FF: All of You || Ch. 1 'Jaise Banjaare ko Ghar' Pg. 4

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@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Hey ...

As I've already mentioned earlier I ain't following the present track and genuinely have no clue about the story plot BUT this fiction is beautiful !!!

I could just feel some strange sort of tension when Rehaan was all distressed and then even the calmness that he felt was just felt byme ...

The writing is so beautiful that I just connected with the characters instantly and actually felt so good to read a fiction on something that I no longer have no inking of what is happening ...

Gosh ... The song is just so lovely, magical and beautiful that you just instantly fall in love with it ... Coz I'm in absolute love with the song !!

Thanks for the pm :)

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: 713_Sparkles
*OMgeez*

I know right.

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713_Sparkles

@713_Sparkles

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

What was that?

That was one of the most beautiful and well written stories I've ever read. YOU WRITE TOO WELL! And the way you explained how he saw home in her eyes *sigh* . No words, seriously. And from the authors' note, this line literally made my heart ache with your awesomeness

A/N: Not falling in love while writing was quite the task. Rehaan and Asad make me cry. I've quite liked creating the characters in this story, Sanam's frustration is so beautifully masked by her undying fight for Rehaan but where's Rehaan in the middle of all of this? Forcing himself to suffocate in his own dug up grave? Or someone else's grave? But how does he deal with the fact that all of him, every last bit is deeply in love with the girl who's eyes felt like home?

This FF may be one of the biggest reasons that would make it hard for e to ship SaHil because I'm already in love with RehNam!!!

Every line depicted those fatal attractions, from the touching of his forehead to her asking him about his travel, everything!

You're effing awesome!!!! And the title... *faints* I usually dont like hindi songs but this song actually made my heart fluff up(does that even make sense?) Anyways, *sigh* update soon!( Even you gave two chappies some three hours ago 😆)

xoxo

Sparkles :)

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713_Sparkles

@713_Sparkles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I know right.

Oh no! I'm confused again...WHO DO I SHIP NOW? 😆

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Mehreeeen

@SurbhikiPankhi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: 713_Sparkles

Oh no! I'm confused again...WHO DO I SHIP NOW? 😆

May I suggest? Both. 😆

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Imma ship him.

With anyone!

If it's him. It's the real deal, and you know it.

ShehzadiINdahouse

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713_Sparkles

@713_Sparkles

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

#ShehzdisInDaHouse 😎

Yep. Both.

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Adi my pet name

@A_bibliophile

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

very good update is i am repeating for the 100 th time i like rehaan or sanam- rehaan better than the Playboy ahil thanks keep it up

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713_Sparkles

@713_Sparkles

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

OMFG!!!! Rehaan-Sanam-Ahil triangle is going to appen according to the spoilers!!!! eee!!! This would probably be the only triangle I'd L-O-V-E to see!!