||Teri khamoshi ne di mere dil pe dastak|| Kabhi ss *chap 3* pg30:) - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi ritz...
vn vl u update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

hi ritz...
vn vl u update


tomorrow di !! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

ok...
i want a long update...
u didnt leave for ua classes today??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Amazing update.. 👏 👏
Asad misses zoya so much...
Asad called zoya prostitute 😡
And now he is regretting it..
But its too late...zoya left him 😭
Zoya is worried abt who will teach his son to speak..
Hope zoya will read asad biography. .
Hope asya meet soon..
Update soon...


thanks updating now ~!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing story dear
Continue soon
Plz pm me for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago



*~Chapter Zwei~*



Waking up in the morning I pushed myself up for leading another painful and meaningless day . My thoughts were again invaded by her the most beautiful and serene soul on this planet . How calm she was that day how happy the day I broke her and pushed her out of my house with a jerk so forcefully that she landed on the porch out of our gate and painted a scar on her beautiful head ...


I get up and start writing the novel my autobiography . I start with some sweet talks and the beginning of course the way my mother forced me into a marraige after long no's and not at all's ...



FLASHBACK STARTS : !



"NO Ammi !!!...Never !!...I said I won't marry that girl ..."


"Just shut up Asad !! ...You will marry her !!...and within 10 days ...And tha's my order !!..."


"But ammi ...Why don't you understand ?...I don't want to marry anyone... I want to make up my career first ...I want to become an author..."


"OH please Asad !!...Get Over it !!... Dreams are good but they never get fulfilled ... I even had dreams I thought I will lead an extraordinary life with your father ...But what I got ? ...Burden of two children !..."


"Ammi ...I and Najma know you hate us as because of us you had to face lot of hardships in your life ...But it was not our fault that Abbu died so soon due to cardiac arrest ... Plus it wasn't us who sold all our company shares to give the investers their money ... It was you who did that and For God's sake please stop blaming us for everything . By this forced alliance it won't be only me who will suffer it would be her too !...and if she says ..."



"Shut up Asad !! ...How dare you talk to me in that manner ?...If I am saying you'll marry her then you will marry her I am your ammi and you will listen to me ...Do you understand that ? ..."


"But Ammi what if she says..."


"She won't say anything Asad I know !..."


"Ammi ...How can you be so sure that this alliance won't give any of us enough pain ?..."


"She's mute Asad !...She can't speak a thing ...and she owns a lot of money that will help in improving our company's status !...and that girl is really very nice I have seen her ...So you will marry her and that's final!"


Asad couldn't believe how his mother can stoop so low and get him married to a mute girl for company's status and pro ? . The thought added to his disgust for the girl he was to marry who was still unnamed and unseen for him . How he wished she refuses for this marraige ...


"You can make me marry her ammi ...But I won't ever give a place In my life ...And I am sure about this !..."


With this he banged the door and came back in his room with red eyes and unshed tears ...



FLASHBACK ENDS :!



I sighed remembering the memory of how my mother forced us into this nikaah . She needed good things for us that was the thing that made her suffer so much and she became tough . I new that she wasn't what she portrayed from outside she was a pleasant soul inside and I knew that .


I was about to end the Fourth chapter when I got a call from Mr. Martinez my pulisher ...


"Gutten Mittag Herr . khan ..."

(good afternoon mr. khan ...)


"Gutten Mittag Herr . Martinez Was ist Die Absicht fur die horer ?"

(Good afternoon mr. martinez what is the purpose for the phone ? )


"Ich wunschen auf kennen uber eure Das buch ! "

(I wanted to know about your book )


"Okey !...Ich habe der beginnen nach schreibtich ..."

(okay !...I have began to write it ! )


"Okey ...Das gut !!...Auf wiedersehen ! ..."

(Okay ...that's good !!!...Good bye !)


"Auf wiedersehen ! "

(good bye )




Some where in New york city . Eathen sloane square house 44 ~




A girl was seated on beside her kid hugging her kid and crying at a photo of her so called husband whom she hated as much as she loved him ...
Her mind went back to the reverie of how the proposal was made to her by her zeenat aapa ...



FLASHBACK START :!



"Zoya !!...My baccha I have kept his photograph on your bed go and see it ...go go ..."

Zoya ran to her room and saw an envelope kept on her bed ...


she opened it and gasped inaudibly ...




"Mashallah !!...kitne achhe hai ye !! "

she thought in her mind while blushing ...


"Pasand aaya ? "asked zeenat ...


and Zoya nodded in agreement while blushing beetroot red ...



FLASHBACK ENDS :!


Huh how excited I was to meet him not knowing he'll break me beyong repair ...





*~End of Chapter Zwei~*



Okay guyss so as promised i have updated today ...
anything clear ? ... I think a bit !...
wait till the truth is reveiled ...😉
but this time I got a okay okay response of 40 + likes 😊
but "YE DIL MAANGE MORE MORE AND MORE " 😆
so please please please ppl hit the like button and overflow this thread with your comments ...😳
PEOPLE not wanting pms : plzzz say i don't want pms
PEOPLE getting Pms : COMMENTS ARE COMPULSORY 😡😳
SILENT READERS : Ppl kuch tho bol do ab itni khamoshi theek nhi khi " AApki khamoshi mere dil pe chot na de jaaye " 😕😆
friends please give me a decent response for the story as it is a good one and just need to be flourished ...
and as for the german convos I have given translation " 🤗
ek comment n like me aapka kya chala jaayega ?? ...
comment krna chahiye u know ...


Auf Wiedersehen !! 😃

Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
felt bad for zoya
Beautifully written
Continue soon
pm me next part
Edited by sweet4shehzadi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update ritz...
things are becoming clearer...
asad was forced by his mother into this marriage...
for money... wel not a reason good enf for doing so...
and aftr knowing that the gal hez gonna marry is mute... asad is shocked... he began to hate her evn b4 knowing her...
zoya liked his pic...
she still loves him...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet4shehzadi

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Unres
Awesome update
felt bad for zoya
Beautifully written
Continue soon
pm me next part


thanks !!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

lovely update ritz...
things are becoming clearer...
asad was forced by his mother into this marriage...
for money... wel not a reason good enf for doing so...
and aftr knowing that the gal hez gonna marry is mute... asad is shocked... he began to hate her evn b4 knowing her...
zoya liked his pic...
she still loves him...
continue soon


thanks heena di will continue soon ...
😃😳

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