||~ The Sunshine of My life #5 AsYa FF ~ Prt42A&B P125 THR6 PG 140 - Page 28

Originally posted by: sabrinsz91

It was sooo... Romantic and beautiful... Love it... But tensed for the precap 👏 ⭐️

Originally posted by: p_s05

"...endlessly fondling the scar so tenderly that what had seemed ugly to her all life, seemed a mark of beauty today." ❤️

More than actually gifting the dress today, the transition from the purchase to asking her to wear it on their date had more sentiment. The fact that he bought it at a time without loves realizations just wanting to fulfill her desire to have it, having kept it with himself for such a long time and wanting her to wear it on their first date proving his devotion to her by been indifferent to the physical scar. - Enchanting - Truly an imperfectly perfect man. 👏

I've always been touched by that one scene in QH where Asad is exposed to her scars 😊 and the admiration and respect in his eyes. I'd wanted more about it and it all came out in the update. 😊

I am so so glad you appreciate it. And yes he got it because he wanted her to have it, but didn't find courage to give it then, but he did have the reasons now.

"Aahana tailed behind Asad as he walked to his study table to keep his laptop."

"Asad had been amused and had entertained himself by watching her imitate him and his every move. So when he got up she did as well and followed him around the room. Asad halted as he reached his closet not realizing that Aahana was right behind him. She banged against her father's legs and went wobbling behind right on her butt. She sat there numb for a second before she started giggling at the accident making Asad turn in a frenzy and rush to her."

Adored Aahana throughout the chapter, Ayaan didn't get her a gift [This is the height injustice! 😒 😆 ].

That is typing error on my part, he did mean to mention everyone 😆

When this FF is over I shall certainly miss Aahana and that makes me really really really sad. [That shall be the first for a fan fiction] 💔 😭 Her scenes surpass all things cute and adorable.

LOL I did tell you I'd be continuing with an OS series on AsYa and Aahana,so you can give me all your wishes, whatever you want to read.

Bromance and a maturing Ayaan - Lovely. I could imagine a proud Asad. ⭐️

""Of course your six packs Jahapanah," she winked and let her hand trail on them over his shirt slightly, making him widen his eyes and look around," Zoya!" he hissed making her laugh."

Zoya did you realize what you just did, justify's Asad's dialogue at the end. 😉

Zoya was naughty and so Asad got naught too 😆

The date[Dinner, Ice-cream and Walk to the lake], the alone time was simply magnificent, scenic and charming. - Loved the simplicity and originality behind the scenes, held more sentiment.

"So Miss Zoya Farooqui will you marry 'us'"

The proposal was AsYa or rather Asad personified, loved the fact Aahana was included. ❤️

I am so so glad you liked it 😃

" Kuch bhi nahi.. aapka dinner, date aur alone time poora ho gaya ho toh ghar chale? Meri beti ghar mai mera intezaar kar rahi hogi,hmpfh! "

Zoya's impatience and the banter throughout the chapter were pleasant and endearing.

Asad and the jacket: Applauded to the man in question for wanting to share that moment. *sigh*

"They were conversing like never before, sharing incidents from their life, their school and college. Zoya somehow suddenly felt like a silly teenager who was dizzy with the effect of all the attention being showered on her. Small gestures like holding hands in public, smiling genuinely, enjoying every little moment meant so much more than it would otherwise."

AsYa spoke a lot during this chapter, mainly about themselves, Asad sharing a childhood memory, Zoe about her mum and parents love and security - heartbreaking childhoods yet pleasant change to the story - in conclusion a realistic couple.

I cannot reiterate the splendor of the ice-cream scene, because I have read this in a AsYa fiction before were Asad explains the sentiment behind ice-cream and their childhood. - Poignant!

You mean you HAVE read it before? Or haven't? It meant a lot to me to write it, I love imagining their childhood 😊

"She's the best Ammi anyone can have Asad,"

" And now she's your Ammi too,"

Zoya, Dilshad and their relationship - nothing but radiance between a mother and daughter.

This was a complete, balanced chapter - AsYa, Aahana and the most important people in their life [Dilshad, Najma, Ayaan and Zoe's parents].

"But Asad didn't think that was enough, lately he didn't feel sated, never felt that the time he spent with her was ever enough. He held her, not letting her move away. And covered Aahana's already shut eyes with his palm before leaning into kiss Zoya again, making her chuckle outright when she understood his intentions," She's already asleep Asad!"

"Still I don't want her to be horrified lest she opens her eyes," Asad clarified, smirking at her.

"Why? What are you going to do?" she asked curiously.

"You'll know," he said pulling her down on the bed along with him."

I LOVE AsYa fluff[First and Last Indian Television couple that affect me]. ☺️

This comment is all over the place, hope this made sense and justified the chapter. 😕

Your comments mean a lot to me, you've been one of those readers whose comments make me see my chapter in a whole new way. It's amazing as always 🤗

Originally posted by: day_lily

Awesome chap!!!

Everything was so goody-goody..😃

I know every gal wants a Perfect Proposal but what Asad did was beyond imagination...loved it.

Even I wanna know what is Asad going to do?? If u know wahat I mean😉 So pleachh update jaldi...

Originally posted by: sweet4shehzadi

Awesome
amazing
Fantastic
Fabulous
Brilliant
Wonderful
Lovely
Cute Update
Beautifully written
Can't describe in word's how beautiful it is
I love it
Continue soon
Can't wait to read more
Thanks for pm so sweet of you

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

wonderful ...m amazed ...its such a lovely update ...everything perfect ...n proposal also ...
update soon
thnx for pm

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

beautiful update...
loved it...
a perfect night for them...
ayaan bada hogaya hai... lol
loved asya interaction... as always...
i loved this one..." Aap poori roshni mai, normal
kapdo mai, hawa se takra kar bhi
girti hai.. ye jaante hue bhi itne
andhere mai, ISS dress mai yun
pair patak patak ke chalna zaroori
hai? "... asad has developed a funny bone all of a sudden...
keep writing...
continue soon

Originally posted by: kajenilious

Beautiful 😛
awsm 😃 nd so sweet nd cute 👏 👏
lvd d date wala part 😃 😳
nd lst part was like 👏 😳
oh no sme recap update soon 😭

Originally posted by: asyafreva

A brilliant update Ankita!!!

I soo loved it!!

The bonding between asad and ayaan...

Aahana's tantrums and finally

Their Date...!!

Brilliantly written...!!!

And the proposal...?

One of the most cutest yet most romantic one...!!!

I so so so so so so so so so looved it...!!

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

This part was truely beautiful.
By this unique proposal.
Asad n aanu were adorable.
Asya romance was aww.
U written it beautifully.

i was lil scared by this precap.
Looking forward to ur next part

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

YAYAYYAA.. 33 millaa.. now let me unres in detaill.. 🤣