||~ The Sunshine of My life #4 AsYa FF ~||Part37 PG130 15/06/14 - Page 77

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesummm part
u described so beautifully zoya's fear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm update.
Superb one
luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
Waiting 4 d nxt part.
Cont asap.
T.c.
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Posted: 11 years ago

I'm glad to see there love story moving at a nice pace, both seem to be getting physically and emotionally cozy with each other,

Zoya was so sweet with the Nikaah, and it makes sense as to why she wanted to give him some time but I loved the way Asad responded to her, it was the perfect thing to say at that time,

I don't know whether Zoya's father's identity will be revealed in this story, but I knid of want it to, when the revelation will be out in the open then will really get to see how much Asad loves her,

Anyways loved the update continue soonπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: laks_vish

Too many kisses and beautiful confession from Asad... Loved it..but want to know why Zoya does not want to find her Abu?


She said na that she fears something or the else keeps happening when she tries approaching the truth and also because being a parent herself she feels that how could a father manage to leave her alone and never come and find her? She had been thinking from a daughters Pov till now, but now thinks from a parent's view.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SimplySmile


I'm glad to see there love story moving at a nice pace, both seem to be getting physically and emotionally cozy with each other,

Zoya was so sweet with the Nikaah, and it makes sense as to why she wanted to give him some time but I loved the way Asad responded to her, it was the perfect thing to say at that time,

I don't know whether Zoya's father's identity will be revealed in this story, but I knid of want it to, when the revelation will be out in the open then will really get to see how much Asad loves her,

Anyways loved the update continue soonπŸ˜ƒ


I am glad you like the pace.. I am consciously trying to take their relation ahead in a gradual way. The way I would probably want to see it.

The identity will be revealed, it ties every loose end the story, and needs to come out to test the two.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...

the growing .. understanding


but zoya wants to stop...

asad want zoya to find her past...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Aawww cutteee update!!😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

A chapter of evolvement! ⭐️


"The last few days had been beautiful. It seemed as if every new day bought a new change in their relation, every moment they spent bringing them closer, emotionally and even physically for that matter. She felt them both getting dependent on each other, working, thinking and talking in sync. They tried spending every moment they had with the other, with Aahana."


The narration at the beginning was pertinent and remarkable. From Zoya's introspection of what she perceived a "probable fairytale life" to the "realism of her fairytale life", the "practicality of her Prince charming and their fairytale (Asad and their relationship)" along with her realization and recognition of the family she has also acquired and the life they have and shall build together - really enchanting.


" What do I to make you feel better Asad?"


"Be with me always!"


The attachment and understanding between them is really distinguished, Zoya always knew Asad better than he knew himself and he always tried to illustrate her fears and concerns as misplaced in an attempt to protect her and his family (their basic characters from the show) and vice verse - which is incredible and I say this with conviction because it holds absolute relevance to reality and human nature, I have witnessed this within my parents relationship(the desire to protect, shield and obsess over your other half and family).


"Shut up Zoya! There is nothing of that sort. In fact just the thought of you two sleeping together makes me feel so peaceful , I know she's safer with you then she is with me, so dare you say that again, plus with Aahana being there I have more excuses to come into your room.."


I loved his assurance and tease. ❀️ That entire scene was beautiful, the kisses, hugs and comfort.


Enjoying AsYa and their Sunshine spending quality time, their moments and just living their fantasy - Splendid(hope theses a great deal to still arrive).


Zoya's anxious, concerned and apprehensive state of mind after Asad left home was endearing - Marriage is now just a formality to this relationship. ❀️

Asad returning home and the remaining chapter:


Zoya falling asleep on the dining table awaiting Asad's return, Asad perplexed at finding her there and their reaction and consequence that followed was outstanding. Great job on the natural and realistic sentiment. πŸ‘


"And not just this.. but I even thought that .. that it's only been a year since Ayesha passed away.. Kya aap itni jaldi nikaah karna chahenge.. you loved her Asad.."


Zoya Zoya Zoya - This is indeed Zoya, the selfless, liberated soul. In spite of considering righteousness and integrity I cannot relate to this simply because I haven't fallen in love yet. This is the phenomenon of sheer love.


Loved the transition of AsYa's relationship emotional, physical and spiritual. The comfort level, telepathy and reassurance is amazing - The soul connection. ❀️


"Ayesha loved me Zoya.. but I could never love her back. I respected her as family, felt affection for her as a friend, and Aahana's conception made me come so close to her, that I thought I had fallen in love..."

"It's when I met you, befriended you and fell in love with you that I realized what love really was.. Love doesn't happen when we're expecting it to, when we just force our self to feel it.. it just happens. And it just happened Zoya..."

I am saying these things to you for two reasons.. One, because I want you to know that you're my first love Zoya.. What I felt for Ayesha was never love.. and I am not saying this today because we're together, and I don't want you to feel secondary... But because this is something I realized myself and I want you to know.."

" Because what I feel for you, I've never felt for anyone else..I don't mean to undermine Ayesha and my relation or our marriage and friendship. She'll always be the woman who helped me rise above myself, who was my first and only friend until you came along... she was my confidant, my family and all that I needed to have.. But you're the one I want, I need and I am dying to be with Zoya..."


Leaving my personal opinion on another tangent, because I believe in fairytales (first and only love) yet life undoubtedly isn't one. Introspects of eternal love and marriage, I passionately believe and desire in gracing it precisely at initially opportunity and ensuring its everlasting, with absolute reverence to dissimilar and diverse thought processes, opinions, beliefs, the characters of this fiction and you the author.


I respect you the author for every dialogue Asad delivered in the last fraction of this chapter, especially the quoted, highlighted speech. A principled, righteous, honorable and perfect gentleman. - So true to his personality. πŸ‘


Ayesha was a focus that considered necessary respect within the fiction and its narrative which AsYa especially Asad needed to consider in her honor and in reverence of her been Aahana's biological mother above every other relation and they both were superlative at this juncture, I applauded you for the objective and conclusion of that conversation. ⭐️

Glad Ayesha has finally been laid to rest for now, not sure how you would take this further, with Aahana's privilege and entitlement to the truth of her biological mother in the upcoming OS series, though it shouldn't reoccur as a major focus because of the time frame of her death - I would be delighted to assume she was a medium used to deliver an angel to AsYa with all due respect to her.


"I love you so much Asad, so so much.." she said through her tears hugging him with all her might, touched beyond words at all that he had said..Feeling so needed, so wanted and so special.


In regard to everything Asad said that was simply poignant and delightful. The cheerful and humorous moment talking about Aahana and the proposal afterwards was charming. 😎



"But he wasn't going to let her sacrifice her lifelong dream in fear of something they weren't sure of. She had come here to find her Abu and even if she was willing to let go.. he wasn't. He wanted her to have a complete life. Her family, her love, her daughter, but her roots as well. He would find her Abu and that too before their nikaah."


Well that's Mr.Khan at his best! I just want this family to live in the happiness they deserve. ☺️


P.S The proposal involves a dress as a gift. πŸ˜› Cream I think it was if I'm not delusional. 🀣


P.S.S There was so much more I wanted to quote. 😳 This got ridiculously long.


P.S.S.S Asad confessed Zoya was his first and only love. - Yay! Adored everything he said to her in that moment about falling in love with her and its repercussions. Love Love Love this imperfectly perfect specimen ☺️


P.S.S.S.S Now that the police investigation is underway, Ayesha and marriage apprehension dealt with until Asad opens the Pandora box of whose my sweethearts Bu, can we have a chapter of pure bliss with AsYa and the Sunshine of their life? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago

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