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@yum_immy

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Res...
Unres 😃
Sorry for the delay... I completely forgot about this 😆 I thought I have unres already
Amazing os ... 😳
Loved it to core
Its beautifully written 😳 😃
Thnx for the pm... 😊

Edited by yumna.imad - 11 years ago

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

WOW Ankie, that is brilliant piece of writing. Its so well worded, so perfectly written and with a lot of thought. I can imagine the scene play in front of me, because its so well thought by you.

This is something different, haven't read something of this kind so far from you, and it just proves what an amazing writer you are.

Wonderful work man, thanks for posting 🤗

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aYASHIKA

@aYASHIKA

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

I m speechless...
Fabulous os...
Totally loved it...
Perfectly written...
I can imagine the scene in front of my eyes.
Excellent work

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy
*sigh* Koi nahi chalo second page ka first comment toh mil gaya 😆

Okay.😳

I spent 10 minutes there thinking what to comment.😳

Result?

I'm still speechless. 😳

Aapu I really can't write an essay here, because it really won't do as much justice to the story as one single word can.

And that word is : BEAUTIFUL ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

I absolutely LOVE it!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Too good, just too good. Especially the title and that one line, "..Like the heart, which wishes to have a friend... like myself" ⭐️

And not to mention the last paragraph ❤️❤️❤️

P.S: I think you typed "due" instead of "dew" in the third paragraph 😕 😆

P.P.S: GO and STUDY.

P.P.P.S: Looovvveee yoouuu 🤗

Ebebebe.. 😡

See THIS IS CALLED the effect of Romantic poetry 😆

Due of the Dawn - Dew 😆

LORD 🤣

Thanks LOVELYYY!!! 🤗

btw were you stalking me? 😲 cause you are yet to read my WA note.. 😲 😆 😆

objection my honor.. me is X to books till tomorrow evening toh 😲 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

-_- ye expression isliye kyunki i didn't get the first page😭 wyyyaaaiiinnn 😭

mere dil mein toh ap first page mein hi likhe huye ho app.. 😳 😆

OKAY THAT SOUNDED SOOO SICK 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -Anitha-
This os was beautiful

this looks so cute thank you 😊

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

this was epic...
a friend lyk oneself...
but i must admit it was a googly for me...
keep writing ankie ...

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Wow Ankie... that was just so beautiful

Not once did you mention Asad or Zoya... not even in the title but my brain automatically picturizes Asad for him and Zoya for her 😳

This is one of those pieces which I would like to read again and again.

Definitely everyone wants a friend like themselves, its a difficult task but we sometimes do find them 😊

Lovely read 👏

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

🤗
for a second i thot that u updated ff 😆
but this one is just as beautiful as it was wen u waed me ❤️

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
A/N






Cause I thought I should provide one!😆










This is WHAT I basically did when I was supposed to be spending a date with my books😆











THIS was written quite a long time ago but today being a HOLIDAY for me (), I thought of putting this up😃😆










THIS -- I wont admit that I don't consider THIS as an AsYa OS .. but a little tweak makes it as ONE..😉










Especial 'Thank You' to my Noddle. (who I LOVE so very much Ha Ha) for appreciating THIS right after reading it..😳(haan koi nayi baat nahi hai iss mein😆)





For this OS -- please please please do let me know what you think about it...😆












You see THIS... is SOOOPPEERRR Special for me..😊









@EVERYONE WHO READS THIS : BETTER COMMENT NAHI TOH MAIN ... I WILL STOP WRITING😡😆





❤️ Ankie








p.s. :My exams are still going on.. but I will try to pen down an update to the fiction that I have started (TPKNKB) before I leave for my vacations.. Promises Though..😆

baby u better update ...coz m waiting

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