||~ The Sunshine of My life #4 AsYa FF ~||Part37 PG130 15/06/14 - Page 39

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeYourself

Hi Ankita..


i just read the last two updates together...

and i must tell you that, as much as you enjoyed writing them, i enjoyed more reading them!! 😛

They were just fantastic!!!! 👏

The attack on Zoya, Asad's worry for Aanu and her 'Mi' and then His awesome confession followed by Hers--- IT WAS JUST PERFECT!!!!

Well done buddy.. keep up with your good work 👏


Thanks so much I am glad you like the update. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Thank u so much Ankie for this beautiful ,amazing ,wonderful update,

I love it to the core
Its mindblowing yaar
Everything was simply superb
The confession,the care,the silly bickerings everything was amazing
Pls pls update soon
Thanks for pm


Thanks dear <3 glad you like the update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rads73937

Awww it was so sweet.

Finally they confessed.
Aanu got her Mi and Bu.
Wow...
Continue soon.
Pre cap looks interesting.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.


Thanks so much 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanu3579

wht asad felt sitting on tht hospital chair.. outside zoya's room... with aahana sleeping somewhr else... i cant even imagine...

family me kisi ka chota sa procedure bhi ho to chinta hoti hai... n here he was abt to lose his angels... n has a history of this kind of scares too...
he really is a strong man to b able to stay in control in tht situation... evident by the way he reacted to the ph call... the way he didnt break down or visibly panic, or lose control till he found out all details...
he cud rationally decide wht needs to b done first..
planning everythg, with ayaan, n his ammi..

the way he needs reassurance of hving his daughter safe with his... is sthg i can understand... i hv a kid... n even the thot of her getting hurt tends to force me to crush her to me.. fir yahan to itna kuch ho gaya...

the confession was too too gd.. one of the few confessions tht i hv read n i wud nt forget easily :) :) ... it was emotional... expressing everythg they felt in words... ensuring it is understood by the other... just the way they feel it..
n simultaneously... nt too heavy... keeping it fun n light too with those cute teasing remarks in it :) :)

n the fight in the end... was soo soo natural to them... it was just .. asad-zoya being themselves... easily slipping into their normal routine.. their own unique way of showing love :) :)

btw... i think asad deserves to visit NY... how abt a honeymoon trip 😉

the whole scene with aahana... shows how even tht little a child gets concerned... she probably wanted to ensure tht her ammi is safe, as much as she wanted to seek safe assurance in her arms...
n i m sure she wud soon start treating asad-zoya fights as lullaby 😆

luking fwd to the next one :) :)


PS:: forgot to mention... like any mother... zoya, though she is already very strong ... yet she did fight with all her might fr the safety of her baby...
she might nt hv given birth to her... bt she in all possible sense is far more a mother to aahana than anyone else can ever b...
beautiful relationship she shares with aahana... :)


Asad supressed his fears, because he knew that there was nothing more important than being with his family, telling her about his love before it was too late. He can deal with details much later.
He was about to lose Aahana again, a kidnapping has happened once before too.. he pushed it away but now when he sits to think about it.. he'll worry. Only this time he isn't alone, Zoya is with him.

Asad and Zoya may take ages to understand and accept feelings, but once they have they're expressive.. that is what I've understood about them 😊

And yes you're not a mother only when you give birth, some relations go beyond that. Zoya and Aahana's is one of them.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

awww.

cuteness overloaded.
so adorable.
beautifully written
n their confession was amazing.
lots of love for my cutie pie aanu
plz update soon


Thanks so much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rajsmi

Finally the truth is out from both sides...love,love!


Glad you like it..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

OMG Ankitha... Two lovely chapters to read.. cool and that too in 2 days.. Thank you so very much...😊

Coming to the updates...

Asad was feeling so relieved after he realized his love for Zoya but still he allowed Zoya to relax and not force himself ... Later he realized her nightmares under stress and knowing that she was stressed out because of him hurt him a lot.. beautiful scene .. 😊

I remembered QH 1 .. how Dilshad made Asad realize his love but Zoya kept thinking that it was to cancel the wedding and running away.. I agree we are so emotional and try to run away from our problems ...

He went crazy to know his two most important people went missing .. and who is the one trying to kidnap Aanu... ?? I guess it is something to do with the attack which zoya faced in the orphanage... but true to his words, Asad will be their protector...

He prayed fiercely to the almighty to protect his Zoya.. for her to gain consciousness so that he could cry in her arms...

These lines were awsome...
The way Asad kept telling her how miserable he felt seeing her in that situation was again beautifully written...
Zoya blurted out how she loved him and his family and how she was Aanu's ammi was cool .. and when he suggested that they get married .. she felt it was right for the sake of Aanu.. bechari zoya.. so much she loves him and Aanu...😊

Sirf Aanu keliye rukhogi.. mereliye nahin.. 👏👏

Lovely confession.. and she requested him to sleep next to him.. great...and Aanu woke up at that time .. loved to see how Aanu reacted seeing Zoya safe .. cool...

Zoya's confession back in Asad style.. again great thought over there and ver y nicely written...
and poor Aanu dozzed off unable to stare at them.. 👏👏👏



No Zoya didn't blurt out nor did Asad. After almost fatal accidents like these, a person realizes how life is so unpredictable and should not be wasted in running away but just facing the truth head on.. which I will explain about Asad and Zoya in the next update. Zoya wanted him to know what she wanted, even though she wasn't sure what his reaction would be. Asad too did not want to waste time, lest anything else happened again and his feelings would be left unsaid.

Thanks so much dear, I am so so glad you appreciate it 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amin21

Wow finally we got what we were waiting for .

Really lovely & worth waiting confession .
Zoya asks asad to wait longer & after 5 mins she confesses ?
Now that's like real zoya wala style .
Just love it .
Thank you ankith for such a cute update yaar .


She was only teasing him, but when she saw Aahana in her arms and Asad by her side, like a complete family, she didn't think there was a better time to confess 😆

Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinita459

Okay Ankita I must you gave me a shock 😲
I didn't think they'll confess so soon 😆
Especially Asad:) I though he'll he stuck with "woh actually' for a long time.
This was a pleasant surprise 😊
Absolutely beautiful and brilliantly written 👏
Looking forward to upcoming romantic moments 😳


Really? I thought it was pretty predictable that he would confess soon.. and after such a incident the feelings just had to be laid out from both ends. The fear of losing loved ones make us do a lot of things unexpectedly 😊

Thanks so much dear 😳

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