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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 11 years ago

#761

Well first of all congo Srash.. you are a sizzler now

This was an amzing piece of work
It was really emotional and heart touching
Lets see ...how zoya will take him back...

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Mvinfff

@Mvinfff

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Posted: 11 years ago

#762

Emotional part but nice! Please update soon.

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#763

hy, Shrashti I am ur loyal reader&I am in the buddy list of ur ID -Crazy4AsYa-

I do read UWS,hit Like&comment too.

I had been getting PM of UWS...
U had kept my name in the list of ur loyal readers to whom u'll PM
but still I didn't get PM of part 11

so,please PM me too; whenever u update

Edited by imcooldude - 11 years ago

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#764

It was awesome
Asad back into trauma state that his love ones left him & same happened with zoya case.
Nurses was shocked to see asad reaction
You wrote that beautifully especially dilshad zoya scene & the last scene.
She want her asad back at any cost & she will do it.
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#765

Wow!! wonderful!! It was so well written, I read it two times in one go!!

So Zoya was not saved from her mistake...What She did unknowingly she was punished!!

Asad again had gone into his shell!!

That was really shocking to her!!

She last him for long time this time...

Now it will took him 4 and half years to back to her (if I remember correctly you wrote after five years on first chapter)

Too long time!!

So Zoya broke not only her but him too...

She realized just in late...

Poor Asad...he thought everyone leaves him!!!

Waiting for Zoya's fight back!!!

The test of her love is coming...

So loved it Shrashti...

Thank you so much 🤗

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#766

Nice but sad update

I knew asad was gonna be hospitalized

He is totally gone worst from before

But zoya can get him back and she is determined

Love how he responded to her

When she told him to open his eyes she will never leave him and then the eye lock and the hug

Oh he held her dupatta for 1 month and never let it go

She realizes he may share the same feelings she have because he only did things for her response to her

Continue soon

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#767

Beautifuly written ! I'm sorry for late comment, i forgot that i needed to buddy another account to receive a PM 😆

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safa/fuii

@Splash-ASYA

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#768

ahh... finallyy.. i get something to read on my birthdayy.. was waiting for an updatee from someone... i reallyy wanna thank u!
the update was amazingg..
i loved the way u portrayed zoyas emotions..
she was soo broken..
and asad in a mental asylum..
ohh.. thats sad..
hope he recovers sooon..
i reallyy want to see how he grows to be a man..
the storyy is going great..
love ur writings..
continue soon..
and thank u once again! 😊
thanx fothe pm..
pm me for the next update..

-fuii-

Edited by Splash-ASYA - 11 years ago