SaHil Short Story: Look the Other Way (UPDATED 2ND JUNE) - Page 6

Originally posted by: -RohitMaxwell-

wow lovely update dear

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

That was nice suds 😊

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

OMG!! Saruu!! *gasps* Hawww..😲

Damn! How i forgot to reply. I swear I read it almost 5 times. Yeah 5.

And then my stupid Phn switched off itself, and kept messing up. Arghhh. And then I totally forgot. I wanted the first page, and the irony. It's the last page. Ha!

Okay, now for the update.

Dude. This was friggin awesome man. How do you do it man. It's so so good!! Like finger lickin' good. Lol.🤣

I mean it's just amazing how you play around the words so effectively! It's just amazing with an A and an extra A.😆

I just loved it so much. And more than happy you made it a short story now.

Loved and just loved the update. It's getting interesting. Wanna know about that past before Sanam. Lol lol.🤣

Do update soon man.

And you are too adorbs!

Love you!

WHOOPS. DOUBLE POST.

*squeals in fangirl mode*

Omgnfekjhgl! This has turned into a short story!
Sanam is taking on after her mum, isnt she? Miss Bond and all that jazz? But me likes this. No. Me lovess this. ( DIdnt I already say that? Oh well. ) The girl's got control! Nothing would've stopped me from running and hugging a weeping Ahil , slow motion and with Junoon playing of course. Poor thing. He deserves a hug. On second thoughts, he also deserves a kiss perhaps.
Damn, I am already hyperventilating with excitement. I love love love this and cant wait for you to update!
Alright I apologize, if this does not make sense, I'm dizzy with sleep but could not not comment... I wont be able to do it later on.

P.S I dont mind 2 short and 4 long parts 😃
P.P.S GOD! WHY ARE YOU NOT ON MY BUDDY LIST? I WANT PMS.

*Goes to add you to buddy list*

P.P.P.S Ugh, I need a name to call you by. 😳

Originally posted by: nikki.171

*squeals in fangirl mode*

Omgnfekjhgl! This has turned into a short story!
Sanam is taking on after her mum, isnt she? Miss Bond and all that jazz? But me likes this. No. Me lovess this. ( DIdnt I already say that? Oh well. ) The girl's got control! Nothing would've stopped me from running and hugging a weeping Ahil , slow motion and with Junoon playing of course. Poor thing. He deserves a hug. On second thoughts, he also deserves a kiss perhaps.
Damn, I am already hyperventilating with excitement. I love love love this and cant wait for you to update!
Alright I apologize, if this does not make sense, I'm dizzy with sleep but could not not comment... I wont be able to do it later on.

P.S I dont mind 2 short and 4 long parts 😃
P.P.S GOD! WHY ARE YOU NOT ON MY BUDDY LIST? I WANT PMS.

*Goes to add you to buddy list*

P.P.P.S Ugh, I need a name to call you by. 😳

Wonderfully written. Really captured the right emotion. Excited for more :)

Originally posted by: chco

superb update

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya

Wonderfully written. Really captured the right emotion. Excited for more :)

Why haven't I read or seen this before? Asdfghjk.. My feelings are all over the place because of the beautifully written plot! :))

I so wanted to run to Aahil and give him a hug and tell him that everything is going to be okay. *sobs*

God, woman, you need to update real soon ^^ I cannot wait to read more..

:) please do update! :)) You're doing such a beautiful job.