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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

I am sure Asad will save her on time.

Please update soon.

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laks_vish

@laks_vish

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

God I was at the edge of my seat reading this whole update...you wrote really well dear👏...guess Asad and Ayaan will come and rescue her...Zoya you should have listened to ur mom girl...well please update soon...

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potternerd

@potternerd

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Allah miyan what to do with rihaan..one hell of a character

Could he have informed Abdul about zoya's location ????

Mystery

More mystery

Zoya is drowning😭😭

Hope asad is on his way to save her

Poor zeenat trying to help her daughter but in vain 😕

Btw congratulations for new thread 👏⭐️😊

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Interesting Update Aashna,

Congratulations on the new thread.

Lots happened in one go.

Richard Castle & Kate Beckett - I have watched it every night on weekdays during dinner.😃

And I have watched the rerun like so many times.

I absolutely remember the scene you are talking of. And you did justice to it when you wrote her dream and her mothers forewarning. I could read tension and suspense in that.

Yes thank you for making Zoya mature in this update and your😉 I realized that even when I didn't read the A/N.

The minute you mentioned Attention seeker and Spoilt Brat - I remembered those were my lines to you on my PM.

This update is mesmerizing. Zoya Of course didn't die, but I think it is the death of weak and confused Zoya and what will not evolve with be fiercer and stronger and everyone better watch out.

Enjoyed the chapter, very enticing every sentence of the way.

I can't wait for the story to unfold.

Edited by Perfectionist2 - 11 years ago

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TaiLung

@TaiLung

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

What is happening

cant wait for the next update

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-

O my Juliet...she is a sweetheart..she has got me thinking aswell...and I have some damage control to do as well..cos the last lines didnt quite sit well with Asad's character...so ya...as for it being Shahid or not..I cant say...the culprit still has a few walls he can hide behind..but despite that fact..something major is about to happen..that will change or rather flip the story so ya stay tuned!!!!😉

Sorry I have to add something here.

I know how it feels when someone tells me what the f**k was that update or bloody Asad or stupid Zoya.

But when ever I have given a twist I have readers complaining. But if there is no twist how else do you make a story enticing and magical.

Every time Asad is rude or Zoya is giving him a hard time. My reader go accuser, And it does effect me but if I have put my story out there to judge I cant stop people from speaking their mind.

A good story in a story that shows people real and flawed. And your Asad and Zoya have flaws.

So in short I am trying to say is You are doing a great job. And My comment should not change the way you write a story. Because you have written many more an every one has been a hit.

Thanks for hearing me out. Please go with what you have planned.

You know you can't please them all.😆

Much love and Hugs🤗

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chaithra02

@chaithra02

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

The update was awesome... I am not getting words to describe it.I was literally visualising everything as if I am watching a video.you are a fab writer..

I hope nothing will happen to zoya.Hope asad saves her in time..I am already waiting for next update... Pls update soon

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Awesome update
Zoya thinking abt Asad words
She wanted to run away from his words but that always coming back
Now the new entry who was that
Is Abdul knew that ayaan was there so confused him with other person
Asad followed Abdul.
Zoya fired shahid but thought he was not culprit
Zoya mom tried to stop her even her mind said something wrong but she ignored
I think so rehan is behind this as he asked her where she is & flashback of her mom say no
Hope Asad will reach there & save zoya
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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Anitha

@-Anitha-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

I just recall asad promise to zoya in 12th part.
curious to know the culprit.
Poor zoya. But i know asad will save her.
Beautifully written.congrats for the new thread.

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA
No no no no no no !!
Zoya can't die ...
I know its rihaan from the database issue. ...
But this I didn't knew he would kill her !

In zoya's language . .
" How the F**k can she die ?"
"Where the hell are u mr AAK ?"
Another man was a trap so that ayaan get confused. ..
bas***d Abdul !! 😡

Language my dear 😆 😆

she cant die... she is the main key