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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed


Hey Jas, hope u r well sweetie

Yes the final battle will begin...Razia and kamran will be taught a nice little lesson

Thank u for liking the chapter

Am not leaving you Jas...will still be here 😊


But I m addicted 2 ur stories Di😭😭😭
dis Forum will b nothing widout outstanding writers like u🤢🥺
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome...!!!!!!!
Both the parts r breathtaking...So beautifully written...
finally Asya r married & its reveled that Asad is Dilshad's real son...
but that Kamran managed to get them...
its interesting to see this final battle...
continue soon...
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: skavya

Awesome...!!!!!!!

Both the parts r breathtaking...So beautifully written...
finally Asya r married & its reveled that Asad is Dilshad's real son...
but that Kamran managed to get them...
its interesting to see this final battle...
continue soon...
Thanks for pm 😊


Thank u so much sweetie
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91


But I m addicted 2 ur stories Di😭😭😭
dis Forum will b nothing widout outstanding writers like u🤢🥺


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinks2911

Hey Saima, hope you are well..😊


I am so sorry for not being able to comment on previous updates..😭
I was quite caught up with work..😕
I couldn't comment but I was reading..😊

I always love a double update from you..😳
It means more suspense and more of a thriller from you..🤗
And these two parts were no less..😳

I felt so relieved when Haider and Humeira tricked Kamran..😉
He was so creepy all the time behind Humeira..🤢

I kind of guessed it was Kamran's man at the airport..😛

Asad and Zoya are finally married.. 😳
It was a simple wedding with only loved ones around..😊

So Asad is really Dilshad's son.. 😃
But I wonder why she didn't tell Asad sooner.. 😲
Why did she say, "'I can't Haider...I can't go and face him knowing who he is?"😲
I am confused a bit here.. Maybe your next part will clear my doubts..😕

Zoya and Humeira are kidnapped..😲😲
Asad and Haider will make sure they will come back safely..😃😉

Saima, this truly was a mind-blowing update..⭐️⭐️

DO update soon.. I will try to comment as soon as possible..😊


Hey Pinks

He u r well my sweetam

No worries, thank you for liking the updates.

Dilshad left him and his father when he was little...so I guess it was her own guilt seeping through

I am going to update now...so be ready for another long double update

Love u lots
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Posted: 11 years ago
Salam All

Please see below part A and then separately Part B of Chapter 19.

Please please do let me know what you think...I found this chapter to be the hardest, and I want to know how it was.

Lots of Love

Saima


Chapter 19 Part A

Asad looked at Haider who mirrored his expression 'he has definitely taken them back to the palace, Haider you need to call the commissioner and get him to co-ordinate aconvoy that can help us' Haider nodded and then took out his phone to call the commissioner.

'Ayaan me and Haider are going to go after them, I need you to stay here with Am...' Asad looked towards Dilshad who stood there crying like never before. Asad's heart took a dip, he sucked in a painful breath 'stay here with Ammi and Ghaffur Chacha, I can't have them left alone'.

Dilshad felt a little relieved that he had still referred to her as Ammi. 'Asad...the ACP has agreed to help in any way, he will be contacting his counterparts in the region and deploying officers...I am sure they have taken a plane, it's the only way they will get there fast enough, by road it will take days and even by train we are looking at two days at least' 'now what...we need to fly out too?' 'yes, we better get a move on'.

Haider walked up to Dilshad 'don't worry Ammi...please stop crying' Dilshad cupped the side of Haider's face 'you bring back both my daughters safe and sound you hear me' 'jee Ammi, I will...I mean we will' he said looking at Asad.

Dilshad took measured steps towards Asad, as he saw her approach him he held his breath 'after finding out the truth in such a way I...I don't know if you hate me...or if you are angry...I'm sorry Asad' Asad felt tears sting his eyes 'all these years I thought you had gone back to Allah, even Abu thought the same...it's why we never came looking for you. Abu said that you had left because you were angry...but when you were going to come back and everything was going to be ok...Ammi Abu left still holding on to the guilt of having made you cry, of being the reason you left us...Ammi you left me too...all these years I felt like maybe I was not a good enough son, which is why you left me behind...but I guess that you did so I could take care of Abu...I didn't even know I had a brother...Ammi, Abu loved you, his last breath had only your name on it...' Asad broke down as did Dilshad 'I am so sorry beta...' Dilshad hugged Asad and held him tight against her chest 'I didn't want to leave you Asad, I promise you...all these years I yearned for you beta, I thought you and Rashid had gone...' Dilshad looked up and cried out a painfully 'Rashid...please forgive me...' 'Ammi...' Asad said as he held her tighter 'no Ammi...please...look all this time I was here with you...'

Haider cam and put his hand over Asad's shoulder 'Asad, we need to go...Ammi, when we come back...' 'I know beta...you go, may Allah protect you both' Asad hugged Haider and then all three held on to each other come lets go'

Haider jumped on Ayaan's motorbike 'hold on tight big brother' Haider said before he shot off.

'Sorry sir, the next flight isn't until tomorrow morning' 'damn' Haider said as he hit his fist against the desk 'Haider, wait' Asad said trying to calm him down 'miss, can we take out a chartered flight, or is there another route we can take' 'let me check'.

'Sir, there was a chartered flight but that was already taken by a Mr Kamran' Asad and Haider looked at one another 'is there a chance of getting another one?' Haider asked 'no sir, we only had one plane available...but you can take an alternative route, I mean it's not conventional but...' 'what is it?' Asad said as he leaned over the desk 'we have a local flight going to a place called Suwa, it's not a normal flight...I mean that it's a small cargo plane that goes there every week, I can ask someone if it is possible for you to board it, when you get off at Suwa it's a four hour drive to the where you want to go'. Asad nodded towards Haider 'please let me talk to your manager and who ever else I need to, we need to board that plane.

Asad and Haider managed to get clearing to board the plane, Haider had called the ACP in Delhi and asked him to get the aviation authorities to grant them permission.

Asad and Haider sat down as the plane took off. They first both sighed in relief thinking that that at least they were on route and were going in the right direction.

'Why Ali...why not Ahmed Khan' Asad said whilst looking out the window. Haider looked at him and waited for Asad to turn around and give him eye contact. 'Ali...I don't know...it's the only name I have ever known' 'you never asked about your father's name?' 'I did...at one point it was all I ever asked...Ammi only ever told me his name was Rashid, and I only assumed it was Rashid Ali' 'but you must have known Ammi's name...right?' 'yes, but Abu never called Ammi Dilshad, he always referred to her as Dil, and to me that was her name...Ammi said that she always felt a connection, when she first met me, I can't deny that there was something that filled the air every time I was with her...but she named me Asad...right?' 'How many Asad's are there in the world?' Asad chuckled 'it what I thought when I first met Humera' 'Allah, is truly magnificent, the most kind...who would ever believe that so many people that met as strangers would be linked not only by blood but by each other's lives...' 'true...in the space of a few weeks so much has happened so much has been revealed I meet by brother I didn't know I had, my Ammi that I thought had pass...I mean left, Zoya who I thought I had lost forever...Alhamdilillah'.

Haider and Asad spent the next forty minutes catching up on each other's lives, Haider wanted to know everything about his dad and Asad about his Ammi. The two brothers were close as friends but the bond that they had made today was stronger than ever.

Haider thanked the pilot and then went to hire out a bike 'it will be faster if we take a bike as opposed to a car' Asad raised his eyebrow at him 'at the speed you drive I am sure we will' Asad sat behind Haider as they both put on their helmets Haider sped off like never before.

On the other side Kamran was nearing the Palace Humera and Zoya sat close together as armed men sat around them in the back of the jeep 'Humera...she will...' Humera squeezed her hand 'Api, I won't let her touch you...she will have to go through me to get to you...please remember you are Princess Zoya, you are going back to your claim your right...you have to be strong Api, for yourself, for me, for Asad and our people'.

After another hour they had finally reached Kamran went to the back and pulled Zoya and Humera out 'Khala will be so happy to see you two...and Humera, my sexy cuz, you have a lot of explaining to do' both Humera and Zoya tried to fight off his hold 'girls, this will go so much better if you two stopped fidgeting...I mean do you really want me to raise my hand now...I mean come on what kind of a man would that make me' 'no less than the demonic piece of shit you already are' Humera spat out, Kamran laughed out loud 'demonic...hmmm I like that'.

Kamran stood in the middle of the palace hall waiting for Razia to descend down the stairs. As she did Humera and Zoya both looked at her with an array of emotions, emotions that varied from hate, anger, disappointment and pity. Razia smiled as she came to stand in front of the two girls she looked at Humera 'Humera, are you not going to come and met your Ammi...come' She said holding her hand out. When Humera didn't move and just looked at her in disbelief Kamran pushed her towards her. Razia put her arm around her 'my beautiful princess...welcome home...although I am a little upset...all this time you knew where Zoya was and you didn't tell us...you know how worried we were for her...Zoya is not well Humera...are you Zoya' Razia said quickly changing the tone of her voice and facial expression. Zoya jumped back a little as all the memories of her abusing her came flooding back.

Razia let Humera go and walked towards Zoya before anyone could gauge what was happening Razia lifted her hand and slapped Zoya across the face 'Ammi' Humera shouted in anger as she ran towards Zoya who had fallen to the floor 'how dare you touch her...how dare you hit my Api' she screamed. Razia looked at her daughter in amusement. She knelt down by the two sister, she gently stroked the back of Humera's hair and then grabbed a fist full and pulled it making her scream out 'you are my daughter Humera...mine, all this is for you and you dare try and protect this good for nothing girl, do you know the humiliation I had to face when she disappeared, the questions I had to answer because she ran off with that old fool...let me tell you this Humera, all my life I have been working towards this and I am not going to let you ruin it for me...you will take her upstairs and get her ready...and when you do you will come back down and face the people of the Valley and tell them that all is well' Humera pushed her hand back 'and why would I do that Ammi...I can't believe you...of all people you can be so evil' 'Humera' Razia screamed at her she grabbed Zoya by the hand and made her stand up, she then pulled her hair 'let her go' Humera shouted as Zoya stood there silently taking the pain that she had long become immune to 'Humera...my sweet child you will do as you are told...or I swear by Allah I will hurt her...and you won't be able to help her...' 'ok...just please let my Api go' she cried. Zoya looked up at her with tears brimming in her eyes, she then shook her head slightly as if to say don't cry. When Razia let Zoya go, Humera ran to her and held her in her arms 'come Api lets go'.

Humera closed the door behind her and then towards Zoya who was smiling at her 'what did Allah make you with Api...after all that you are still smiling...' 'I have you here with me Humera, and this is something I have endured for years and years...she can't hurt me anymore than she has already...but I won't let her touch you...so please for now let's just do as she says...I know Asad and Haider will be on their way'

'Kamran, those boys will come for them no doubt, I want you to double up on the security...I want nothing coming between me and my plans this time...after they meet with the people and I have them satisfied...I will announce your Nikah...and after that...once she has signed the papers you do what you want with her' 'what about Humera?' Kamran asked knowing that she would not let anything happen to Zoya 'as long as Humera knows that I will do anything to hurt her Api, she will comply...and once the Nikah is over she can leave, there is nothing she can do here on her own...Zoya will say as we tell her too...'

Humera and Zoya got ready, Humera applied a little foundation to cover the cruising he had from the slap Razia gave her 'how much longer...I mean she still hasn't called for us and it's been nearly two hours' Zoya said as soon as she did two maids came with Kamran in tow 'come on ladies its show time...and please...I need those faces smiling'. Humera and Zoya followed him out when they got to the top of the stairs they both stopped to see the amount of people that had gathered in the hall. As they came into view the hall erupted into cheer, the people of Barakah Valley were happy to see their King's daughters. They clapped as they came down the stairs and stood in front of them.

'People of Barakah, as you see both my daughters have now returned home...please join in with the celebrations...' Razia announced. Zoya and Humera were finding up with the faade as they walked around and greeted people 'Princess Zoya, will you not play something for us' a young girl said 'n...no...not today' Zoya said with a smile 'of course she will...won't you Zoya' Razia said with a fake smile plastered 'Humera...take your sister to the grand piano please...' Humera led Zoya to the piano 'Api...just one song...please' Zoya closed her eyes as she sat down, the image of Asad pumped her heart with renewed courage, she took in a deep breath and then opened her eyes. The whole hall stood in silence, mesmerised as she played, she did her best to stop her eyes from crying as every note cried out for Asad. The applause she got once she had stopped was overwhelming 'Khala, when are you going to announce it' Kamran said impatiently 'soon...give me a few moments'.

Razia took to the stage and called for every one's attention 'Humera, Zoya...Kamran please come and join me here'. As the three joined Razia she came and stood in between the two sisters 'as you all know that my dearest Zoya was unwell, she has finally returned home after the doctors gave her the all clear...' Humera looked at her Ammi in disgust as she continued to lie 'I am today going to fulfil my promise...the one I made to my nephew Kamran and to the love of his life Zoya' Zoya pulled her hand away from Razia and looked at her wide eyed. Razia grabbed her hand back and squeezed it 'Ammi, you can't do this' Humera whispered 'I can do whatever I like Humera, you forget who I am...I am the Queen'.

'As I was saying...Kamran and Zoya will be getting married first thing tomorrow morning...and you are all invited' the hall started to echo with cheers. Zoya pulled her hand back again but this much with a lot more force 'No' she screamed making everyone stop. Razia looked at her in shock, she had never heard her talk louder than a whisper and here she was screaming 'No...never...I will not marry him...you will not make me marry him or anyone else...' 'Zoya, beta what's wrong' Razia said taking steps towards her 'you stop right there...' 'Zoya...are you not feeling well?' Razia said trying to hide her embarrassment 'I am perfectly fine...there was never anything wrong with me...I am not going to marry him because I can't...I am already married...do you hear' Zoya turned towards the people of Barkah Valley 'I am already married, I have had my Nikah done'.

As the hall started to break out into whispers Razia looked towards Kamran with rage who shook his head saying he knew nothing about it.

'Zoya, what rubbish...how can you be married already...stop lying...' 'I am not lying...ask Humera...I am already married' Razia looked towards Humera who smiled at her with content 'she is telling you the truth Ammi, she is married'. Razia fisted her hands as did Kamran 'I don't believe you, if she is married then where is her husband...who is he' she yelled.

'Asad Ahmed Khan' the hall turned around at the to see where the loud voice came from as they parted Humera and Zoya saw Asad and Haider standing before them 'Asad Ahmed Khan, I am Zoya's husband' Zoya looked at him and started to smile through her tears, she jumped off the stage and ran towards him. Asad grabbed her and lifter her up into his arms. I knew you would come...I knew you would find me' 'how could I not Zoya, he dared to take you away from me...he dare touch you'. Asad put Zoya down and held her hand securely in his and looked towards Razia.
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Chapter 19 Part B


The three of the looked at Kamran and Razia that were seething in anger 'Humera, do you need me to send you a personal invite' Haider said as he held his arms out. Humera smiled and then ran into his arms 'Humera' Razia shouted out after her 'oh Ammi how silly of me, I would like you to meet Haider, my fianc...Haider...Asad this woman standing before you is Razia' Razia looked at Humera not believing she had just called her by her name 'Humera, you forget I am your Ammi...' 'Ammi...' Humera said letting out a chuckle 'do you even know the meaning of the word?' Razia looked at Kamran 'how did they get in...call the guards I want them captured' Kamran called for the guards who all came running in. the crowd that was still gasping moved back as the guards surrounded the four of them.

'I want them arrested for trespassing...lock them away' Razia ordered. Zoya looked at Asad and then stepped forwards 'I am Princess Zoya, and this is my husband, you do not come near me or my sister, you do not touch my husband or my brother...as the daughter of King Abdulla I order you to back away now' the guards all lowered their heads and stepped away.

Razia started to look panicked she walked towards them 'I am your Queen...if you want your place in this palace and do not want to face imminent death for disobeying me I suggest you arrest them now' Zoya took a few steps closer to Razia as she did she looked towards Humera who came to join her 'you are not the Queen, you are woman who is made up nothing but pure evil, if I wanted to I could stand here and tell everyone of Barkah Valley who you really are and what you did, to my Ammi, to my Abu...to me and what you planned to do once you got me married to that leech you call your nephew'.

'How dare you talk to me like that...have you forgotten Zoya...you think you will stand here in front of me...me Queen Razia and threaten me...' Razia raised her hand to slap Zoya again but was stopped by Asad, who held on to her wrist and pushed it back 'don't make the mistake of thinking you can touch her again...' 'and who are you...you think you can waltz in here and claim Zoya...claim my palace...this is mine you hear me mine...I will not let my years of patience go in vain...I will do anything...anything'

'We know Ammi...we know that you are prepared to do anything in the name of greed, in the name of money...really Ammi is all this really worth it...you...' 'no Humera...no' 'Why Api...why won't you let me tell them...let everyone know who she really is...why are you protecting her?' Humera said angrily 'because we are better than her...Allah will give her back what she has given all of us ten-fold' 'Allah and the law' Asad said.

Asad looked towards Hiader who then called out for the inspector. 'Ms Razia...please meet Inspector Chaudhry...and that behind him is his army of officers who have come to take you and your nephew and anyone else who is a part of your filth away...you will never see the light of day again' Haider said. Kamran narrowed his eyes he went and grabbed Zoya by the hand and pulled her back 'just because she is married doesn't mean to say she is yours Mr Asad Ahmed Khan...Zoys will only be mine' Asad jumped forward he grabbed Zoya and pulled her back before he threw Kamran a bloody punch knocking him to the floor 'you touch my wife again and forget seeing the light of day, the only thing you will be seeing is your life slipping away.

Razia swallowed the lump in her throat she looked at Humera and then walked up to her 'Humera...how can you...you are my daughter...you can't let them take me away...I am the Queen...I know...this Zoya has brain washed you...turned you against me...beta she is unwell...crazy, you have to believe me I am your Ammi'. Humera wiped her tears away 'I wish you were my Ammi, I wish I had never seen this side of you...how can you have done this...Ammi you kil...took away our Abu...for your own greed...if the world is full of evil women like you then I hope no one ever gives birth to a daughter...you have shamed the name of women...a mother...who is supposed to be everything to her child...Allah created a woman and gave her a status that no man can match, Allah said that your Jannat, your heaven lies in the feet of your mother...but you all you have is hell' Inspector please take her and that fool away'.

The inspector and his officers stepped forward and took two extremely humiliated people away in front of the very people that looked up them as royalty.

Zoya and Humera held on to each other as they saw their retreating backs. Asad and Haider asked for the people to return to their homes and then to gather in the courtyard tomorrow. 'I am so sorry Humera...' 'why are you apologising Api, it should be me saying sorry, it was my Ammi that tormented you...it was my Ammi that took away your parents, and my father...don't say sorry Api...if I am sad and hurt its because of her...but I am not sorry for what has happened...every criminal every evil person will have to pay for what they have done one day...like they say you can run but can't hide...Allah is everywhere and it is He who is the one who does justice'.

Once everyone had left Asad came and held his wife close to his heart, she couldn't help crying against his hold, but this time he didn't stop her, he let her cry to her hearts content. 'Ammi...where is Ammi, is everyone ok, is Baba ok, did they hurt hi...and Ayaan' 'everyone is ok Zoya, they will be coming to join us soon...come let's sit'.

Everyone sat in silence trying to digest what had happened, the worst was finally over and if truth be told it was less violent and complicated than they had thought. 'Api, you need to get some rest, you have to get ready to address the people tomorrow, they need to be told the truth, a lot of them have been loyal to the her and will want answers especially the people of the Council' Zoya nodded 'you are right...Humera please take care of Haider...' 'I will Api...you don't worry...Asad, please can you take Zoya to her room' 'Humera, it's not just Asad, you call him Bhaijaan...Asad is my older brother' Humera and Zoya and Humera looked at him 'I think we need to tell them' Asad agreed. Haider went on to tell Zoya and Humera what had happened just before they were taken away, they both looked at Asad and Haider totally dumbstruck 'Ya Allah...are you for real...I can't believe it...' 'nor could we, but it is true...in all of this Ammi and Asad weren't able to meet or talk properly...but now that things here have been sorted out, I guess we all have a lot of questions that need answering and a lot of catching up to do'.

Humera walked towards Asad 'Bhaijaan' Asad placed his hand over her head and then put his arm around her 'yes, little Baji Jaan...I will look after your Api and you take care of my little brother...deal?' he said winking at her 'deal'.

Zoya closed the door behind her and then ran into Asad's arms 'it's all over Zoya, you can relax now, the law will punish them and you never have to be afraid or live in hiding any more' 'I know...and the best bit is that I have you here with me' Zoya looked up at him 'not the way you expected to spend your wedding day or night huh?' Asad smiled 'its ok Princess, we have all the time in the world to make up for it...now let's get you some rest, you have another big day tomorrow'

It was only a few hours and the sun had risen in it full glory. Zoya got up and called for the maids, she went to wake up Humera and then sat down with them giving them their new instructions, what they wanted and what they expected from them. As they continued to talk Haider came running towards them 'Humera, Bhabhi...Ammi is here' Zoya and Humera stood up and ran down the stairs towards them. Shireen, Dilshad, Ghaffur and Ayaan stood waiting to see them.

The reunion was an emotional one but one that was full of happiness and joy. After much deliberation Zoya, Humera and Ghaffur had decided on a plan of action and put together a speech that Zoya need to read out to the people of Barakah Valley. 'Ammi...once Zoya has addressed her people I think we need to sit down and do a little talking of our own' Haider said, Dilshad looked towards Asad 'yes, I think we do' she said smiling at both her sons.

Zoya stood up with Humera and Ghaffur on the platform that was raised in the courtyard.

'The people of Barakah, the loyal Council of King Abdullah Assalam O Alaikum. Over the last 12 hours a lot has happened and I know that you all have a million questions that you need answered. I Princess Zoya and Princess Humera haver returned home, returned to you to help serve and protect the community that our father King Abdullah so lovingly made his own. The lady who stood before you today has been taken away to be punished for the deeds of yesterday, as of today all evil, all wickedness has been wiped away.

The Council that were put on a back bench and ruled over are now free, democracy and freedom will return. Today I want to bring to you the new leader of our Council, the one person who has given your King, this palace and me everything, he gave up on everything, sacrificed his own living for me...the person is none other than my Baba, the person you all know as Ghafuur Chahca' Gahffur looked at Zoya in shock 'Zoya, beta what are you saying...me...we did not discuss this' 'I know Baba, but I wouldn't give this to anyone else, you are most deserving, it is time that the palace gave you back for you have given it' 'Zoya, it was my duty...and you are like my own daughter' 'yes Baba...so let me do this...please come here and accept this' Ghaffur wiped his tears away and stepped forward as he did the court yard broke out in cheers and a loud applause.

Ghaffur stood in front of the mic and address his own people 'if our King was here today, he would be so proud of his two beautiful daughters, he would stand up high to see how his girls are continuing on his legacy. If our Princess has stood before you and given me this honour it is only our duty to honour her too...Humera please' Humera stepped forward 'today I stand here before you as Princess Humera, daughter of King Abdulla and sister of who is now the Queen of Barakah Valley...Barakah Valley has just witnessed a new dawn, a new era, where you are free to love and live life, in return we ask for nothing but honesty and peace. Can I please ask you all to raise your hands and pray for our new Queen and the days to come'

Everyone raised their hand in prayer and then cheered for Zoya, who stood looking up 'Abu...Ammi, I wish you were here...but I know where ever you are you will be looking down on me'.

Zoya came forward 'I would like to introduce you to my family, who is now a part of your family too. This is Asad Ahmed Khan, my husband, this is our Ammi, Dilshad Ahmed Khan' Dilshad looked at her as she called her by the name she had left so many years ago. 'This is Princess Humera, and her husband to be Haider Ali Ahmed Khan. This is our Khala Shireen and her son, our brother Ayaan'

The people of Barakah welcomed the new family with cheers that could be heard from miles around. Before Zoya took her leave she stood up once more and announced the official engagement of Humera and Haider please join us in our celebrations and help make this alliance one to remember...Allah Hafiz'

Zoya walked off stage and started to shiver 'Zoya are you ok' Asad said taking her into his hold 'yeah...I think so...I can't tell you how nerve wrecking that was' Asad raised an eyebrow 'nerve wrecking...are you for real...Zoya you are a natural...'

Once everyone returned into the palace Zoya and Humera called for the interior designers and work men. They had ordered for all the rooms to be re decorated. 'Khala...I hope you didn't mind me referring to you as Khala' Zoya said 'Shireen cupped her face 'not at all Zoya...thank you' 'no Khala please...I want to ask something of you and Ayaan?' 'yes of course 'Khala will you stay here with us...will you make this your home too?' Shireen looked at Ayaan and then towards Asad who nodded 'yes beta...of course we will' Zoya hugged her and then turned around 'Baba I want the east wing to be converted into Khala and Ayaan's rooms' Humera has already said she wants the middle floor...can you please have Ammi next to us on the top floor and Baba, the west wing is all yours' Ghaffur smiled at her and then patted her on the head 'as you wish beta' he had never seen her so happy, her smile her happiness radiated and her eyes sparkled like never before.

Zoya walked up to Haider 'I know you have to return to Delhi because of your business and Ammi's work...and I won't stop you, but this is your home to Haider and always will be' Haider hugged Zoya 'I know Bhabhi...thank you so much...but for now work and businesses can wait, we have a grand party to get ready for...your reception and our engagement'.

Everyone dispersed after being told what they needed to do. Haider took Asad and Dilshad to the room he was staying in, they needed to talk and make sure that they were all ok. The three of them spent hours and hours in the room. there were tears, and little joyous smiles 'Asad, Haider before the party I would like everyone to sit in for a prayer...for your Abu...and for Zoya's Abu as well' 'I think that is a wonderful idea Ammi...I will let Zoya and Humera know. Haider walked out leaving Asad and Dilshad together, Asad rested his head on her lap and she lovingly stoked his hair 'we have so much to be thankful for Ammi...I finally have you here with me...I have my Ammi'

Everything had been set to take place the following day, after dinner Ghaffur showed the boys around the palace 'Ghaffur Chacha, you need to help us with one more thing' Asad said 'sure...what would you like help with?' 'Ayaan' Ayaan stopped 'what do I need help with?' he questioned looking at Asad confused 'with filling the spot next to you...I think it's about time we found you a girl and got you settled down too' Ayaan started to grin 'Ya Allah...finally...I thought you two had forgotten about me...Ghaffur Chacha...take that as an order...come on lets go' Ayaan grabbed Ghaffur's hand and started to walk off ahead leaving Asad and Haider laughing out loud.

Edited by Saima-Syed - 11 years ago
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Don't know if I will get the first spot for your last update or not and most importantly since this is your last story (for the time being, I believe) I want to fulfill my last wish on your thread too. Have never done this on any other thread and don't think will do it either. My last dance for getting the first spot after an update


Dhinkachika Dhinkachika Dhinkachika Dhinkachika Hey hey hey hey

OK now coming to the update, Sis it was very gripping. The way the boys headed towards the valley in the cargo plane was so unique and fit well the circumstances. Asad finally roared like the lion he is. Loved his entry and the way Zoya runs into his arms

Finally Raziya and the leech are out and for good. Am happy the whole thing was not too dragged into the typical filmi style but was all well organized with the police coming in and taking the two away

Loved the way Zoya fought for herself and told Raziya she was already married and then the confidence with which she addressed her people was brilliantly done. I was impressed when she asked Shireen to stay with them too. That was seriously something I had not expected 😲 😃

Asad Dilshaad and Hayder scene was just perfect, if elaborated would have ended up as their sob story. You added just the correct amount of every character in the update Sis. Again will say it was perfect and you my Aapi are a star ⭐️

Am so looking forward to the next update. You know why ☺️


Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic updates Saima di. 👏

Gosh I hate that Razia sooo much! 😡

Finally sab theek ho gaya!

Continue soon! 😊
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Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Fantastic updates Saima di. 👏


Gosh I hate that Razia sooo much! 😡

Finally sab theek ho gaya!

Continue soon! 😊


Thank you so much sweetie, am glad u liked it

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