||~ The Sunshine of My life #4 AsYa FF ~||Part37 PG130 15/06/14

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: volatile

This update reminded me of the days when Asad was trying to confess his feelings to Zoya on the show...and she kept running away from him cos she thought he was gonna say something she didnt want to hear. The same thing happened here, except your version was alot faster and better! 😆

Loved the fact that Asad was trying to give Zoya some space, it shows that he is always gonna think about her above anything else...sigh, we need more men like him around.

And how can I forget Silly Ammi? Nice nickname for Zoya given by Asad for a change!

LOL that bit from QH didn't even cross my mind.. but its their basic characteristic isn't it.. running away? 😆 Both of them.. And when they realize.. it's after some huge incident.. Unknowingly just happened... here too..

I would have made them confess their love then and there. But I had to push it one update because that accident was necessary for my narrative and for their own feelings.

And yes he wanted to give her space.. He was guilty of hurting her.. so all he could do was give her what she pleaded for.

Thanks so much for commenting dear 😊

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scarletmalik

@scarletmalik

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#252

awsome update😊

loved it❤️

who is trying to harm aanu?

update soon

thnx 4r pm

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

nice update
so the confession and stopping silly ammi is delayed
zoya nightmare is about asad and we hear sweetheart again
oh she is scared he leaves her
omg zoya and aahana missing
asad is pissed if he wanted to really reach him she would have
said it is about aahana😡
he has o be angry to hide his pained
so zoya is injured and in hospital someone was trying to grab aahana again
oh asad is scared and he is mad he didnt she her loved he had to be told
about how she feels
he cant wait for hr to wake up so he could shower her with love
continue soon

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Wow, beautiful, wondering who this biker is, why was he after Zoe and sunshine... I really hope you get these two together in the next chapter.. Please update soon.. eagerly waiting..

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blessing-beauty

@blessing-beauty

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#255

ANKUUU <3

Thankuu sooo much for updating this fast <3 I shall bug u moreee from noww on muahahahahhahaa😈🥳😈

coming to the updateee mereko pata tha they wont confess int his part😛 Good to see Asad giving space to Zoya for causing the pains unintentionally :( butt whooo trieddd to harm Aahana :O and Zoya landed in hospital :| cant wait to rerad moreee :| wanna readdd next part soon soon super sooonnn😈 this update was amazing as usual <3

Edited by blessing-beauty - 11 years ago

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

I had to make you guys wait another update :( because that bike accident needed to come in before the confession for a lot of reasons. I am glad you still liked the update.. didn't expect that😊

Thanks again😃shall try updating soon. already writing.

already writing...thank u so much...
I knew it.. confession vl nt b there in this update..my 6th sense 😆 😆 ..n tbh I know how much asad loves Zoya ...without saying ilu 2 her he did everything fr her...his actions speak..no need of words..I enjoyed d update coz now Zoe is in hospital n v can c world's best caring lover.. 😉 n ya romantic update on d way now 🥳 😳

Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

The Preview was true to QH, it portrayed the essence of the shows Promo's. 😆

Coming to the chapter:

Zoya's reaction to Asad's presence in her bedroom, as you said was true to basic human nature. - Great job there! 👏 Asad was such a sweetheart here - character growth and development amazing. Poor Zoya this women has been broken, thankfully it ends there. 😃

"...you don't need to be sweetheart..."

From the first time he referred to her as "sweetheart", it had always stood out, at least for me considering his basic characteristics. ❤️

Asad and Dilshad as always were amazing together. The coolest Mom on Indian Television and its astounding how so many writers get her character perfect in their writing - Absolute justice! ⭐️

Whatever the higher purpose of the attempted kidnapping maybe, I'm glad Asad had another opportunity to witness the extent of Zoya's love for him and Aahana; and its safe to say his entire family.

Could Aahana's attempted kidnapping and assailant be related to Zoya's past, the orphanage and storeroom incident - I guess time will tell.

"...for her to gain consciousness so that he could cry in her arms and tell her how much he loved her..."

A hospital confession, aren't you a readers writer!

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago

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SleepingBeauty.

@SleepingBeauty.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Omg such a nail biting update this was :| I hope Zoya is able to give atleast one chance before she leaves and somewhere I have a feeling that moment is gonna be in the hospital before she gets discharged ;) ;)

I lovee the way u describe Asad and zoya ki feelings. Thats one thing which is very difficult for the writer to be unbiased.

Cant wait to see what happens next :D Its just getting interesting update by update :|