||~ The Sunshine of My life #5 AsYa FF ~ Prt42A&B P125 THR6 PG 140 - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome chapter. I love this Asad,
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet


precap diya hi scary hai!!
To dare kyun na??


It's a part/ a scene in my story, it has angst but it is NOT between AsYa, so don't worry. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Asad has turned into a complete sweetheart...ayaan is in duty to find out more about zoyas father...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...loved the way Asad proposed...what is he gonna do
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was sooo... Romantic and beautiful... Love it... But tensed for the precap 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
SVP dites moi que le prochain chapitre n'est pas trop triste plz ''' sorry am not very good in english ''' 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

"...endlessly fondling the scar so tenderly that what had seemed ugly to her all life, seemed a mark of beauty today." ❤️


More than actually gifting the dress today, the transition from the purchase to asking her to wear it on their date had more sentiment. The fact that he bought it at a time without loves realizations just wanting to fulfill her desire to have it, having kept it with himself for such a long time and wanting her to wear it on their first date proving his devotion to her by been indifferent to the physical scar. - Enchanting - Truly an imperfectly perfect man. 👏

"Aahana tailed behind Asad as he walked to his study table to keep his laptop."

"Asad had been amused and had entertained himself by watching her imitate him and his every move. So when he got up she did as well and followed him around the room. Asad halted as he reached his closet not realizing that Aahana was right behind him. She banged against her father's legs and went wobbling behind right on her butt. She sat there numb for a second before she started giggling at the accident making Asad turn in a frenzy and rush to her."


Adored Aahana throughout the chapter, Ayaan didn't get her a gift [This is the height injustice! 😒 😆 ].


When this FF is over I shall certainly miss Aahana and that makes me really really really sad. [That shall be the first for a fan fiction] 💔 😭 Her scenes surpass all things cute and adorable.


Bromance and a maturing Ayaan - Lovely. I could imagine a proud Asad. ⭐️


""Of course your six packs Jahapanah," she winked and let her hand trail on them over his shirt slightly, making him widen his eyes and look around," Zoya!" he hissed making her laugh."


Zoya did you realize what you just did, justify's Asad's dialogue at the end. 😉


The date[Dinner, Ice-cream and Walk to the lake], the alone time was simply magnificent, scenic and charming. - Loved the simplicity and originality behind the scenes, held more sentiment.

"So Miss Zoya Farooqui will you marry 'us'"


The proposal was AsYa or rather Asad personified, loved the fact Aahana was included. ❤️


" Kuch bhi nahi.. aapka dinner, date aur alone time poora ho gaya ho toh ghar chale? Meri beti ghar mai mera intezaar kar rahi hogi,hmpfh! "


Zoya's impatience and the banter throughout the chapter were pleasant and endearing.

Asad and the jacket: Applauded to the man in question for wanting to share that moment. *sigh*


"They were conversing like never before, sharing incidents from their life, their school and college. Zoya somehow suddenly felt like a silly teenager who was dizzy with the effect of all the attention being showered on her. Small gestures like holding hands in public, smiling genuinely, enjoying every little moment meant so much more than it would otherwise."


AsYa spoke a lot during this chapter, mainly about themselves, Asad sharing a childhood memory, Zoe about her mum and parents love and security - heartbreaking childhoods yet pleasant change to the story - in conclusion a realistic couple.

I cannot reiterate the splendor of the ice-cream scene, because I have read this in a AsYa fiction before were Asad explains the sentiment behind ice-cream and their childhood. - Poignant!

"She's the best Ammi anyone can have Asad,"

" And now she's your Ammi too,"


Zoya, Dilshad and their relationship - nothing but radiance between a mother and daughter.

This was a complete, balanced chapter - AsYa, Aahana and the most important people in their life [Dilshad, Najma, Ayaan and Zoe's parents].


"But Asad didn't think that was enough, lately he didn't feel sated, never felt that the time he spent with her was ever enough. He held her, not letting her move away. And covered Aahana's already shut eyes with his palm before leaning into kiss Zoya again, making her chuckle outright when she understood his intentions," She's already asleep Asad!"

"Still I don't want her to be horrified lest she opens her eyes," Asad clarified, smirking at her.

"Why? What are you going to do?" she asked curiously.

"You'll know," he said pulling her down on the bed along with him."


I LOVE AsYa fluff[First and Last Indian Television couple that affect me]. ☺️


This comment is all over the place, hope this made sense and justified the chapter. 😕

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome chap!!!
Everything was so goody-goody..😃
I know every gal wants a Perfect Proposal but what Asad did was beyond imagination...loved it.
Even I wanna know what is Asad going to do?? If u know wahat I mean😉 So pleachh update jaldi...
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Posted: 11 years ago

An amazing update and a lovely date by Asad!! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful ...m amazed ...its such a lovely update ...everything perfect ...n proposal also ...
update soon
thnx for pm

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