FF: All of You || Ch. 1 'Jaise Banjaare ko Ghar' Pg. 4

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

@..Shweta..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: suds.

OH MY GOD YES (that was a very dark period in my life. we dont talk about it.)

DID YOU CHANGE YOUR NAME THING TOO?

AND IS THAT THE AMAZING SPIDERMAN?

Lol. Yeah ("that was a very dark period it my life, we don't talk about it") and yes the first one! ANDREW MOTHAEFFIN GARFIELD!

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

That was beautiful, Shweta. I loved Sanam's words and Rehaan's thoughts and the flashback, as well! <3

I loved Rehaan. You described him so well. :)

But she looked down at me, with those big brown eyes, goddamn those big, beautiful, brown eyes. Her caress soothed my tense forehead and before I knew it, she had me talking.

^I adored this part for some reason. And the part when she called him over and he put his head on her lap. Very sweet. <3

Continue soon! :D

-Fari.

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713_Sparkles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

You're pretty much amazing! Ooo hoo! ( Nancy Drew much?)

Can I just blame because you're killing me...for the umpteenth time...does that even make sense?

*sigh*

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

@..Shweta..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Finishing up the next chapter! Couldn't get to reply but can I just say you are all fantabulous! And amazing! And many other adjectives that I'm too lazy to write!

Thanks for sticking with the story despite its infrequent updates. Have a lot on my plate right now in terms of the real world!

Chapter 2 shall be up soon.