||~ The Sunshine of My life #5 AsYa FF ~ Prt42A&B P125 THR6 PG 140 - Page 32

Wow can asad be more beautiful

What a proposal just amazing

Him with Aanu asking her t marry them wow

It is a package deal not him alone and that is y he waited until he got home

Oh she definitely have no patience

Their time at dinner and by the lake was nice

The convo him telling her he looking for her Abu and he want her to be in it with him

Love how he is not scared to show his emotions in public

He enjoyed ice cream oh she love his six pack but that is a package deal too it doesn't come without him😆

So is it gonna be make out time love how he cover Aanu eyes

What will cause him to be upset

Update soon

Anku! 🤗

Just had to come here! 😉

A YaAd FF! Err.. An AsYa FF! 😳

When I was done with commenting on COME, I just thought I'd give a peek into 'Your Posts' and see for myself if you've more of your awesomeness penned somewhere. And that's how I came across this beautiful FF! I'm so glad I did. Yesterday evening, I sat to read this FF. Needless to say, hooked I was. Somehow the beginning made me apprehensive about having to see Asad lose his wife. It was kinda KKHH beginning for me. I didn't want a on adorable Rani to be his earlier wife cuz that would mean he'd loved her. But then, the baby existed because if love so I just stopped my rein of stupid thoughts and went on to read further. I was frantically hoping and wishing his wife not be Tanveer. And I released a long held breath when I found she wasn't. I mean.. Don't take me wrong, I'd have been happier if it was the sly Tanveer who was gone for good but I thought of the cute bundle in his arms and didn't want her to be a product of Asad and Tannu. Somehow, I wouldn't be able to stomach that, even if she was really good in your FF, it's kinda hard to let go of the formed images of such characters. So, where was I? Yeah, it wasn't Tanveer and I'm glad she doesn't exist in your FF! Well, not until now and hopefully not at all, yea? 😆

Back to my progress with the story. It's really adorable to see you keep the characters alive on your FFs. Their first meet so related to the one in the show. Brought back memories. Are you ok? Allah Miyan..! Sigh! So yes, I was already looking forward to more of the lovely updates. Somehow prejudices had been formed for the other after their first meet and the story moves on to show how first impression isn't really all that best, because opinions change when you live with a person and get to know them in and out. Basically, the two found out the real other after living under one roof and learning something new about the other each day. Let me tell you.. This story is a light hearted one and I absolutely love you for that. The cute, funny, light, adorable moments you've sketched have really struck a chord and I'm all in for the story to move forward. I don't want it to end anytime soon, mind you! Please? Zoya Pouts*

The best thing about the story is my Munchkin Cupid, Aahana! Whattey name! She's such a bundle! I'm amazed, charmed and drawn to her as if she was a real person and not just a character you've sketched for us. Someday if I have a girl, I'd love to have one as adorable, as beautiful, as charming and as much Cupid as Aahana. 😛 I love her to bits, really and it's really driving me crazy. Because ever since yesterday I'm imagining doing all the momma-stuff and baby-talking with her. I wonder if I'd take the name as well for my would be child, whenever I'd be blessed with one, that is. ❤️

Her innocence, her charm, her bonding, her tantrums - all are oh-so-realistic and feely, I already think I've become a mum! Really appreciate how you create and color your characters as beautifully as you do, Ankita. Cuz that's what makes people relate to the characters and the story and make them love it. 😛

And charming as she is, she uses charming words to address her Charming father as well. Bu'! Awh! Lovely, she is! My Munchkin! All the raspberry blowing, the eating tantrums, the fat-tears tricks she uses to get to her father. Her love for water, dancing and her ignorance to anyone around in presence of her Abbu! Makes me wanna love her more than I already do! Then something lovely happens, surprising us all. She finds her Mi' in Zoya and expresses it to her, too. At the time when she's all set to leave for NY! Aww, my heart goes out to the recipient if such affectionate utterances cuz who waouod be able to leave an angel like her, just like that? Hugs to my baby! 😛

Asad's insecurities, Zoya's nightmares. The manner they deal with each other's problems shows the love for the other in their hearts. The fair festival wale updates made me want to run and kiss Zoya! Such a humble girl to make the man live his childhood, realizing he couldn't have one when he should have. Him letting her take the lead and following her. The kids part almost made me teary and reflect to such a deep thought you gave into penning something as important as this. Money is not what a child wants. It's the affection, the concern, the love that they yearn for. That someone has their back when they fall. That someone gets happy seeing their smile. That them being happy means something to someone. Their hesitation at first and then warming up to Asad! All brilliantly written, Anku! 👏

I really feel for Ayesha, though. She should have gotten a fair deal to love her baby and live to see her, giving her all that she wanted. Life's been unfair to her. :(

AsYa have their own baggage and each deals with it in their own ways. The way their defense mechanism allows them to. One hides behind all his emotions under the mask of indifference and non-chalance while the other covers up her feelings and sentiments by being cheerful and making others happy. However, the common ground between them is their love and concern for their family. To go to lengths to support and comfort their family. To shield and protect their family from any harm. Somehow, the duo got knocked some sense into their heads and they found their way to each other. The only thing I still can't seem to accept is Rashid's sudden exit from the world. I couldn't appreciate it in the show and I can't here, either. But I admire the way you've dealt the issues from there. The way you've strengthened their bonds even more by such a tragic event, was note-worthy. How Zoya had become Asad's pillar to lean on, a shoulder to cry on and a friend to share his emotions and heart with. How she'd acted the mature adult when the family was falling apart. The way she clung to all of them, caring for them, being with Asad, helping him in his tough times, leading him to let go of the supposed hatred for his Abbu and make him call 'Abbu'. Her confidence and trust in him letting us witness the first ever intentional hug. From Asad's side at that. Oopar se forehead wala kiss! Okay.. Temple wala! But wow, that was something so so beautiful. Fir coffee pe bonding shuroo! Soon, they realise they're in love and the idiots that they are, the King and Queen of Assumptions.. Surf soch soch ke, adhoori baatein sunke hi decision lelete hain! Impulsive idiots! Okay, I still love them all the same! Peace! 😆

Ayaan's matured and the bro-quotient between them is quite adorable. I just recalled, Zoya beat him black and blue and Asad mocked him later for that? Hahaha! And when Asad compliments(?) Zoya about how Zoya and his brother will bond because of their stark similarity, she goes all full of herself. To which Asad replies, 'Even Worse'.. Something on those lines, yea.. I laughed out so much!! The fun element is definitely something one wants to feast on. Now AsYa have confessed, their 'hospital-moments'.. Doesn't 'sound' romantic, tho! 😕 Yea, so.. The lovely duo share their moments of first love and can't seem to get enough of the other. I heart that, really. 😛

Now, I might sound as a spoilsport for saying this but I want to. After reading your note regarding some uncensored romance.. Don't worry at all, Hun! I wanted to say that we, at least I love the story the way it is. We don't need hot stuff to keep us hooked to the story. The story, the characters speak for themselves. So if you want to add couple romance, we are all in, however that's not the only thing we root for. We'd love to see the bond strengthen more and them figuring out who the father is and who the mastermind is behind the kidnaps and attacks and much more that I'm sure you've in store for us all. Since we don't want this to end anytime in the coming year!

That said, I slept at 2 am midnight because the iPad had conked off. I charged it and slept only to wake up at 5:30 am. The first thing I do without going to the loo? Unplug and start reading again and I got up at 10 am. Without even freshening up. How crazy is that? That's how much hooked I was and that's how much I loved the story. Wonderfully drew and held me till I reached the latest update. Looking forward to more, lengthier and frequent ones!

P.S. : This FF reminded me of two me my Favourite AR FFs. AWOTB and Blues. Because of the baby-bonding and the infamous Munchkin! I miss Peanuts, now!

My OS series will NOT jump to a grown up Aahana so soon. It will be about her babyish charms for a long while. And also its going to be scenes and moments from their life, not a continuous story.. So Aahana can be a bit grown up in one and small baby in another. You guys gotta churn out ideas because its going to be on readers demand. The day they stop, my OS series will too 😛

Thanks a ton dear 😃

Thanks dear 😊

@scarletmalik and Lourel24 - Thanks to you too 😊

Thanks dear so glad you liked it 😃