The Colour of Love II: #3 Chapter 20 (Last Chapter) Pg 32 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Azraa01

What a gripping update..
The way you portrayed a strong Humaira was amazing..
Asad showed what a true lion he is and they way Zoya ran to his arms..
Loved the way Zoya honoured Gaffur and how she made Shirin and Ayaan a part of the family..
Asad and Haider's bonding was really heart warming
Please show a bit of Razia's punishment.. Would love to see how she is punished...

Originally posted by: p_s05

Outstandingly amazing chapter. Loved every bit of it from the end of part A.

Asad and Haider and; Zoya and Humera's interactions as siblings were endearing.

Dilshad with her sons were poignant.

Asad and Zoya together exceptional beautiful, Adore the support and security Asad provides to Zoya. Zoe's declaration and Asad's arrival at the end of Part A was awesome.

The Princesses addressing their Kingdom, Zoya introducing her family and honoring her Baba was a charming read.

Loved the celebration ambiance that came across the end of the chapter.

Haider(Hug invitation) and Ayaan's comic timing were pleasant.

Zoya taking responsibility and delegating tasks and orders a pleasant read. - Refreshing change.

Anticipate the next chapter.

Superb update
zoya, humeira are amazing
asad become lion loved it
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

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Unres

Don't know if I will get the first spot for your last update or not and most importantly since this is your last story (for the time being, I believe) I want to fulfill my last wish on your thread too. Have never done this on any other thread and don't think will do it either. My last dance for getting the first spot after an update

Dhinkachika Dhinkachika Dhinkachika Dhinkachika Hey hey hey hey

OK now coming to the update, Sis it was very gripping. The way the boys headed towards the valley in the cargo plane was so unique and fit well the circumstances. Asad finally roared like the lion he is. Loved his entry and the way Zoya runs into his arms

Finally Raziya and the leech are out and for good. Am happy the whole thing was not too dragged into the typical filmi style but was all well organized with the police coming in and taking the two away

Loved the way Zoya fought for herself and told Raziya she was already married and then the confidence with which she addressed her people was brilliantly done. I was impressed when she asked Shireen to stay with them too. That was seriously something I had not expected 😲 😃

Asad Dilshaad and Hayder scene was just perfect, if elaborated would have ended up as their sob story. You added just the correct amount of every character in the update Sis. Again will say it was perfect and you my Aapi are a star ⭐️

Am so looking forward to the next update. You know why ☺️

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Superb update
zoya, humeira are amazing
asad become lion loved it
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Ha ha 😆

I can so visualise you dancing as well.

Thank you so so so much ChocoBerry. Thank you for the reassurance, you know y I was worried.

Yes t is my last story...I know what you have asked and I haven't forgotten promise.

Lol...I bet you are looking forward to the next chapter 😳

Little Baji Jaan is so naughty 😆

Am happy you havnt forgotten what i asked for and am sooo looking forward to that too.

Absolutely looking forward to the last part and naughty and me... not at all 😉 😆

Awesome update sis. I am little emotional since this story is about to end and you don't want to continue writing. I never thought I'll get to see a day like this also. I hope and pray that you change your mind and come with another amazing story of AsYa.

Both chapters were written beautifully. Asad, Dilshaad and haider's union was great. Finally Asad came to rescue. Loved his entry. Zoya standing ho for herself. Finally that raziama and Kamran are out if their lives. Love the zoya addressed her people. All in all it was awesome read.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Am happy you havnt forgotten what i asked for and am sooo looking forward to that too.

Absolutely looking forward to the last part and naughty and me... not at all 😉 😆

Originally posted by: vinita459

Awesome update sis. I am little emotional since this story is about to end and you don't want to continue writing. I never thought I'll get to see a day like this also. I hope and pray that you change your mind and come with another amazing story of AsYa.

Both chapters were written beautifully. Asad, Dilshaad and haider's union was great. Finally Asad came to rescue. Loved his entry. Zoya standing ho for herself. Finally that raziama and Kamran are out if their lives. Love the zoya addressed her people. All in all it was awesome read.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Haan haan ChocoBerry kaise naughty ho sakti hai

Chal jhooti 😆

Love u

😆 Love you more sis 🤗