SaHil OS: In his Arms

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

That was a beautiful story. Can you continue (turn it into an FF)?

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Gayu-Sahil

@Gayu-Sahil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

do continue..write more..i hope in future cvs give this type of scene for sahil..

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@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

This is beautiful story...
& very well written... 👏

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lovebluez

@lovebluez

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

That was an amazing os!! You should write more. 😃

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Dhaneshree

@Dhanesh27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

I absolutely loved it !!! Please write more, I really enjoyed reading this, it was a good break from all the studying😊👏

My mind is occupied with this,it has taken over and I can't think of anything besides SaHil 😳 Lord help me in this exam tomorrow😆

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

This is absolutely beautiful!

I can't believe I'm only reading it now!

I love it!

And so vivid your description on the scene that I can actually picture the entire scene in my head!

Amazing job!!

Please, please PLEASE write s'more!!!!

And thank you for this!!!

Mwahhh

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

For your first attempt, this was written like a professional. It was flawless...your words created the image, the scene, the emotions...it was conveyed beautifully. I think you should write more...you are very talented...I read a lot of fan fiction and this certainly did not bore me. I hope to read more from you and since I do not visit here often, I hope you send me a message the next time you write.

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: arshi_luver

thank you, but loved yours more👏

d'aww man yours was cuter tho <33

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

This is beautiful!👏

Every bit of it...

Keep writing more.

U have got them spot on!👏 Loved the way you got him to turn the lights off...the darkness enhances and hides so much...

Really wonderful!👏

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arshi_luver

@arshi_luver

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

I am truly touched by your guys' comments. I am a health science student but writing has always been my passion. Thought about writing on forum for quite a while but felt that it probably wouldn't match up with all those beautiful OS/FFs/ SSs that you guys write. I am surprised that IF-dazzlerz and IF-Rockerz are liking my work and you guys have totally motivated me to write more; and so just for you I am working on a new OS right now!

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