EVERYTHING BURNS...Thread V Link in INDEX!! - Page 34

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Interesting Update Aashna,

Congratulations on the new thread.

Lots happened in one go.

Richard Castle & Kate Beckett - I have watched it every night on weekdays during dinner.😃

And I have watched the rerun like so many times.

I absolutely remember the scene you are talking of. And you did justice to it when you wrote her dream and her mothers forewarning. I could read tension and suspense in that.

Yes thank you for making Zoya mature in this update and your😉 I realized that even when I didn't read the A/N.

The minute you mentioned Attention seeker and Spoilt Brat - I remembered those were my lines to you on my PM.

This update is mesmerizing. Zoya Of course didn't die, but I think it is the death of weak and confused Zoya and what will not evolve with be fiercer and stronger and everyone better watch out.

Enjoyed the chapter, very enticing every sentence of the way.

I can't wait for the story to unfold.

Originally posted by: TaiLung

What is happening

cant wait for the next update

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Sorry I have to add something here.

I know how it feels when someone tells me what the f**k was that update or bloody Asad or stupid Zoya.

But when ever I have given a twist I have readers complaining. But if there is no twist how else do you make a story enticing and magical.

Every time Asad is rude or Zoya is giving him a hard time. My reader go accuser, And it does effect me but if I have put my story out there to judge I cant stop people from speaking their mind.

A good story in a story that shows people real and flawed. And your Asad and Zoya have flaws.

So in short I am trying to say is You are doing a great job. And My comment should not change the way you write a story. Because you have written many more an every one has been a hit.

Thanks for hearing me out. Please go with what you have planned.

You know you can't please them all.😆

Much love and Hugs🤗

Originally posted by: chaithra02

The update was awesome... I am not getting words to describe it.I was literally visualising everything as if I am watching a video.you are a fab writer..

I hope nothing will happen to zoya.Hope asad saves her in time..I am already waiting for next update... Pls update soon

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Zoya thinking abt Asad words
She wanted to run away from his words but that always coming back
Now the new entry who was that
Is Abdul knew that ayaan was there so confused him with other person
Asad followed Abdul.
Zoya fired shahid but thought he was not culprit
Zoya mom tried to stop her even her mind said something wrong but she ignored
I think so rehan is behind this as he asked her where she is & flashback of her mom say no
Hope Asad will reach there & save zoya
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

I just recall asad promise to zoya in 12th part.
curious to know the culprit.
Poor zoya. But i know asad will save her.
Beautifully written.congrats for the new thread.

Originally posted by: Linsie

Went she have phone convo.. with Rihan...
he ask where she is...
why she is upset... and of course to talk about shahid
he wants to know if have any other doubt ...

But zoya did.. she did not say...

he distract ..her talking about the time they spend together..
and she got distract with asad's words...
is she going to lose this marriage..
his words hunting her...

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Aashna.. I read it again.. and I doubt Rehaan now.. I seriously hope you have started writing the next chapter.. 😊

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Yaar Devi Aashna is so clever to make us think multiple choices😆

From first i have doubt on Rihaan

Now too i believe its Rehaan behind all this framing

Shahid may be a trap 4 us to mislead

And now one more added Gafoor .Why he become so emotional so soon?

Is it a father's inner feeling that something is going to happen to Zoya or something else?

We had this Abdul guy in the clear picture who done all this,from najma to zoya?

But dont know who is this Abdul they are talking about?

The other guy is a trap to distract Ayaan,cause some what Abdul get to know some body is watching

him.And whole phone conversation of Rehaan & zoya is totally suspecious.

Cause he is trying to get to know about Shahid's dismissel & trying to distract Zoya by mentioning

their time.Seriously if he is a good person then he must be a gay.Otherwise who could ignore such a

beautiful & Sexy lady?

Zoya will not die.Then who will lead the story

Deffenitly our Asad mia will rescue her

May be now we get another shade of Zoya who is mature and clear on her stand

The whole zoya -zeenath convo was mindblowing

Zeenath trying her best to show Zoya the right way but she is so adamant to not to hear her words

From first update Zeenath is trying to make Zoya understand that Rehaan is not good for her

Aaashuuu u must update soon to clear our plight

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm

Your updates are like a thriller movie.

I just visualize everything like a movie

Bravo girl👏👏👏

keep it up👍🏼

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

wonderful update

her mother tried so hard to protect her

yet she couldn't

same as her dream...zoya is drowning

just wish asad saves her in time

there is a lot to be discovered

she can't die like this...

congratz for the new thread

can't wait to read more

update soon.. fast..

i'm getting restless to read the next one

thanks for the PM