ASYA UNITED WE STAND #2 THREAD 3 LINK PG 1 - Page 47

Originally posted by: zynia890

And PM me for the next part bcz I want to read the story...I always wanted someone to write a story like this... I thought that I myself should do this but I m horrible at this...you guys have this potential and this is really appreciable!!

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Lovely ...
Superb ...
Fabulous update...
Beautifully written...
So emotional ...u made me cry 😭
My eyes are wet after reading the update 😭
Asya are suffering so much 😭
Humi is such a jerk ...how can she not see the pain zoya is going through on leaving asad...
U described asya emotional state so beautifully. ...
Asad is trying to be nice to humi only for zoya...
Asad hold zoya dupatta...was the most emotional part for me...
How he is pleading zoya to stay back 😭
Both are emotionally broken...
Asad fell down on his knees...
Plzz dont separate asya for long...
U r an amazing writer dude...fabulous. ...
Update soonish...
Thanks for pm and do pm me for upcoming parts...

Originally posted by: Ami34

NOOO!!!😭

Zoya I'm so angry with u with now!!!😡

Actually I'm angry with ya!!!😆

How can she leave Asad when he's like begging her forever!!!

But ya did an amazing job at describing the scene!!!👏

Please make everything happy and cheerful again!!!

I beg ya!!!😃

Thanks for the pms!!!🤗

Update soon!!!👍🏼

Originally posted by: fifi1297

Yayyy...my name in bold...thnku so much...

Very emotional update...

U made evryone cry today😭

Beautifully written...

Amazing job done...

Hats off...

Asya r suffering alot...😭

Asya r separate nw...hope dis z not long one...

Update was fabulous...

Loved it alot...

Continue soon...

Thnx for pm😊

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

thank u...
oh don't be angry...will try to make everything alright asap

Originally posted by: Rosered1

U made me cry😭

It was soo beautifully written..The inner turmoil

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

While it was funny...while it lasted...this is try a heart breaking chapter. And you know I'm on logic and practical's side.

I don't blame Humeira at all.



And you my dear, has given each character justice. Especially that of Zoya and Humeira. Then Asad and Dilshad. You did an excellent work with all four.


The depth of the pain, the understanding, and ultimately being strong.


Phir bhi. Rula diya.



Give yourself a pat on the back for such heart wrenchingly amazing chapter.

Hugs!

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

A beautifully written chapter, emotional and deep.

Loved it

And yes I want those PM's