moments wid Anu sandwiched btw them☺️
my baby Anu got disturbed wid her parents romance🤣
Anu is d most adorable character i come across in any ff❤️
u did a brilliant job in making her so cute & adorable👏❤️
Dillu chose d right time 2 come there & both r numb what 2 do now😲😳
Asad made a lame excuse but Dillu still catch their lie😆
D Nikah date is fixed hurry🥳
Asad is touched by Zoya's selfishness & his love respect & admiration increases 4 her❤️
Zoya did something in Asad's room but what🤔
mayb some family photo she made 😕
so d belated precap come into action😆
So Asad got 2 know it was guffi behind Anu's kidnapping😡
glad that Zoya didn't leave his side at that time 👍🏼
but i m scared what will b his reactions knowing Zoya is Guffi's daughter
but amazing updt⭐️
loved it😃
& thank u so much 4 giving so many Anu's scene🤗
i just love her cuz no other writer have succeeded in portraying such a cute charater till now
so its a reqst plz keep giving us these happy doses of Anu from time 2 time😆😉

Thanks 😃 glad you liked the update and glad you love Aahana. But I think I'll have to leave it to giving Aahana more in my OS series now, or else I won't be getting to move the story ahead. As a child she can only do so much 😊 But I love writing about her, so you will get enough of her in updates.

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Haha.. I'm sure you'll get encouraging comments! 🤗

Let's see 😆 so many lazy people haven't commented yet 😛

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: sweet4shehzadi
Awesome
amazing
Fantastic
fabulous
Brilliant
Cute
Lovely update dear
I like the way zoya understand asad try cool him when he is angry
Beautifully written
Continue it ASAP
can't wait to read more
Thanks for pm

Thanks dear 😊

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Awesome update...👏

Just love it...😊

Waiting for nxt part so update soon...😃

Thanks so much 😊

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: Ibeauty
I just realised u updated.
Such a wonderful n lovely update.
I love aahana alot n she is a cute baby.
I always impress with zoya's understanding, love n respect towards the family.
Asad has found out the kidnapper n he is non other than ghaffur.
Very intresting looking forward for next update.

Thanks dear 😊 Aahana is a darling, it's been amazing writing her character. And yes Zoya is the most selfless and giving person.

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#429

Hi Ankita...

i am absolutely fine with the pace of the story that you are following...it has its own charm...😛

and talking about the update,

do i really need to?? 😉

if Asad, Zoya and Aanu are there.. that automatically that becomes my favorite!! and in this one, Aanu was sandwiched between the two!! 😉😆

i loved their bahanas!! the poor fellows still need to learn making them!! 😆

and then, the last part has definitely taken the story forward... 😃

eager to read the next update!!

P.S- i know you are filtering your buddy list... but please keep sending me PMs 😊

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#430

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
Hey Ankitha.. That was another beautiful update.. So Zoya slept in his room and they think Dilshaad has no idea about it.. Well.. the whole scene was so sweet, hilarious and also cool.. 😊
Zoya handed her property file to Asad.. That shows how much she loves and trusts him.. amazing .. and the way she made him agree was also sooo sweet...

and now we know the reason for Asad's anger.. Gaffur Siddique.. Well no doubt he will be Zoya's father.. and the turmoil which Zoya may go through knowing she is his daughter .. Beautifully written Ankitha.. 😊

Glad you found it interesting, I couldn't hold back on writing something hilarious instead of getting on with the story 😆

Yes she really trusts him, and that's the only way she can include her own mother in her life, there seems no other way to.

Yes time for some turmoil for Zoya,