ASYA UNITED WE STAND #2 THREAD 3 LINK PG 1 - Page 88

Originally posted by: swapno

Wow!! wonderful!! It was so well written, I read it two times in one go!!

So Zoya was not saved from her mistake...What She did unknowingly she was punished!!

Asad again had gone into his shell!!

That was really shocking to her!!

She last him for long time this time...

Now it will took him 4 and half years to back to her (if I remember correctly you wrote after five years on first chapter)

Too long time!!

So Zoya broke not only her but him too...

She realized just in late...

Poor Asad...he thought everyone leaves him!!!

Waiting for Zoya's fight back!!!

The test of her love is coming...

So loved it Shrashti...

Thank you so much 🤗

Originally posted by: sabuwa

So sad

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice but sad update

I knew asad was gonna be hospitalized

He is totally gone worst from before

But zoya can get him back and she is determined

Love how he responded to her

When she told him to open his eyes she will never leave him and then the eye lock and the hug

Oh he held her dupatta for 1 month and never let it go

She realizes he may share the same feelings she have because he only did things for her response to her

Continue soon

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Beautifuly written ! I'm sorry for late comment, i forgot that i needed to buddy another account to receive a PM 😆

Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

ahh... finallyy.. i get something to read on my birthdayy.. was waiting for an updatee from someone... i reallyy wanna thank u!
the update was amazingg..
i loved the way u portrayed zoyas emotions..
she was soo broken..
and asad in a mental asylum..
ohh.. thats sad..
hope he recovers sooon..
i reallyy want to see how he grows to be a man..
the storyy is going great..
love ur writings..
continue soon..
and thank u once again! 😊
thanx fothe pm..
pm me for the next update..




-fuii-

Originally posted by: Surish

Originally posted by: SovaSana

great update

feeling so bad and sad for asad

he is suffering so much

but i am happy that zoya is there to bring him back

do continue soon😊

Originally posted by: gowtu

Tia bhi Aise hi rola thi thi



Bb k saat
Nd u r also doing the same 😭 😭

Originally posted by: gowtu

Huhuhuhu huhuhuh huhuhuhu

Bus Rona aaying

Originally posted by: ImmortalLove

Superb update

and superbly written also..👏

Thanks di😊

Asad is in mental rehab..

how painful for zoya and Asad..

Hmm...but life mein twist nai toh maja kahan?😆

loved how Zoya kissing him when he was sleeping..

and he also hugged her back after waking up.. and the moment he saw her is Aww.. so emotional but so loving,..

😳😳

and sleeps on her lap..

beautiful relationship..

Yup😃

So is Zoya also going to stay with him in rehab..

ya woh asad ko aapne saath le jayegi..

Abhi wahin rahenge...

Continue soon dear

cant wait..

Exam ke baad...